Reviewed the whole quest's storyline. + Reorganised the mob db to make it clearer.

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/npc/024-1/david.txt b/npc/024-1/david.txt
index 612d1c14..7174ee7c 100644
--- a/npc/024-1/david.txt
+++ b/npc/024-1/david.txt
@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@ L_Help:
     
 L_Set:
   mes "[David]";
-  mes "\"Yes, I do. I am her teacher. That makes me remember she didn't hand me her potion yet. Time is running out.\"";
+  mes "\"Yes, I do. I am her new teacher. That makes me remember she didn't hand me her potion yet. Time is running out.\"";
   menu
     "A potion? Oh, uhm... never heard about it.", L_No,
-    "Right, I have her potion. She asked me to bring it to you for her.", -;
+    "Right, I have her potion in my pocket. She asked me to bring it to you for her. Here it is.", -;
   mes "[David]";
-  mes "\"Oh, that's great! Let me look at it...\"";
+  mes "\"Let me see...\"";
   set Rossy_Quest, 8;
-  mes "\"Great! This potion is perfect, tell Rossy that she passed her exam! And here is a small reward for your help.\"";
+  mes "\"This potion is... perfect! Tell Rossy that she succesfully made her potion! And here is a small reward for your help.\"";
   getexp 2000, 0;
   set zeny, zeny + 500;
   close;
@@ -39,12 +39,13 @@ L_No:
 L_Julia:
   mes "[David]";
   mes "\"I heard Rossy's sister got kidnapped. We count on you to find her!\"";
-  mes "\"When you'll find her, talk to her sister or mother.\"";
+  next;
+  mes "\"When you'll find her, talk to her sister and her mother.\"";
   close;
 
 L_FinalEnd:
   mes "[David]";
-  mes "Thank you for finding Julia.";
+  mes "Well done for finding Julia!";
   close;
 
 }