Spelling, grammar, formatting corrections for love triangle quest.

1 files changed, 24 insertions, 24 deletions

diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/lover.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/lover.txt
index f816269b..9246606a 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/lover.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/lover.txt
@@ -41,14 +41,14 @@
 	mes "You see a dead man hanging. This place is creepy!";
 	next;
 	if (baselevel < 85) goto L_Close;
-	mes "Suddenly the man opens his eyes and look at you.";
+	mes "Suddenly the man opens his eyes and looks at you.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Hanged Man]";
 	mes "\"Oh, hello. Nice to see you - I seem to be dead, but I don't know why and why I'm still consciousness. This is very interesting.\"";
 	menu
 		"INTERESTING? Are you crazy?",-;
 	mes "[Hanged Man]";
-	mes "\"Well, as you mention it, it is quite annyoing and uncomfortable. Would you mind to help me coming down on the floor?\"";
+	mes "\"Well, as you mention it, it is quite annoying and uncomfortable. Would you mind helping me down to the floor?\"";
 	next;
 	mes "You take a step towards him, but some invisible force holds you back.";
 	next;
@@ -82,33 +82,33 @@ L_Crystals:
 	next;
 	mes "The dark crystals start to glow and buzz. You take another step back.";
 	next;
-	mes "The buzzing turns louder and louder, so you can't hear the word, the hanged man is calling now.";
+	mes "The buzzing gets louder and louder, so you can't hear a word the hanged man is saying now.";
 	next;
 	heal -300, 0;
 	mes "The crystals explode and hit you!";
 	if (hp <= 0)
 		close;
 	next;
-	mes "You fall down on the floor and blink hectically to regain your eyesight again.";
+	mes "You fall down on the floor and blink frantically to regain your eyesight again.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Hanged Man]";
-	mes "\"Hello? You're ok? I'm sorry, something went wrong. It seems, not only there is a magical barrier, but also my manaflow is blocked. I don't know, if this is because I'm dead or part of the barrier spell.\"";
+	mes "\"Hello? You're ok? I'm sorry, something went wrong. It seems, not only is there a magical barrier, but also my manaflow is blocked. I don't know if this is because I'm dead or part of the barrier spell.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"I never was dead before, so I can't be sure. But I was able to access my magic - it just got out of control in the critical moment.\"";
+	mes "\"I never was dead before, so I can't be sure. But I was able to access my magic - it just got out of control at the critical moment.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"This is fascinating!\"";
 	menu
 		"Ok, you are crazy!",-,
 		"Yes, it is very fascinating to be blown up!",-,
-		"I NEARLY DIED! AND YOU THINK, THIS IS FASCINATING?!",-;
+		"I NEARLY DIED! AND YOU THINK THIS IS FASCINATING?!",-;
 	mes "[Hanged Man]";
-	mes "\"I sometimes forget the fact, not everybody is fascinated by the riddles of magic. Please forgive me.\"";
+	mes "\"I sometimes forget the fact that not everybody is fascinated by the riddles of magic. Please forgive me.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"And I even didn't introduce myself! I am very sorry for my rude behavior!\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"My name is Savaric, first apprentice of the Great Demon Summoner Ymbert.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"If you can forgive me my behaviour, may I ask you for another favor? Can you please search for someone or something in this inn, that could be the source of this dark magic?\"";
+	mes "\"If you can forgive me my behaviour, may I ask you for another favor? Can you please search for someone or something in this inn that could be the source of this dark magic?\"";
 	set @state, 2;
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
 	close;
@@ -137,33 +137,33 @@ L_News:
 			"I don't think so",L_Close;
 
