Spelling and grammar updates in NPC dialog for maps 018 to 032

1 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/npc/018-2_Woodland_mining_camp/caul.txt b/npc/018-2_Woodland_mining_camp/caul.txt
index 2949c0e9..56734a69 100644
--- a/npc/018-2_Woodland_mining_camp/caul.txt
+++ b/npc/018-2_Woodland_mining_camp/caul.txt
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ L_monster_oil_why_dangerous:
 
 L_monster_oil_ingredients:
 	mes "[Caul]";
-	mes "\"You will need one pearl, two snake skins, three black scorpion stingers, two piles of ash, and a golden scorpion stinger.  The golden stinger goes in last, after the dangerous part, so you won't lose if if your brew blows up.\"";
+	mes "\"You will need one pearl, two snake skins, three black scorpion stingers, two piles of ash, and a golden scorpion stinger.  The golden stinger goes in last, after the dangerous part, so you won't lose it if your brew blows up.\"";
         next;
 	mes "[Caul]";
 	mes "\"You should also bring gamboge, mauve, alizarin and cobalt leaves. You will have to stabilize the brew, and they will help with that.\"";
@@ -709,7 +709,7 @@ L_DemPotion:
         next;
         mes "Caul goes three steps away and watches your actions carefully.";
         menu
-            "Please explain me what you know about that potion.", L_explain_dempo,
+            "Please explain to me what you know about that potion.", L_explain_dempo,
             "Ok, I will start brewing.", L_brew_dempo_init,
             "Nevermind", -;
         close;
@@ -717,22 +717,22 @@ L_explain_dempo:
         mes "[Caul]";
         mes "\"Hrrm. I have heard of that potion. I hope I can remember all the stuff needed.\"";
         next;
-        mes "\"Basically this potion is a balancing between death and life. You see a balance between knowlegde and forgetting.\"";
+        mes "\"Basically this potion is a balancing between death and life; between knowledge and forgetting.\"";
         next;
-        mes "\"So to get it balanced, we need ingredients for both sides.\"";
+        mes "\"So, to get it balanced, we need ingredients for both sides.\"";
         next;
-        mes "\"For the death and forgetting side we can use bones. Although bones do not work good. Best results we would get with a diseased heart of zombies. Of course we can use undead ears and skulls as well.\"";
+        mes "\"For the death and forgetting side we can use bones. Although, bones do not work well. We would get the best results with a diseased heart of zombies. Of course, we can use undead ears and skulls as well.\"";
         next;
-        mes "\"For the life side we can use fresh mauve herbs. But life stones would be even better. Roots will do as well. Although these must be really fresh to show effect.\"";
+        mes "\"For the life and knowledge side we can use fresh mauve herbs. Lifestones would be even better. Roots will do as well, although these must be really fresh to show effect.\"";
         next;
         mes "\"Brewing such a powerful potion is dangerous. That is why you will need to do it yourself. I will try to assist you as best as I can.\"";
         next;
         mes "\"I don't know exactly, but there is a slight chance of exploding all time.\"";
         next;
-        mes "\"The color of the mixture will give you a quite good impression what you need to do.\"";
-        mes "\"And to get that potion working, we need to stabilize it with a pearl at the end\"";
+        mes "\"The color of the mixture will give you a very good impression of what you need to do.\"";
+        mes "\"And to get that potion working, we need to stabilize it with a pearl at the end.\"";
         next;
-        mes "\"Ah yes the color will be in a range of really dark black to bright shining white. In between it is grey in different nuances.\"";
+        mes "\"The color will be in a range of really dark black to bright shining white. In between it is grey in different nuances.\"";
         mes "\"When it is calm grey, the finalisation with a pearl will work best, so I have heard.\"";
         next;
         goto L_DemPotion;
@@ -750,16 +750,16 @@ L_brew_dempo_init:
         set @dempo_color, rand(10);
         if (rand(2)==0)
             set @dempo_color, @dempo_color + 90 ;
-        mes "To start with that potion you put in the cauldron a bone, a bottle of water and a lifestone.";
+        mes "To start that potion you put in the cauldron a bone, a bottle of water and a lifestone.";
         next;
         goto L_brew_dempo;
 
 L_dempo_noinit:
         mes "[Caul]";
         mes "\"Hrrm. Usually you start that potion with a bone, a bottle of water and a lifestone.\"";
-        mes "\"I'd propose you do it exactly that way. You see maybe it would even work with a skull and a healing potion, but since we don't know, and I don't want to repair my cauldron again, please don't try other solutions.\"";
+        mes "\"I'd propose you do it exactly that way. You see, maybe it would even work with a skull and a healing potion, but since we don't know, and I don't want to repair my cauldron again, please don't try other solutions.\"";
         next;
-        mes "\"Please use only this way to start the recipe: a bone, a bottle of water and a lifestone. In this order!\"";
+        mes "\"Please use only this way to start the recipe: a bone, a bottle of water and a lifestone. In that order!\"";
         mes "\"Ah, and of course you will need at least one pearl with you. This pearl is needed to finalize the potion.\"";
         close;