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authorNetSysFire <59517351+NetSysFire@users.noreply.github.com>2022-07-11 21:44:58 +0200
committerNetSysFire <59517351+NetSysFire@users.noreply.github.com>2022-07-11 21:44:58 +0200
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some typo fixes and rewording
-rw-r--r--npc/003-1/gladys.txt10
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/npc/003-1/gladys.txt b/npc/003-1/gladys.txt
index 9951b45ae..2262b9203 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/gladys.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/gladys.txt
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
mes "";
menu
l("What is the Alliance?"), L_What,
- l("Why it sucks?"), L_Why,
+ l("Why does it suck?"), L_Why,
l("Well, too bad!"), L_Close;
L_What:
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ L_AllianceMenu:
mes "";
menu
l("Who composes the Alliance?"), L_Members,
- l("What are the Alliance tasks?"), L_Tasks,
+ l("What are the tasks of the Alliance?"), L_Tasks,
l("Do you think I could join the Alliance?"), L_Join,
l("I have to go. See you later."), L_Close;
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ L_Why:
next;
mesq l("In the end, they decide the defensive measures, and they even set curfews!");
next;
- mesq l("They also determine rules, and enforces them. We live under a disguised dictatorship.");
+ mesq l("They also determine rules, and enforce them. We live under a disguised dictatorship.");
next;
mesq l("But what I really hate is that they forbid gossiping.");
next;
@@ -60,9 +60,9 @@ L_Members:
L_Tasks:
mes "";
mesn;
- mesq l("Their main tasks are ensuring trade, protecting the cities from monster invasions, and guarding the Mana Stones.");
+ mesq l("Their main tasks are ensuring fair trading, protecting the cities from monster invasions, and guarding the Mana Stones.");
next;
- mesq l("They also recently took over some city affairs. It's good they're protecting us, but I'm afraid of they creeping in our lives!");
+ mesq l("They also recently took over some city affairs. It's good they're protecting us, but I'm afraid of them creeping into our lives!");
next;
goto L_AllianceMenu;