Some minor dialogue fixes on Lora Tay and Agostine.

1 files changed, 30 insertions, 26 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt b/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt
index 7485b70a..6335d7a7 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ L_give_water:
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"If HE can sew petty every-day items for ordinary peasants, then so can I.  Very well, is there anything in particular that you need made?  I shall show you how a proper seamstress operates!\"";
     next;
-    
+
     if (QUEST_WG_state == 12)
         goto L_main_menu2;
     goto L_main_menu;
@@ -256,26 +256,26 @@ L_agostine_proposal:
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"What kind of proposal are you asking of me?\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "I have talked to Agostine and he needs your help.", -,
         "I forgot...", L_main_menu2;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"That cheat! What could he possibly want from me?";
-    mes "We dont even have the same style in seeming. Is this a joke?\"";
+    mes "We don't even have the same style in seeming. Is this a joke?\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
-        "It's no joke. he needs your help in creating a new fashion!", -,
-        "yeah you are right, he was probably joking.", L_end;
-    
+        "It's no joke. He needs your help in creating a new fashion!", -,
+        "Yeah you're right, he was probably joking.", L_end;
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Well it depends what he wants from me.";
     mes "Go see Agostine, ask him what he's planning and I will think about it.\"";
-    
+
     set QUEST_WG_state, 13;
-    
+
     close;
 
 L_proposal_intro:
@@ -292,25 +292,25 @@ L_proposal_show_materials:
     menu
         "Yes, he explained he saw a dress in a dream and gave me these materials.", -,
         "No, that guy is a total wacko.", L_end;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Wow these are such fine materials!";
     mes "These are certainly not for just any ordinary clothes...";
     mes "He must be thinking of something magnificent.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "He said this dress would be his first dress creation and he wanted it to be fabulous!", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Fine I will accept his offer...";
     mes "But the materials he has given you need some sewing on the edges.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
-    mes "\"I will fix them, but I cannot use normal threading to fix this material.";
-    mes "I will need a soft thin thread so I wont spoil the textures.\"";
+    mes "\"I will fix them, but I cannot use normal threading to fix this materials.";
+    mes "I will need a soft thin thread so I won't spoil the textures.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     goto L_proposal_search_items;
 
 L_proposal_search_items:
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ L_proposal_search_items:
     mes "\"Please bring me " + @FINEDRESS_COCOONS + " silk cocoons.";
     mes "This should cover the materials needs and will leave extra for sewing the pieces together later on.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "I will go get them right away!", -,
         "Here you are.", L_proposal_give_items,
@@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ L_proposal_give_items:
         goto L_proposal_not_enough_items;
     delitem "SilkCocoon", @FINEDRESS_COCOONS;
     set QUEST_WG_state, 16;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Great, now I can spin the silk threading and fix this mess made of these fine materials.";
     mes "While I do this, you will need to go get the design drawings from Agostine...";
@@ -349,7 +349,8 @@ L_proposal_retrieve_design:
     mes "\"May you go retrieve the design from Agostine?\"";
     next;
     menu
-        "Certainly I'll be back soon!", -;
+        "Certainly I'll be back soon!", -,
+        "Actually I want something else...", L_main_menu;
     close;
 
 L_proposal_bringing_design:
@@ -358,7 +359,7 @@ L_proposal_bringing_design:
     next;
     menu
         "Here they are!", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Wonderful, this dress design is magnificent!";
     mes "I am done with the threading but I will now need to sew these materials together into the design.\"";
@@ -376,29 +377,32 @@ L_proposal_dress_finished:
     mes "\"Well it was difficult seeming with such fragile materials.";
     mes "But I have done it. The design is finished except for one part of it.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "Wow it looks great, but what's missing?", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Well there are white flare designs on the bottom of the dress.";
     mes "I'm not great with fine cloth design so this might be something Agostine must do on his own.";
     next;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Please take the unfinished dress to him so he may finish the edges with the cloth.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "Okay, can't wait to see the finished product! Thanks for your help!", -;
-    
+
     set QUEST_WG_state, 20;
-    
+
     close;
 
 L_proposal_deliver_dress:
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Please take the unfinished dress to him so he may finish the edges with the cloth.\"";
+    menu
+        "I'm on my way.", -,
+        "I have a request...", L_main_menu;
     close;
 
 L_desert_hat: