From 9a167af407339eabff48a47b4615c5784a83ea18 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Fedja Beader Date: Wed, 12 Jun 2024 23:36:07 +0200 Subject: English fixes that accumulated over the past year Disclaimer: not a native speaker Note: halin was reduced from 3h to 15mins to match serverdata --- items.xml | 4 ++-- quests.xml | 34 +++++++++++++++++----------------- 2 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-) diff --git a/items.xml b/items.xml index 9cdc2dd6..8ff756b8 100644 --- a/items.xml +++ b/items.xml @@ -4128,7 +4128,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are set up by itemcolors.xml. In Seek Of True Identity - Halinarzo's Librarian asked for three hours. + Halinarzo's Librarian asked for fifteen minutes. I should do some bandit extermination on the canyon meanwhile. @@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2018 TMW2: Moubootaur Legends --> Saxso Chest - I managed to open the chest on Saxso's house. + I managed to open the chest in Saxso's house. Getting the key from the Saxso Ghost took me some time. Candor Island, Saxso's House. @@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2018 TMW2: Moubootaur Legends --> Tolchi's Request - I helped Tolchi with her materials needs. + I helped Tolchi with the materials she needed. Tolchi Candor Island, Armor Shop. (25,41) @@ -2327,18 +2327,18 @@ Copyright (C) 2018 TMW2: Moubootaur Legends --> - - Someone On The Well - Someone fell on the well, near Nivalis. - I should ask somebody for help, but whom...? + + Somebody in the Well + Somebody fell into the well, near Nivalis. + I should ask someone for help, but who...? ??? Winterlands. - - Someone On The Well + + Somebody in the Well I asked Miler to get that person out of the hole they've struck themselves into. - I wonder who was that person, anyway? + I wonder who that person was, anyway? ??? Winterlands. @@ -3265,9 +3265,9 @@ The following quests are missing: Call Of Dusty - I'm supposed to kill some boss or other on a desert canyon. - They stole pyndragon's gunstaffs, so they're dangerous. - Wasn't that enough, it is a timed quest, and it is party PVP. + I'm supposed to kill some boss in a desert canyon. + They stole pyndragon's gunstaves, so they're dangerous. + Wasn't that enough, it is a timed quest, and it is a party PVP area. The challenges starts hourly, when the minute clock reaches the zero. They're over when the minute clock reaches fifteen regardless of a winner. @@ -3281,8 +3281,8 @@ The following quests are missing: Heroes Hold - I accepted to seek for DUSTMAN's men, and he open the Heroes Hold for me. - The Heroes Hold is a high level area for the best of best players. + I accepted to seek for DUSTMAN's men, and he will open the Heroes Hold for me. + The Heroes Hold is a high level area for the best of the best players. In other words: for heroes. Like myself, I hope. Colonel DUSTMAN @@ -3291,8 +3291,8 @@ The following quests are missing: Heroes Hold - I accepted to seek for DUSTMAN's men, and he open the Heroes Hold for me. - The Heroes Hold is a high level area for the best of best players. + I accepted to seek for DUSTMAN's men, and he will open the Heroes Hold for me. + The Heroes Hold is a high level area for the best of the best players. In other words: for heroes. Like myself, I hope. Colonel DUSTMAN -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2