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diff --git a/npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt b/npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt
index 6dccccf4..4b582cc4 100644
--- a/npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt
+++ b/npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
mes "[Arkim the Hermit]";
mes "\"Do you want to go back outside?\"";
menu
- "Yes please", L_Sure,
- "Not yet", -,
+ "Yes, please!", L_Sure,
+ "Not yet.", -,
"Actually... Why do you live here?", L_Interested;
close;
@@ -15,32 +15,32 @@ L_Sure:
L_Interested:
mes "[Arkim the Hermit]";
- mes "\"Oh my, never really thought about it\"";
+ mes "\"Oh my, never really thought about it!\"";
next;
mes "[Arkim the Hermit]";
- mes "\"I guess mostly I enjoy experimenting with bats here\"";
+ mes "\"I guess mostly I enjoy experimenting with the bats here.\"";
menu
- "I see", -,
+ "I see...", -,
"What type of experimenting?", L_Experiment;
close;
L_Experiment:
mes "[Arkim the Hermit]";
- mes "\"Never really thought about it...\"";
+ mes "\"Never really thought about it either...\"";
next;
- mes "*You watch as his old, lazy eyes open wide. And the old man comes alive with engery*";
+ mes "You watch as the hermit's old, lazy eyes open wide, and the old man comes alive with energy.";
next;
mes "[Arkim the Hermit]";
- mes "\"I GUESS I REALLY LIKE CUTTING THEM UP TO SEE HOW THEY WORK!! HAHAHA!\"";
+ mes "\"I GUESS I REALLY LIKE CUTTING THEM UP TO SEE HOW THEY WORK!! HAHAHA!\"";
menu
"YOU'RE CRAZY!", -,
- "Right... me too. Can I help?", L_Quest;
+ "Right... me too! Can I help?", L_Quest;
close;
L_Quest:
@@ -57,6 +57,6 @@ L_Quest:
next;
mes "[Arkim the Hermit]";
- mes "\"And remember never lend your tooth brush to a slime!\"";
+ mes "\"And remember: never lend your toothbrush to a slime!\"";
close;
}