 L_Golbanez:
-	mes "You're explaining how you came in this inn and what Golbanez said to you.";
+	mes "You explain how you came in the inn and what Golbanez said to you.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Savaric]";
-	mes "\"This... this are very disturbing news. Playground he said? Mh.. \"";
+	mes "\"This... this is very disturbing news. Playground he said? Mh.. \"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Savaric seems to be completely absorbed in his thoughts.\"";
 	menu
 		"Hello? Are you still there?",-,
-		"Excuse me, I don't want to interrupt you, but can explain me what's going on? I'm confused",-,
+		"Excuse me, I don't want to interrupt you, but can you explain to me what's going on? I'm confused",-,
 		"Hey! I'm talking with you!",-;
 	mes "Savaric winces.";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Oh, right - I was just thinking. It makes me feel uncomfortable to hear Golbanez being involved in this.\"";
+	mes "\"Oh, right - I was just thinking. It makes me feel uncomfortable to hear about Golbanez being involved in this.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"I told you, I'm the apprentice of a demon summoner, remember? Well, this includes learning about the astral beings in this world.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"And Golbanez - he is a very powerful being, a Demi-God, with a very questionable sense of humor. He was worshipped by a group of cultist some hundred years ago - uhm, some hundreds years ago from my lifetime, I mean.\"";
+	mes "\"And Golbanez - he is a very powerful being, a Demi-God, with a very questionable sense of humor. He was worshipped by a group of cultists some hundred years ago - uhm, some hundreds of years ago from my lifetime, I mean.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"But most of his adherents died, when he thought it would be funny to test their loyality by sending them on a journey over the sea to a paradise island he promised them - of course there was no such island.\"";
+	mes "\"But most of his adherents died when he thought it would be funny to test their loyality by sending them on a journey over the sea to a paradise island he promised them - of course, there was no such island.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Maybe now you understand what I mean with questionable sense of humor.\"";
+	mes "\"Maybe now you understand what I mean about a questionable sense of humor.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"But on the other hand, he can grand great power to those who are capable to deal with him and offer him enough for his service. Trying to do that would be a risky undertaking in any case.\"";
+	mes "\"But on the other hand, he can grant great power to those who are capable of dealing with him and who offer him enough for his service. Trying to do that would be a risky undertaking in any case.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"He told you, this inn was one of his favorite playgrounds - so it seems he was playing one of his evil games with the people in this inn. And now, he resurrected our memories to this parody of life!\"";
+	mes "\"He told you this inn was one of his favorite playgrounds - so it seems he was playing one of his evil games with the people in this inn. And now, he resurrected our memories to this parody of life!\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + "! I need your help again! Please return to Golbanez and try to get out of him what was happening here. But be careful when negotiating, he will demand a service in return.\"";
+	mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + "! I need your help again! Please return to Golbanez and try to get out of him what was happening here. But be careful when negotiating.. he will demand a service in return.\"";
 	set @state, 3;
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
 	close;
@@ -178,17 +178,17 @@ L_Golb:
 		"Now I know what happened. I'll tell you.",-,
 		"I'm sorry to tell you, but this was all your fault.",-;
 
-	mes "You tell about what Golbanez showed to you.";
+	mes "You tell Savaric about what Golbanez showed to you.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Savaric]";
-	mes "\"I.. I can't believe.. My master told me, I need to be careful because of my temper - but I never thought, it would lead me to do such a terrible mistake. Oh, Reid - and all the people in the inn! What have I done?!\"";
+	mes "\"I.. I can't believe.. My master told me, I need to be careful because of my temper - but I never thought, it would lead me to make such a terrible mistake. Oh, Reid - and all the people in the inn! What have I done?!\"";
 	next;
 	mes "He seems pained by his guilt.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Savaric]";
 	mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", please, can you go to Reid and tell her about what I've done? And then ask her if she will ever be able to forgive me?\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"But wait. It is not enough just to ask for forgiveness. Please, can you bring her " + @DIAMOND_AMOUNT + " diamonds? They symbolize my pure feelings for her even.\"";
+	mes "\"But wait. It is not enough just to ask for forgiveness. Please, can you bring her " + @DIAMOND_AMOUNT + " diamonds? They symbolize my pure feelings for her.\"";
 	set @state, 4;
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
 	close;
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ L_Soul:
 	getitem "SorcererRobeRed", 1;
 	set @state, 7;
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
-	mes "\"This is what mages and their apprentices weared when I lived. It is white because I wasn't a master yet.\"";
+	mes "\"This is what mages and their apprentices wore when I lived. It is white because I wasn't a master yet.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"But I guess the old traditions have changed since then.\"";
 	close;
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ L_Reid:
 	close;
 
 L_Not_Enough_Crystals:
-	mes "It seems, you managed to get some, but not enough. Can you bring me more?";
+	mes "It seems you managed to get some, but not enough. Can you bring me more?";
 	close;
 
 L_Full_Inv: