From cef85fa62c75da0688a47d066ffc2d322067ce17 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Maarten Vanraes Date: Wed, 11 Jan 2012 01:55:38 +0100 Subject: Rectify english scripting text --- npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt | 54 ++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------- 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt') diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt b/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt index 9467592a..d0f87321 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt @@ -10,24 +10,24 @@ OnTouch: if (geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door) == 1) end; seta ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door, 1; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq g(l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from this guild, as the sign was on her raft."), - l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from this guild, as the sign was on his raft.")); + mesq g(l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from that guild, as that sign was on her raft."), + l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from that guild, as that sign was on his raft.")); next; mesn "Captain Nard"; - mesq g(l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."), - l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally.")); + mesq g(l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."), + l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally.")); next; mesn "Elmo"; mesq l("I will."); next; - mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder what we can think about them if I can say my opinion. Some rumors say that they did some monstruos things and that they are hiding us a lot of things."); + mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder about them, if I may speak frankly. There are rumours going around that they did some monstrous things and that they are hiding quite alot of things from us."); next; mesn "Captain Nard"; - mesq g(l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on her."), - l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on him.")); + mesq g(l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on her."), + l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on him.")); next; - mesq g(l("But if she is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about her."), - l("But if he is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about him.")); + mesq g(l("But... if she is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about her."), + l("But... if he is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about him.")); next; mesn "Elmo"; mesq l("Sure, Cap'tain."); @@ -39,24 +39,24 @@ OnTouch: if (geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door) == 1) end; seta ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door, 1; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq g(l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from this guild, as the sign was on her raft."), - l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from this guild, as the sign was on his raft.")); + mesq g(l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from that guild, as that sign was on her raft."), + l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from that guild, as that sign was on his raft.")); next; mesn "Captain Nard"; - mesq g(l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."), - l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally.")); + mesq g(l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."), + l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally.")); next; mesn "Elmo"; mesq l("I will."); next; - mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder what we can think about them if I can say my opinion. Some rumors say that they did some monstruos things and that they are hiding us a lot of things."); + mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder about them, if I may speak frankly. There are rumours going around that they did some monstrous things and that they are hiding quite alot of things from us."); next; mesn "Captain Nard"; - mesq g(l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on her."), - l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on him.")); + mesq g(l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on her."), + l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on him.")); next; - mesq g(l("But if she is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about her."), - l("But if he is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about him.")); + mesq g(l("But... if she is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about her."), + l("But... if he is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about him.")); next; mesn "Elmo"; mesq l("Sure, Cap'tain."); @@ -68,24 +68,24 @@ OnTouch: if (geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door) == 1) end; seta ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Door, 1; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq g(l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from this guild, as the sign was on her raft."), - l("So it's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from this guild, as the sign was on his raft.")); + mesq g(l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe she comes from that guild, as that sign was on her raft."), + l("So that's why we wanted to warn you, maybe he comes from that guild, as that sign was on his raft.")); next; mesn "Captain Nard"; - mesq g(l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."), - l("I see, warn other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally.")); + mesq g(l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if she is a part of the Warrior Guild, then she is also our ally."), + l("I see, warn the other sailors about this. But if he is a part of the Warrior Guild, then he is also our ally.")); next; mesn "Elmo"; mesq l("I will."); next; - mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder what we can think about them if I can say my opinion. Some rumors say that they did some monstruos things and that they are hiding us a lot of things."); + mesq l("About this Esperia's Guild, I wonder about them, if I may speak frankly. There are rumours going around that they did some monstrous things and that they are hiding quite alot of things from us."); next; mesn "Captain Nard"; - mesq g(l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on her."), - l("This kind of talk could be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, keep an eye on him.")); + mesq g(l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on her."), + l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on him.")); next; - mesq g(l("But if she is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about her."), - l("But if he is amnesic as said Julia, we won't need to worry about him.")); + mesq g(l("But... if she is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about her."), + l("But... if he is amnesic like Julia said, we don't need to worry about him.")); next; mesn "Elmo"; mesq l("Sure, Cap'tain."); -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2