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| author | Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr> | 2012-08-28 20:22:10 +0400 |
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| committer | Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr> | 2012-08-28 20:22:10 +0400 |
| commit | a2617447e1392517e36b8655e02166c37ccceb1d (patch) | |
| tree | 026cc8c2ba63d91ac29e0f77ddeeef1981503392 /npc/000-0 | |
| parent | 6104034890ce35cd71e5c7951f39215627e10daf (diff) | |
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Added missing spaces at the end of some scripts.
Removed some spare lines in some scripts.
Reviewed language and punctuation in several scripts.
Diffstat (limited to 'npc/000-0')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/000-0/_mobs.txt | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/000-0/_warps.txt | 1 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/000-0/sailors.txt | 14 |
3 files changed, 7 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/npc/000-0/_mobs.txt b/npc/000-0/_mobs.txt index b2af1d88..280cd6be 100644 --- a/npc/000-0/_mobs.txt +++ b/npc/000-0/_mobs.txt @@ -1,7 +1,5 @@ // 000-0 mobs - - 000-0.gat,0,0,0 script Mob000-0 -1,{ end; } diff --git a/npc/000-0/_warps.txt b/npc/000-0/_warps.txt index b1182fdb..af57951f 100644 --- a/npc/000-0/_warps.txt +++ b/npc/000-0/_warps.txt @@ -1,2 +1 @@ // 000-0 warps - diff --git a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt index 4aa63366..9c7951c9 100644 --- a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt +++ b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt @@ -16,13 +16,13 @@ OnTouch: mesn "Narrator"; mes col(l("You are on a raft, adrift in the sea."), 9); next; - mes col(l("You don't remember anything before this."), 9); + mes col(l("You realise you can't remember anything."), 9); next; mes col(l("Suddenly, you hear a voice from the sky."), 9); next; - mes col(l("As you open your eyes and look around, you see a large ship."), 9); + mes col(l("As you open your eyes, you see a large ship before you."), 9); next; - mes col(l("Some sailors are trying to talk to you.."), 9); + mes col(l("Aboard stand sailors trying to talk to you."), 9); next; mesn "Orc Voice"; @@ -34,14 +34,14 @@ OnTouch: next; mesn "Tritan Voice"; - mesq lg("What are you saying guys, it's a yoiis!"); + mesq lg("What are you guys saying ? He's a Yoiis!"); next; mesn "Raijin Voice"; mesq g(l("You stupid, she's english, look at the shape of the head."), l("You stupid, he's english, look at the shape of the head.")); next; - mesq l("Hey you! Do you hear us? Are you okay?"); + mesq l("Hey you! Can you hear us? Are you okay?"); next; menu @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ OnTouch: next; mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("The sailors take you aboard their ship to help you."), 9); + mes col(l("The sailors take you aboard their ship."), 9); next; mes col(l("Click on the NPCs around you to continue the introduction."), 9); next; @@ -75,4 +75,4 @@ OnTouch: close; -}
\ No newline at end of file +} |