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diff --git a/npc/007-1/zarkor.txt b/npc/007-1/zarkor.txt index 2eba3685b..e5291a15e 100644 --- a/npc/007-1/zarkor.txt +++ b/npc/007-1/zarkor.txt @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ break; case 1: mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Talk to Zitoni, the Alchemist of Candor. He may look humble, but he is the greatest alchemist of this world. I need five @@.", getitemlink(EverburnPowder)); + mesq l("Talk to Zitoni, the Alchemist of Candor. He may look humble, but he is the greatest alchemist of this world. Tell him to make you five %s.", getitemlink(EverburnPowder)); close; break; case 2: @@ -28,18 +28,17 @@ break; case 3: mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Talk to Zitoni, and deliver the @@. I can't give you another one, they're super rare.", getitemlink(DarkDesertMushroom)); + mesq l("Talk to Zitoni, and deliver the %s. I can't give you another one, they're extremely rare.", getitemlink(DarkDesertMushroom)); close; break; case 4: goto L_Quest; break; case 5: - mesn "Saulc, the Bug Master"; - mesq col("What, are we really letting you do something so insane as summoning the Monster King?! Blame Saulc!!"); - next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("You didn't lit every torch yet! Hurry up!!"); + mesq l("You didn't light every torch yet! Hurry up before they stop burning!"); + mesn ""; + mesc l("You have a vague bad feeling about this."); close; break; case 6: @@ -57,7 +56,7 @@ L_Weak: mesn; - mesq l("Stay out of harm way. Nothing to see here. Stay away, pathetically weak %s.", get_race()); + mesq l("Stay out of harms way. Nothing to see here. Stay away, pathetically weak %s.", get_race()); close; L_Start: @@ -65,20 +64,20 @@ L_Start: mesq l("Hey... You... Come here."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("I am Zarkor, the Dark Summoner. I want to do a dark summoning ritual, but there are strings attached."); + mesq l("I am Zarkor, the Dark Summoner. I want to do a ritual, but there are strings attached."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; mesq l("I need to buy your silence. I'll reward you greatly when I'm done. But first, I need to know if you'll be loyal to me."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("To prove me your faith, bring me 1 @@ or 1 @@.",getitemlink(Ruby),getitemlink(Topaz)); - mesq l("Such precious gem, is not something you would give for free, unless you are interested on my... rituals."); + mesq l("To prove me your trustworthyness, bring me 1 %s or 1 %s.",getitemlink(Ruby),getitemlink(Topaz)); + mesq l("Such a precious gem is not something you would give away for free, unless you are truly interested in my ritual."); next; mesn strcharinfo(0); select l("Indeed. Sorry. I'm not giving you anything."), - rif(countitem(Ruby) >= 1, l("I swear silence, over this bloody ruby.")), - rif(countitem(Topaz) >= 1, l("I swear silence, over this shining topaz.")); + rif(countitem(Ruby) >= 1, l("I swear silence, over this sanguine ruby.")), + rif(countitem(Topaz) >= 1, l("I swear silence, over this radiant topaz.")); mes ""; switch (@menu) { @@ -100,16 +99,16 @@ L_Start: break; } mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Very well. I shall now share with you the details of this rite."); + mesq l("Very well. I shall now share the details of this rite with you."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("I will summon the Monster King. Don't ask me my reasons. I know this will put Tulimshar in danger. But I will still do it."); + mesq l("I will summon the Monster King. Don't ask me for my reasons. I know this will put Tulimshar in danger. But I will still do it."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("For that, I need to light five torches. The pentagram, the magic, and all the else are with me. Just light the torches."); + mesq l("For that, I need to light the five torches. I already prepared everything, so you do not need to do anything else. Just light the torches."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Talk to Zitoni, the Alchemist of Candor. He may look humble, but he is the greatest alchemist of this world. I need five @@.", getitemlink(EverburnPowder)); + mesq l("Talk to Zitoni, the Alchemist of Candor. He may look humble, but he is the greatest alchemist of this world. Procure 5 %s from him.", getitemlink(EverburnPowder)); close; L_Price: @@ -120,13 +119,13 @@ L_Price: mesq l("I thought he would. After all, Everburn Powder... is not a mere powder."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Well, you gave me the gems, so I trust you. Here, take this @@.", getitemlink(DarkDesertMushroom)); + mesq l("Well, you gave me the gems, so I trust you with this. Here, take the reagent you need, a %s.", getitemlink(DarkDesertMushroom)); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Take much care with it. It is a very, very rare drop from a rare monster from a difficult, high level area."); + mesq l("Do not lose it. It is a very, very rare fungus you can only find on a tough monster, in a particularly dangerous area."