From 9407956e2bd4b1d80b5a02d1c30b6aa17c589a41 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Abby Hulka Date: Sat, 4 Mar 2023 21:21:41 +0000 Subject: Replace reed.txt --- npc/006-2-5/reed.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/npc/006-2-5/reed.txt b/npc/006-2-5/reed.txt index 330b1d35f..03a83bf62 100644 --- a/npc/006-2-5/reed.txt +++ b/npc/006-2-5/reed.txt @@ -60,15 +60,15 @@ function reedAboutKnights { mesn; mesq l("The Order of Piou Knights was originally created as a defense against hunters from the humanoid races."); mesn; - mesc l("Our creation stopped hunting on Piou Isles, but it could not do anything for the pious who refused to live here."); + mesc l("Our Order stopped the hunters from harming any piou on Piou Isles, but it could not do anything for the pious who refused to live here."); mesn; mesq l("We grew in strength and knowledge over time, and dedicated ourselves to upholding justice and peace on the Isles, and in the world."); mesn; - mesq l("When the ducks joined the Moubootaur and created the Duck Side, our convictions and oathes to the Order ensured we would oppose them."); + mesq l("When the ducks joined the Moubootaur and created the Duck Side, our convictions and oaths to the Order ensured we would oppose them."); mesn; - mesc l("The humanoid races do not consider ducks or pious to be a threat, so we are the only line of defense against the Duck Side."); + mesc l("The humanoid races do not consider ducks or pious to be a threat, thus we are the only line of defense against the Duck Side."); mesn; - mesq l("Remember that, %s. You dedicated yourself to the Order of Piou Knights, so you are now sworn to oppose the Duck Side.", strcharinfo(0)); + mesq l("Remember that, %s. You dedicated yourself to the Order of Piou Knights, and you are now sworn to oppose the Duck Side.", strcharinfo(0)); mesn; reedHello(); } -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50