Because of translations, reworked several sentences in scripts, added missing words and M/F options.

13 files changed, 24 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/npc/001-1/beuss.txt b/npc/001-1/beuss.txt
index 9fab3b70..e07c0125 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/beuss.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/beuss.txt
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 // Authors:
 //    Reid
 // Description:
-//    Angry member of the legion of Aemil.
+//    Angry member of the Legion of Aemil.
 
 001-1,45,48,0	script	Beuss	NPC_BEUSS,{
     stopnpctimer;
diff --git a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt
index 888eb4ae..c87e05f6 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
                 break;
             case 2:
                 speech 5,
-                    l("I'll be here, come back when you're ready.");
+                    lg("I'll be here, come back when you'll be ready.");
 
                 return;
         }
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
     do
     {
         .@enora = getq (ArtisQuests_Enora);
-        menuint rif (.@enora == 1, l("I came to retrieve a package for Enora.")), 1,
+        menuint rif (.@enora == 1, lg("I came to retrieve a package for Enora.")), 1,
                 rif (.@enora == 3, l("I have your black iron.")), 2,
                 rif (.@enora >= 2, l("Where is the Merchant Guild?")), 3,
                 l("What is this building?"), 4,
diff --git a/npc/001-1/cookiemaster.txt b/npc/001-1/cookiemaster.txt
index c3498028..118d7377 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/cookiemaster.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/cookiemaster.txt
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ L_LostCookie:
     next;
     mesq l("Wait a minute, where's the cookie I gave you?");
     next;
-    mesq l("I'm talking about the cookie in which I put all my love inside!");
+    mesq l("I'm talking about the cookie inside which I put all my love!");
     next;
     mesq l("The best, the wonderful, the most choice cookie among all others, the...");
     next;
diff --git a/npc/001-1/devis.txt b/npc/001-1/devis.txt
index d8959296..bcdc0d49 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/devis.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/devis.txt
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
         if (.@enora == 0)
         {
             speech
-                l("Enora from the Legion of Aemil has been warned that you were aboard."),
+                l("Enora, from the Legion of Aemil, has been warned that you were aboard."),
                 l("She is waiting for you on the dock.");
 
             return;
diff --git a/npc/001-1/elmo.txt b/npc/001-1/elmo.txt
index 92b680ed..694da5b1 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/elmo.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/elmo.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
 001-1,185,107,0	script	Elmo#001-1	NPC_ELMO_ARTIS,{
     speech
         l("Oh hey!"),
-        l("If you feel bored or anxious, you can always ask some of the people around Artis if they need any help.. It's better than running around in circles");
+        lg("If you feel bored or anxious, you can always ask some of the people around Artis if they need your help.");
+        lg("It's better than running around in circles doing nothing.");
 
     close;
 
diff --git a/npc/001-1/enora.txt b/npc/001-1/enora.txt
index d37b85cd..eb19134b 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/enora.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/enora.txt
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 
     function enora_hill {
         speech 5,
-            l("Go north from here to the dock warehouse, cross the bridge to the west side of the river, continue north until you get to a second bridge, cross it to the east side of the river."),
+            l("Go north from here until you to the dock warehouse, cross the bridge to the west side of the canal, continue north until you reach another bridge then cross it to the east side of the canal."),
             l("You should arrive at a park with a hill nearby.");
 
         return;
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
 
         speech 4,
             l("I asked Don our blacksmith to prepare a black iron sword for morning, he should be done by now."),
-            l("Go to meet him, and return me the package, it's an easy task."),
+            l("Go meet him, and return me the package, it's an easy task."),
             l("You will be able to find Don's house in the west of this city, it's the first house just after left bridge, you can't miss it!"),
             l("A young apprentice called Chelios might be waiting outside, speak to him, and return the present to me.");
             emotion E_HAPPY;
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@
             l("Oh yes, I have one last errand for you, Q'Pid in the market sells potions."),
             l("It has been some days now since I asked her for a box of @@s, but she hasn't delivered anything yet.", getitemlink (PiberriesInfusion)),
             l("Please try to figure out what went wrong with this order and bring me these potions."),
-            l("You will be able to find her in the market on the south-east of Artis.");
+            l("You will be able to find her in the market on the south-west of Artis.");
 
         setq ArtisQuests_Enora, 7;
         enora_reward (40, 125);
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@
                 break;
             case 2:
                 speech 5,
-                    l("Follow up-stream, and cross the river twice with the two bridges on the north."),
+                    l("Follow the up-stream and cross the canal twice using the two bridges north from here."),
                     l("The hill is located on the north-east of Artis.");
                 break;
         }
@@ -354,8 +354,8 @@
     {
         speech 4,
             l("Hey! You must be @@.", strcharinfo(0)),
-            l("Julia has told me how they found you at sea, on a raft with a logo of--"),
-            l("I mean LOG! Made of log!"),
+            lg("Julia told me how they found you in the sea, on a raft with a logo of..."),
+            l("...I mean log! Made of log!"),
             l("I also heard you lost all your memories? That's a shame."),
             l("I'm sure you would have some interesting stories to tell!");
     }
diff --git a/npc/001-1/juscare.txt b/npc/001-1/juscare.txt
index 0afaa8ef..2dabc630 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/juscare.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/juscare.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //    Reid
 //    Travolta
 // Description:
-//    Juscare, walking NPC of the legion of Aemil on the right part of the Agora of Artis.
+//    Juscare, walking NPC of the Legion of Aemil on the right part of the Agora of Artis.
 
