Replace reed.txt

1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/npc/006-2-5/reed.txt b/npc/006-2-5/reed.txt
index 330b1d35f..03a83bf62 100644
--- a/npc/006-2-5/reed.txt
+++ b/npc/006-2-5/reed.txt
@@ -60,15 +60,15 @@ function reedAboutKnights {
     mesn;
     mesq l("The Order of Piou Knights was originally created as a defense against hunters from the humanoid races.");
     mesn;
-    mesc l("Our creation stopped hunting on Piou Isles, but it could not do anything for the pious who refused to live here.");
+    mesc l("Our Order stopped the hunters from harming any piou on Piou Isles, but it could not do anything for the pious who refused to live here.");
     mesn;
     mesq l("We grew in strength and knowledge over time, and dedicated ourselves to upholding justice and peace on the Isles, and in the world.");
     mesn;
-    mesq l("When the ducks joined the Moubootaur and created the Duck Side, our convictions and oathes to the Order ensured we would oppose them.");
+    mesq l("When the ducks joined the Moubootaur and created the Duck Side, our convictions and oaths to the Order ensured we would oppose them.");
     mesn;
-    mesc l("The humanoid races do not consider ducks or pious to be a threat, so we are the only line of defense against the Duck Side.");
+    mesc l("The humanoid races do not consider ducks or pious to be a threat, thus we are the only line of defense against the Duck Side.");
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Remember that, %s. You dedicated yourself to the Order of Piou Knights, so you are now sworn to oppose the Duck Side.", strcharinfo(0));
+    mesq l("Remember that, %s. You dedicated yourself to the Order of Piou Knights, and you are now sworn to oppose the Duck Side.", strcharinfo(0));
     mesn;
     reedHello();
 }