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-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt2
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt17
2 files changed, 9 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt b/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt
index f678cce2..c72a17f7 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ L_Block:
end;
L_Weak:
- message strcharinfo(0), "I cannot enter. The magic is to strong. Maybe I should train some more.";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "I cannot enter. The magic is too strong. Maybe I should train some more.";
end;
}
diff --git a/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt b/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt
index 9522ebd4..d61437e2 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt
@@ -45,11 +45,11 @@ L_Talk:
goto L_Talk1;
if (@talk == 2)
goto L_Talk2;
- mes "The old man reads a book and looks up when he sees you comming";
- mes "He looks at you angrily";
+ mes "The old man reads a book and looks up when he sees you coming.";
+ mes "He looks at you angrily.";
next;
mes "[Mirak]";
- mes "\"Hi my name is Mirak. You might have the impression that I am nice, but I am NOT! I want to be left alone to read at piece! I tried that at my mansion in Port City but it did not work. My damn brother, he always kept going on about Bat Wings...\"";
+ mes "\"Hi, my name is Mirak. You might have the impression that I am nice, but I am NOT! I want to be left alone to read in peace! I tried that at my mansion in Port City but it did not work. My damn brother, he always kept going on about Bat Wings...\"";
next;
mes "Suddenly his face gets red. He breathes slowly three times...";
next;
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ L_Talk2:
mes "[Mirak]";
mes "\"What do you want?!\"";
menu
- "Nothing", -,
+ "Nothing.", -,
"Money!", L_Quest;
mes "[Mirak]";
mes "\"Ahhhh! Get lost, or you'll regret it!\"";
@@ -82,7 +82,6 @@ L_Talk2:
close;
L_Quest:
-
set @dq_cost, DailyQuestPoints;
set @dq_money, 20;
set @dq_exp, 20;
@@ -94,9 +93,9 @@ L_Quest:
goto L_Exit;
L_TooSoon:
- mes "Mirak looks up sees you and gets angry";
+ mes "Mirak looks up, sees you, and gets angry.";
mes "[Mirak]";
- mes "\"I told you not to bother me again! Thats why I paid you!\"";
+ mes "\"I told you not to bother me again! That's why I paid you!\"";
goto L_Kill;
L_Kill:
@@ -106,10 +105,10 @@ L_Kill:
callsub S_Update_Mask_Annoy;
set Mirak_Bantime, gettimetick(2) + 30; // Real: 86400;
set Mirak_Questtime, 0;
- mes "The old man stands up and looks at you angier than ever. He mumbles something and your head explodes.";
+ mes "The old man stands up and looks at you angrier than ever. He mumbles something and your head explodes.";
next;
mes "[Mirak]";
- mes "\"That's what you get for annoying me! I studied under the Mage of Tulimshar!";
+ mes "\"That's what you get for annoying me! I studied under the Mages of Tulimshar!";
mes "I feel better now.\"";
next;
mes "The old man sits back down and continues to read.";