Merge branch 'typos' into 'master'

Fixes typos and rewords several sentences.



See merge request !21

5 files changed, 13 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
index 86665355..9ca42ccd 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
@@ -174,13 +174,13 @@ L_Done:
 
 L_ChefQuestStart:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Elmo told me you are now considered family and are numbered among us in our activities on the island. I do so very much appreciate the efforts you did down there.");
+    mesq lg("Elmo told me you are now considered family and are numbered among us in our activities on the island. I do so very much appreciate the efforts you did down there.");
     next;
 
 L_ChefQuestRedir:
     mesq l("Unfortunately, we still need help from you. This time it will be a delicate task, here onboard.");
     next;
-    mesq l("Elmo brought reports to me about some frictions between my old and new lieutenants. You probably already met Julia and Gado the Chef.");
+    mesq l("Elmo brought reports to me about some frictions between my old and new lieutenants. You probably already met Julia and Chef Gado.");
     next;
     mesq l("They are each valued individuals and I need them both. In the past, I probably made my share of mistakes. I regret good management is so difficult. I was wondering if you could investigate and... Sort out this situation.");
     next;
diff --git a/npc/001-1/enora.txt b/npc/001-1/enora.txt
index a40bb187..b857c24e 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/enora.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/enora.txt
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
 
     function enora_don {
         speech 5,
-            l("Don is renowned throughout the archipelagos for his forgery skills here on Artis."),
-            l("It's a great honor for us, at the Legion, to hold the security of this commerce!"),
+            l("Don is renowned throughout the entire archipelagos for his blacksmith skills, and he is here, in Artis."),
+            l("It's a great honor for us, at the Legion, to hold the security of his business!"),
             l("If you search for him you should look to the west of this city, it's the first house just after the left bridge, you can't miss it!"),
             l("Chelios, his apprentice, practices outside, mostly.");
 
@@ -84,18 +84,18 @@
     function enora_memories {
         speech 5,
             l("It's so exciting to meet somebody with amnesia!"),
-            l("Do you, like, remember nothing at all? Or do you have SOME memories of your past?"),
+            l("Can't you remember anything at all? Or do you have some memories of your past?"),
             l("What happens when you try to think about it?"),
             l("Does your mind go all fuzzy or does it feel like your head is going to explode??"),
             l("Try doing that now!");
 
         switch (select (l("Okay, but there won't be any explosions."),
-                        l("Don't get too excited about it...")))
+                        lg("Don't get too excited about it...")))
         {
             case 1:
                 narrator 5,
                     l("You concentrate and try to summon old memories from within your mind."),
-                    l("Everything feels numb and looks foggy to you, but you can recall the feeling of the cold hard wood of your raft on a stormy night"),
+                    l("You feel numb and everything around you looks foggy, but you can recall the feeling of the cold hard wood of your raft on a stormy night."),
                     l("A headache hits you and you lose your concentration.");
 
                 speech 4,
@@ -184,8 +184,8 @@
             case 2:
                 speech 5,
                     l("He may not have all of his wits but keep in mind one thing:"),
-                    l("Don is renowned throughout the archipelagos for his forgery here on Artis."),
-                    l("It's a great honor for us, at the Legion, to hold the security of this commerce!");
+                    l("Don is renowned throughout the entire archipelagos for his blacksmith skills, and he is here, in Artis."),
+                    l("It's a great honor for us, at the Legion, to hold the security of his business!");
 
                 break;
         }
diff --git a/npc/001-2-0/resa.txt b/npc/001-2-0/resa.txt
index c74ba61e..d33676ba 100644
--- a/npc/001-2-0/resa.txt
+++ b/npc/001-2-0/resa.txt
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 
     function explain_craft {
         speech 5,
-            l("Did you see Don the blacksmith? He might knows more about it if you want to improve your metal equipment."),
+            l("Did you see Don the blacksmith? He might know how you could improve your metal equipment."),
             l("Nevertheless, you can craft some cards that you can then attach to your equipment."),
             l("We sell a brimmed hat, you can craft a feather card and attach it to this hat to obtain an enhanced version of it!");
 
diff --git a/npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt b/npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt
index c447f7e3..91a985b3 100644
--- a/npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt
+++ b/npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
         case 3:
             speech 5,
                 l("You are in the Blacksmith's house, by Jove!"),
-                l("Don is a renowned blacksmith throughout Andorra it's crazy that you don't know about him.");
+                l("Don is a renowned blacksmith throughout Andorra, it's crazy that you never heard of him.");
             break;
         case 4:
             break;
diff --git a/npc/001-2-29/edouard.txt b/npc/001-2-29/edouard.txt
index 9f6d7ad6..45b14598 100644
--- a/npc/001-2-29/edouard.txt
+++ b/npc/001-2-29/edouard.txt
@@ -58,11 +58,9 @@
                 break;
             case 4:
                 speech 5,
-                    l("Feel free to visit me another time");
+                    l("Feel free to come visit me another time.");
 
-                closedialog;
-                npctalk3 l("Bye bye!");
-                close;
+                goodbye;
         }
     } while (1);