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author | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-06 14:11:08 -0500 |
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committer | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-06 14:11:58 -0500 |
commit | a1cfd4e6afff78f777872f49f8e8faacbe6f2e60 (patch) | |
tree | 897cb423f864a0ddc6794840a51f7e95368b6504 /npc/001-2-19/lloyd.txt | |
parent | 13b4f7c78043172315d64306c20552530ffcb43b (diff) | |
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Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes and reworded some dialogue for clarity.
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diff --git a/npc/001-2-19/lloyd.txt b/npc/001-2-19/lloyd.txt index f39e24e8..7106909a 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-19/lloyd.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-19/lloyd.txt @@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ function enora_quest { speech 5, - l("Black iron... That is a very specific request that you got me!"), - l("Let me check on my inventory book..."), + l("Black iron... That is a very specific request that you have for me!"), + l("Let me check in my inventory book..."), l("..."), l("Yes, I have some! \"5x Black Iron Ingots\""), l("Is this for you or somebody else? Because you need to be registered to obtain these materials."); @@ -38,10 +38,10 @@ break; case 2: speech 1, - l("Chelios... He is part of the blacksmith house, is not he?"), + l("Chelios... He is part of the blacksmith house, is he not?"), l("Since Don settled in Artis he and his band refused to register to the Merchant Guild."), - l("I will close my eyes for once, but only because it is your first time asking for something!"), - l("Sometimes a good merchant need to reach out first. It's on the house, give Chelios my regards!"); + l("I will close my eyes for once, but only because it's your first time asking for something!"), + l("Sometimes a good merchant needs to reach out first. It's on the house, give Chelios my regards!"); emotion 7; break; } @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ function first_visit { speech 4, l("Welcome!"), - l("My name is Lloyd, I am a representant of the Merchant Guild of Artis."); + l("My name is Lloyd, I am a representative of the Merchant Guild of Artis."); select (l("My name is @@...", strcharinfo(0))); @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ l("\"@@\", I like this name!", strcharinfo(0)), l("Oh, wait a second..."); narrator 4, - l("Lloyd is searching something on his book."); + l("Lloyd is searching something in his book."); speech 4, l("I see."), l("You are new around here, right?"); @@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if (Zeny < .@price) { speech 4, - l("You do not seem to have enough money on yourself, come back later!"); + l("You do not seem to have enough money, come back later!"); } else { @@ -125,16 +125,16 @@ function paper_to_deliver { speech 5, - l("Now that you bring up that topic, that remind me of something..."), - l("Not later than today there was this young seller named Fexil that passed by here."), - l("He asked to lend some money and a place to open his store, I think that he asked for a place on the merchant square on the south-west of the city..."), + l("Now that you bring up that topic, that reminds me of something..."), + l("Earlier today there was this young seller named Fexil that passed by here."), + l("He asked to lend some money and a place to open his store, I think that he asked for a place on the merchant squares on the south-west of the city..."), l("Anyway, he forgot his permit when he left the building."), l("Could you bring it to him?"); do { .@q = select (l("Ok, I will bring it to him."), - l("I need more informations first."), + l("I need more information first."), l("I don't have the time.")); switch (.@q) { @@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ break; case 2: speech 5, - l("You should look a seller named Fexil around the merchant square."), + l("You should look for a seller named Fexil around the merchant square."), l("Ask other merchants, they might know where he is."); break; case 3: @@ -247,10 +247,10 @@ .@enora = getq (ArtisQuests_Enora); menuint rif (.@enora == 2, l("I'm searching some black iron ingots.")), 0, - l("I would like to deposit some item."), 1, - l("I would like to manage my money."), 2, + l("I would like to store some items."), 1, + l("I would like to deposit some money."), 2, l("What is this guild for?"), 3, - l("The guild has any work for me?"), 4, + l("Does the guild has any work for me right now?"), 4, l("Bye."), 5; switch (@menuret) |