Rectify english scripting text

1 files changed, 27 insertions, 27 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt b/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt
index 9467592a..d0f87321 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt
@@ -10,24 +10,24 @@ OnTouch:
     if (geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door) == 1) end;
     seta ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door, 1;
     mesn "Elmo";
-    mesq g(l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from this guild, as the sign was on her raft."),
-           l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from this guild, as the sign was on his raft."));
+    mesq g(l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from that guild, as that sign was on her raft."),
+           l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from that guild, as that sign was on his raft."));
     next;
     mesn "Captain Nard";
-    mesq g(l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."),
-           l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally."));
+    mesq g(l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."),
+           l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally."));
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
     mesq l("I will.");
     next;
-    mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder what we can think about them if I can say my opinion. Some rumors say that they did some monstruos things and that they are hiding us a lot of things.");
+    mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder about them, if I may speak frankly. There are rumours going around that they did some monstrous things and that they are hiding quite alot of things from us.");
     next;
     mesn "Captain Nard";
-    mesq g(l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on her."),
-           l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on him."));
+    mesq g(l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on her."),
+           l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on him."));
     next;
-    mesq g(l("But if she is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about her."),
-           l("But if he is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about him."));
+    mesq g(l("But... if she is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about her."),
+           l("But... if he is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about him."));
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
     mesq l("Sure, Cap'tain.");
@@ -39,24 +39,24 @@ OnTouch:
     if (geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door) == 1) end;
     seta ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door, 1;
     mesn "Elmo";
-    mesq g(l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from this guild, as the sign was on her raft."),
-           l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from this guild, as the sign was on his raft."));
+    mesq g(l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from that guild, as that sign was on her raft."),
+           l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from that guild, as that sign was on his raft."));
     next;
     mesn "Captain Nard";
-    mesq g(l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."),
-           l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally."));
+    mesq g(l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."),
+           l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally."));
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
     mesq l("I will.");
     next;
-    mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder what we can think about them if I can say my opinion. Some rumors say that they did some monstruos things and that they are hiding us a lot of things.");
+    mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder about them, if I may speak frankly. There are rumours going around that they did some monstrous things and that they are hiding quite alot of things from us.");
     next;
     mesn "Captain Nard";
-    mesq g(l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on her."),
-           l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on him."));
+    mesq g(l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on her."),
+           l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on him."));
     next;
-    mesq g(l("But if she is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about her."),
-           l("But if he is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about him."));
+    mesq g(l("But... if she is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about her."),
+           l("But... if he is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about him."));
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
     mesq l("Sure, Cap'tain.");
@@ -68,24 +68,24 @@ OnTouch:
     if (geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door) == 1) end;
     seta ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door, 1;
     mesn "Elmo";
-    mesq g(l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from this guild, as the sign was on her raft."),
-           l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from this guild, as the sign was on his raft."));
+    mesq g(l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from that guild, as that sign was on her raft."),
+           l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from that guild, as that sign was on his raft."));
     next;
     mesn "Captain Nard";
-    mesq g(l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."),
-           l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally."));
+    mesq g(l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."),
+           l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally."));
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
     mesq l("I will.");
     next;
-    mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder what we can think about them if I can say my opinion. Some rumors say that they did some monstruos things and that they are hiding us a lot of things.");
+    mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder about them, if I may speak frankly. There are rumours going around that they did some monstrous things and that they are hiding quite alot of things from us.");
     next;
     mesn "Captain Nard";
-    mesq g(l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on her."),
-           l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on him."));
+    mesq g(l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on her."),
+           l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on him."));
     next;
-    mesq g(l("But if she is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about her."),
-           l("But if he is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about him."));
+    mesq g(l("But... if she is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about her."),
+           l("But... if he is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about him."));
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
     mesq l("Sure, Cap'tain.");