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Deliver it to Zitoni on my name. He'll trust it. The relation between me and Zitoni... goes way back."); + mesq l("Deliver it to Zitoni in my name. He'll trust you. The relation between me and Zitoni... goes way back."); getitem DarkDesertMushroom, 1; setq TulimsharQuest_DarkInvocator, 3; close; @@ -134,27 +133,27 @@ L_Price: L_Quest: if (countitem(EverburnPowder) < 5) { mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("This is not enough, I need 5 @@ to perform the rite. Go talk with Zitoni.", getitemlink(EverburnPowder)); + mesq l("This is not enough, I need 5 %s to perform the rite. Go talk to Zitoni.", getitemlink(EverburnPowder)); close; } mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Good, good, you have enough powder. Now I need you to lit all five torches with them."); + mesq l("Good, good, you have enough powder. Now I need you to light all five torches with them."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Once you lit one of them, monsters will pour out, so take care to don't die."); + mesq l("Once you light one of them, monsters will be summoned, so take care to not die. The amount and difficulty of the summoned monsters increases with every torch you light. I advice you to run away and hurry to the next torch."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; mesq l("If you die, you'll have to begin again. And there is the experience penalty, too."); next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("Good luck, because you'll need it. Talk to me once all of them are lit, and I'll SUMMON DAH MONSTER KING."); + mesq l("Good luck, because you'll need it. Talk to me once all of them are lit, and I'll SUMMON THE MONSTER KING."); setq TulimsharQuest_DarkInvocator, 5; close; L_Ritual: percentheal 100, 0; specialeffect(56); - mesc l("Zarkor spills many fluids on the lake, with much concentration."); + mesc l("Zarkor spills many fluids on the surface of the little lake while being in a deep trance."); next; specialeffect(56); mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; @@ -165,33 +164,32 @@ L_Ritual: mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; mesq l("MONSTER KING, APPEAR TO ME!"); next; - mesn "MONSTER KING"; + mesn "The Monster King"; mesc l("...Foolish human... Do you really think I will attend your summon?"), 1; next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; mesq l("But... But! Where are you?! That summon ritual is equivalent to GM magic!"); next; - mesn "MONSTER KING"; - mesc l("And who do you think that created GM Magic in first place, inexperienced kid?"), 1; + mesn "The Monster King"; + mesc l("And who do you think that created GM Magic in first place, pathetic worm?"), 1; next; mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; - mesq l("You... You killed my father during Nivalis siege! I'll make you pay for that!!"); - next; - mesn "MONSTER KING"; - mesc l("You humans are so greedy... Just like me. I have more important things to do, other than waste time with you."), 1; + mesq l("You... You killed my father during the Nivalis siege! I'll make you pay for that!!"); next; - mesn "MONSTER KING"; - mesc l("Zarkor, fell a small taste of my power. That is nothing. If you can't handle that, you're not even near my lowest lieutenant."), 1; - mesc l("And you got help from a kid, Zarkor? Lucky is that kid, that I don't have time to deal with them. Farewell."), 1; + mesn "The Monster King"; + mesc l("You humans are so greedy... Just like me. I have more important things to do. I won't waste my time on you any longer."), 1; next; + mesn "The Monster King"; + mesc l("Zarkor, you may feel a small taste of my power. If you can't handle that, you're not even near my lowest lieutenant."), 1; + mesc l("And you got help from that kid? You are even more pathetic than I thought."), 1; + mesc l("You may consider yourself exceptionally lucky, kid. I will not waste my time on you, too so consider me sparing you an act of mercy."), 1; + dnext; specialeffect(312); mesn "Zarkor, the Dark Summoner"; mes l("GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!"); next; goto L_Finish; - - L_Finish: setq TulimsharQuest_DarkInvocator, 7; // These values were taken from Experience table, and are magic numbers @@ -206,10 +204,10 @@ L_Finish: mesq l("*Ugh* Thanks for your help. Here... Take this, as promised."); next; mesn strcharinfo(0); - mesq l("Are you feeling well? That was a pretty powerful attack!"); + mesq l("Are you feeling alright? That was a pretty powerful blast!"); next; mesn; - mesq lg("Do not worry with me, youngling... I'll be fine."); + mesq lg("Do not worry about me, youngling... I'll be fine."); close; OnMonster: |