 001-1,118,92,0	script	Juscare#001-1	NPC_HUMAN_MALE_LEGION_ARTIS,{
 
diff --git a/npc/001-1/manhole.txt b/npc/001-1/manhole.txt
index cc977e8c..6d9ab023 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/manhole.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/manhole.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
     if (getq(ArtisQuests_MonaDad) == 1)
     {
-        narrator l("You hear some creeping and crawling sounds from downstairs.");
+        narrator l("You hear some creeping and crawling sounds from the murkiness below.");
     }
 
     close;
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ OnInit:
 
     if (getq(ArtisQuests_MonaDad) == 1)
     {
-        narrator l("You hear some creeping and crawling sounds from downstairs.");
+        narrator l("You hear some creeping and crawling sounds from the murkiness below.");
     }
 
     close;
diff --git a/npc/001-1/nalkri.txt b/npc/001-1/nalkri.txt
index 6e8f0101..e155a8a8 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/nalkri.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/nalkri.txt
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 // Author:
 //    Reid
 // Description:
-//    Nalkri, walking NPC of the legion of Aemil on the west part of Artis.
+//    Nalkri, walking NPC of the Legion of Aemil on the west part of Artis.
 
 001-1,35,84,0	script	Nalkri#001-1	NPC_DEMON_MALE_LEGION_ARTIS,{
     npctalk3 l("Stay clear.");
diff --git a/npc/001-1/qonan.txt b/npc/001-1/qonan.txt
index 556c4d79..69bc4657 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/qonan.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/qonan.txt
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 
     speech 3,
         l("Before I joined Nard, I used to be a thief."),
-        l("I'm not proud of it, but I had to get money for living."),
+        l("I'm not proud of it, but I had to steal money from others to keep on living."),
         l("Anyway, the last time I stole something I was almost caught."),
         l("I robbed a nobleman, took a chest full of coins."),
         l("But my luck left me, because as soon as I left his house, the guards started chasing me."),
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
     }
 
 L_QuestGiven:
-    speech 4, l("I asked you to do me a favor, did you forget?");
+    speech 4, lg("I asked you to do me a favor, did you forget?");
     select l("What should I do, again?");
     speech 1,
         l("Please find the small chest, buried somewhere on Artis Hill."),
diff --git a/npc/001-1/qpid.txt b/npc/001-1/qpid.txt
index cb43e951..27f7517e 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/qpid.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/qpid.txt
@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@
                     setq (ArtisQuests_Enora, 8);
                     speech 5,
                         l("You failed!"),
-                        l("Ivan is the one that you should look at now."),
+                        l("Ivan is the one you should look for now."),
                         l("He is on a small house between the dock's warehouse and the dojo."),
-                        l("Follow the river to the north-east and you will find it."),
+                        l("Follow the canal to the north-east and you will find it."),
                         l("And get out of here, I'm not a map!");
                 }
                 else
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
             l("Do? I don't do them."),
             l("I'm sure that you already knew the answer, didn't you?"),
             l("You tried to embarrass me, am I right?!"),
-            l("It's Ivan... I'm sure that he sent you to annoy me..."),
+            lg("It's Ivan... I'm sure that he sent you to annoy me..."),
             l("I'm just a merchant, I trade and make deals, yes \"excuse\" me if I'm not as skilled as this stupid alchemist."),
             l("But rare are those that receive grants from the Legion itself. For anybody else only a hard work can pay your bills!");
         emotion E_UPSET;
diff --git a/npc/001-1/rumly.txt b/npc/001-1/rumly.txt
index 9d0662a6..3271fd28 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/rumly.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/rumly.txt
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
     initnpctimer;
 
     speech 4,
-        l("Hey do you have any @@s?", getitemlink(Plushroom));
+        l("Hey you, do you have any @@s?", getitemlink(Plushroom));
 
 L_Menu:
     .@visited = getq(General_Rumly);
diff --git a/npc/001-1/trees.txt b/npc/001-1/trees.txt
index 98ac2ebf..af0ff3a5 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/trees.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/trees.txt
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ L_FoundHim:
     mesn "Bobo";
     mesq l("Yes, it's me. It's such a fine view from here!");
     next;
-    select(l("Your sister sent me to find you. Your mother is worried."));
+    select(lg("Your sister sent me to find you. Your mother is worried."));
     mes "";
     mesn "Bobo";
     mesq l("Oh, nooooo... If I go home now, my mum will give me chores.");