English fixes that accumulated over the past yearenglishfix

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Note: halin was reduced from 3h to 15mins to match serverdata

2 files changed, 19 insertions, 19 deletions

diff --git a/items.xml b/items.xml
index 9cdc2dd6..8ff756b8 100644
--- a/items.xml
+++ b/items.xml
@@ -4128,7 +4128,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are set up by itemcolors.xml.
 	<item id="1801"
 		image="equipment/feet/assassinboots.png"
 		name="Assassin Boots"
-		description="Crudely assembled footwear not for comfort nor fashion."
+		description="Crudely assembled footwear neither for comfort nor fashion."
 		maxhp="52"
 		defense="24"
 		level="82"
@@ -4470,7 +4470,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are set up by itemcolors.xml.
 	<item id="2007"
 		image="equipment/hands/cottongloves.png|W:#87876c,bbc39c,edf4e1,ffffff"
 		name="%Color% Silk Gloves"
-		description="Soft and graceful %Color% silk gloves that doesn't restrain magic."
+		description="Soft and graceful %Color% silk gloves that do not interfere with magic."
 		mattack="12"
 		maxmp="10"
 		sprecovery="10"
diff --git a/quests.xml b/quests.xml
index 28495e5c..76f45990 100644
--- a/quests.xml
+++ b/quests.xml
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2018 TMW2: Moubootaur Legends -->
 		</quest>
 		<quest name="★ - Who Am I?" group="General" incomplete="7">
 			<name>In Seek Of True Identity</name>
-			<text>Halinarzo's Librarian asked for three hours.</text>
+			<text>Halinarzo's Librarian asked for fifteen minutes.</text>
 			<text>I should do some bandit extermination on the canyon meanwhile.</text>
 			<text></text>
 		</quest>
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2018 TMW2: Moubootaur Legends -->
 	<var id="31">
 		<quest name="Saxso Chest" group="Candor" complete="1">
 			<name>Saxso Chest</name>
-			<text>I managed to open the chest on Saxso's house.</text>
+			<text>I managed to open the chest in Saxso's house.</text>
 			<text>Getting the key from the Saxso Ghost took me some time.</text>
 			<text></text>
 			<coordinates x="31" y="79">Candor Island, Saxso's House.</coordinates>
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2018 TMW2: Moubootaur Legends -->
 		</quest>
 		<quest name="Tolchi's Request" group="Candor" complete="3">
 			<name>Tolchi's Request</name>
-			<text>I helped Tolchi with her materials needs.</text>
+			<text>I helped Tolchi with the materials she needed.</text>
 			<text></text>
 			<questgiver>Tolchi</questgiver>
 			<coordinates x="25" y="41">Candor Island, Armor Shop. (25,41)</coordinates>
@@ -2327,18 +2327,18 @@ Copyright (C) 2018 TMW2: Moubootaur Legends -->
 
 	<!-- NIVALIS QUESTS -->
 	<var id="111">
-		<quest name="Someone On The Well" group="Nivalis" incomplete="1">
-			<name>Someone On The Well</name>
-			<text>Someone fell on the well, near Nivalis.</text>
-			<text>I should ask somebody for help, but whom...?</text>
+		<quest name="Somebody In The Well" group="Nivalis" incomplete="1">
+			<name>Somebody in the Well</name>
+			<text>Somebody fell into the well, near Nivalis.</text>
+			<text>I should ask someone for help, but who...?</text>
 			<text></text>
 			<questgiver>???</questgiver>
 			<coordinates x="110" y="101">Winterlands.</coordinates>
 		</quest>
-		<quest name="Someone On The Well" group="Nivalis" complete="2">
-			<name>Someone On The Well</name>
+		<quest name="Somebody In The Well" group="Nivalis" complete="2">
+			<name>Somebody in the Well</name>
 			<text>I asked Miler to get that person out of the hole they've struck themselves into.</text>
-			<text>I wonder who was that person, anyway?</text>
+			<text>I wonder who that person was, anyway?</text>
 			<text></text>
 			<questgiver>???</questgiver>
 			<coordinates x="110" y="101">Winterlands.</coordinates>
@@ -3265,9 +3265,9 @@ The following quests are missing:
 	<var id="275">
 		<quest name="Call Of Dusty" group="LoF Village" complete="1">
 			<name>Call Of Dusty</name>
-			<text>I'm supposed to kill some boss or other on a desert canyon.</text>
-			<text>They stole pyndragon's gunstaffs, so they're dangerous.</text>
-			<text>Wasn't that enough, it is a timed quest, and it is party PVP.</text>
+			<text>I'm supposed to kill some boss in a desert canyon.</text>
+			<text>They stole pyndragon's gunstaves, so they're dangerous.</text>
+			<text>Wasn't that enough, it is a timed quest, and it is a party PVP area.</text>
 			<text></text>
 			<text>The challenges starts hourly, when the minute clock reaches the zero.</text>
 			<text>They're over when the minute clock reaches fifteen regardless of a winner.</text>
@@ -3281,8 +3281,8 @@ The following quests are missing:
 	<var id="276">
 		<quest name="Heroes Hold" group="LoF Village" incomplete="1">
 			<name>Heroes Hold</name>
-			<text>I accepted to seek for DUSTMAN's men, and he open the Heroes Hold for me.</text>
-			<text>The Heroes Hold is a high level area for the best of best players.</text>
+			<text>I accepted to seek for DUSTMAN's men, and he will open the Heroes Hold for me.</text>
+			<text>The Heroes Hold is a high level area for the best of the best players.</text>
 			<text>In other words: for heroes. Like myself, I hope.</text>
 			<text></text>
 			<questgiver>Colonel DUSTMAN</questgiver>
@@ -3291,8 +3291,8 @@ The following quests are missing:
 		</quest>
 		<quest name="Heroes Hold" group="LoF Village" complete="2">
 			<name>Heroes Hold</name>
-			<text>I accepted to seek for DUSTMAN's men, and he open the Heroes Hold for me.</text>
-			<text>The Heroes Hold is a high level area for the best of best players.</text>
+			<text>I accepted to seek for DUSTMAN's men, and he will open the Heroes Hold for me.</text>
+			<text>The Heroes Hold is a high level area for the best of the best players.</text>
 			<text>In other words: for heroes. Like myself, I hope.</text>
 			<text></text>
 			<questgiver>Colonel DUSTMAN</questgiver>