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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/007-1/dracoula.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/007-1/dracoula.txt | 45 |
1 files changed, 21 insertions, 24 deletions
diff --git a/npc/007-1/dracoula.txt b/npc/007-1/dracoula.txt index be6d2aa6e..ee45a66ce 100644 --- a/npc/007-1/dracoula.txt +++ b/npc/007-1/dracoula.txt @@ -11,22 +11,22 @@ mesn; mesq lg("Hello adventurer! Are you lost?"); next; - mesq l("This is not a place for non-experimented people!"); + mesq l("This is not a place for unexperienced people!"); next; - mesq l("Mine exit is top left!"); + mesq l("The exit is north-west!"); mes ""; if (BaseLevel >= 15) goto L_Menu; close; L_Menu: mesn; - mesq l("But as you're here now, could you do me a favour?"); + mesq l("But as you're here now, could you do me a favor?"); mes ""; menu - l("Hum, Which type of favor?"),L_Quest, - l("Can I find a mana source here?"),L_Mana, - l("Can I become a miner?"),L_Miner, - l("No, thanks. I gonna leave this place."),L_Close; + l("Which type of favor?"), L_Quest, + l("Can I find a mana source here?"), L_Mana, + l("Can I become a miner?"), L_Miner, + l("No, thanks. I gonna leave this place."), L_Close; L_Quest: mes ""; @@ -36,35 +36,35 @@ L_Quest: mesq l("Nice! First let me introduce myself. I am Dracoula, a miner!"); next; mesn; - mesq l("I mine here since a while. My favorite activity is to scare other miners!"); + mesq l("I mine here since quite a while. My favorite activity is to scare other miners!"); next; } if (.@q == 0) goto L_Continue; .@q2=getq2(MineQuest_Dracoula) + 60 * 60 * 23; if (santime() >= .@q2) goto L_Repeat; mesn; - mesq l("But come back in a few hours, I didn't lost all @@!", getitemlink(BatTeeth)); + mesq l("But come back in a few hours, I didn't lose all my %s yet!", getitemlink(BatTeeth)); close; L_Continue: - mesq l("I love seeing their terrorize face."); + mesq l("I love seeing their faces tremble in terror."); mes ""; menu - l("Ok. Cool life!"), L_Close, - l("Haha, Nice, but how do you do that?"), L_Next; + l("You are weird."), L_Close, + l("But how do you do that?"), L_Next; L_Next: mes ""; - mesq l("I disguise myself into a giant mutated bat, but every time I break or lose my fake teeth."); + mesq l("I disguise myself as a giant mutated bat, but every time I break or lose my fake teeth."); next; mesq l("I usually ask adventurers for 11 @@, but new miners should be arriving soon. I need to make them cry!", getitemlink(BatTeeth)); next; - mesq l("So it could be nice, if you could bring me 20 @@,", getitemlink(BatTeeth)); + mesq l("So it would be really nice if you could bring me %d %s,", 20, getitemlink(BatTeeth)); mes ""; menu rif(countitem(BatTeeth) >= 20, l("Hey! I already got them!")), L_Finish, l("I'll get to it."), L_Close; - close; // double sure + close; // double check L_Repeat: mesn; @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ L_Repeat: mesq l("Do you have an extra of 11 @@ for me?", getitemlink(BatTeeth)); mes ""; menu - rif(countitem(BatTeeth) >= 11, l("Yep, I bring them for you!")), L_Finish2, + rif(countitem(BatTeeth) >= 11, l("Yep, I have them right here for you!")), L_Finish2, l("Actually not."), L_Close; close; @@ -107,19 +107,16 @@ L_Finish2: L_Mana: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Ah! Actually nobody found one."); + mesq l("Actually nobody found one."); next; mesn; - mesq l("But it's ultimate goal of miners there."); + mesq l("But it's the ultimate goal of us miners here."); next; mesn; - mesq l("If one of us found a Mana stone. They would become rich!"); + mesq l("If one of us found a Mana stone we would become rich!"); next; mesn; - mesq l("Twelve times more if it is an elusive Mana Fragment no one knows where they are!"); - next; - mesn; - mesq l("That is."); + mesq l("Twelve times more if it is a pinch of the elusive Mylarin Dust. But no one knows where any of that is!"); next; goto L_Menu; @@ -129,7 +126,7 @@ L_Miner: mesq l("You should ask %s.", b(l("Tycoon"))); next; mesn; - mesq l("He is the Miners leader."); + mesq l("He is the leader of us miners."); if (getq(MineQuest_Dracoula)) { compareandsetq MineQuest_Pickaxe, 0, 1; } else { |