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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/000-2-3/nard.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/000-2-3/nard.txt | 29 |
1 files changed, 14 insertions, 15 deletions
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt index daa5f6ca..b3871384 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ l_Checker: next; mesq l("Let me introduce myself, I am Nard, captain of this ship."); next; - mesq lg("It is nice to see that you woke up and you're ok, Elmo came here to tell me this good news!"); + mesq lg("It is nice to see that you woke up fine at the same time. Elmo came here to tell me this good news!"); next; mesn "Elmo"; @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ l_Checker: next; mesn; - mesq l("Hehehe, he is a bit nervous, please excuse him, it's not everyday that we get a new member in the crew!"); + mesq l("Hehehe, he is a bit nervous, please forgive him, it is not everyday we have a new member in the crew!"); next; mesq l("So, how do you feel? I see that Julia did a marvelous job! You look like you're in good health now."); next; @@ -46,12 +46,11 @@ l_Menu: menu lg("I feel ok."), l_Ok, l("Who's this Julia?"), l_Julia, - lg("I'm a bit sick."), -; - + lg("I'm a bit sick..."), -; mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Oh, I was going to ask you if you want to help the crew search for some food and explore the island out there."); + mesq l("Oh, I was going to ask you if you wanted to help the crew search for some food and explore the island out there."); next; l_MenuQuest: @@ -61,10 +60,10 @@ l_MenuQuest: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("I like this answer!"); + mesq l("Oh! I like that sort of answer!"); next; - mesq g(l("We need of manpower on the island... Oh excuse me, women are also welcome!"), - l("We need of manpower on the island.")); + mesq g(l("We need manpower on the island... Oh forgive me, women are also welcome, of course."), + l("We need manpower on the island.")); next; goto l_NeedContent; @@ -74,7 +73,7 @@ l_NeedHead: mesn; l_NeedContent: - mesq l("Of course, there is a reward for your task."); + mesq l("Sure, there is a reward for your task."); next; mesq l("Our crew is like a family, and if you agree to help us, I would like to invite you to join our family!"); next; @@ -96,7 +95,7 @@ l_Ok: next; mesq l("We made a stop at a little island, before making it to the port of Artis."); next; - mesq l("It'll be a good time for you to do some exercise, the ship isn't big enough for that."); + mesq l("It would be good for you to do some exercise, the ship isn't big enough for that."); next; goto l_SpecialTask; @@ -104,15 +103,15 @@ l_Ok: l_Julia: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("You have very bad amnesia."); + mesq l("You have an awful amnesia."); next; - mesq l("She is the nurse and the shipkeeper of this ship, and also an excellent chef!"); + mesq l("She is the nurse and shipkeeper of this ship, and also an excellent chef!"); next; - mesq lg("But most important, she's the one who took care of you when you were in coma."); + mesq lg("But most important, she is the one who took care of you when you were unconscious."); next; l_SpecialTask: - mesq l("I know that you're just feeling better, but I'd like to ask of you a special task."); + mesq l("I know that you are just starting to feel better, but I'd like to give you a special task."); next; goto l_MenuQuest; @@ -139,4 +138,4 @@ l_Already: mesq l("I don't need any help right now, come back later."); close; -}
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