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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt | 31 |
1 files changed, 16 insertions, 15 deletions
diff --git a/npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt b/npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt index 9b10239d6..d75f05e00 100644 --- a/npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt +++ b/npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt @@ -14,6 +14,7 @@ //= 1.3 Fixed a Zeny exploit, made more variables clear
//= on finishing quests. [Lupus]
//= 1.4 Fixed exploits [Lupus]
+//= 1.4a Fixed some typos [IVBela]
//============================================================
@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@ prt_in.gat,235,133,4 script Nurse Aid 90,{ M_Yep:
mes "[Nurse Aid]";
- mes "Well don't feel bad. It can be very difficult fighting those nasty monsters in the begining.";
+ mes "Well don't feel bad. It can be very difficult fighting those nasty monsters in the beginning.";
next;
mes "[Nurse Aid]";
mes "I know because I've been treating a lot people lately who have been fighting them.";
@@ -59,7 +60,7 @@ prt_in.gat,235,133,4 script Nurse Aid 90,{ mes "You can get the bandage from the^0000ff 'Newbie Assistant'^000000 located on the second floor of the Castle.";
next;
mes "[Nurse Aid]";
- mes "Once you get job level 3 and have all of the items come back and see me ok.";
+ mes "Once you get job level 3 and have all of the items come back and see me, OK?";
set FIRSTAID,1;
close;
@@ -87,7 +88,7 @@ L_GetAid: close;
L_GotAid:
- mes "Well hello again. I sure hope the First Aid skill has been helpfull to you. Make sure to continue your hard work and don't forget to rest and heal!";
+ mes "Well hello again. I really hope the First Aid skill has been helpful to you. Make sure to continue your hard work and don't forget to rest and heal!";
close;
}
@@ -99,7 +100,7 @@ prt_in.gat,73,87,2 script Bulma 98,{ if(BaseJob == Job_Novice) goto L_Novice;
L_Other:
- mes "Yeah... I look great.... Afterall, I'm a Knight of the Prontera Chivalry. Kuhahahaha!";
+ mes "Yeah... I look great.... After all, I'm a Knight of the Prontera Chivalry. Kuhahahaha!";
emotion e_heh;
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
@@ -110,7 +111,7 @@ L_Other: L_Novice:
if(JobLevel >= 7) goto L_Start;
mes "Hello my young friend. You remind me of myself when I was young.....";
- mes "Heh heh, I sure miss those days..... Wow... It's funny to think about those years now......";
+ mes "Heh heh, I really miss those days..... Wow... It's funny to think about those years now......";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
mes "They were difficult.... thankfully you can use the ^5555FFPlay Dead^000000 skill when you reach a ^5555FFjob level of 7^000000.";
@@ -120,11 +121,11 @@ L_Novice: L_Start:
if(PLAYDEAD == 1) goto L_GetSkill;
if(getskilllv(143)>0) goto L_GotSkill;
- mes "Hello my young friend. You remind me of myself when I was young..... Heh heh, I sure miss those days.....";
+ mes "Hello my young friend. You remind me of myself when I was young..... Heh heh, I really miss those days.....";
mes "Look at me acting all sentimental like some old man........";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
- mes "Sorry about that. Anyhow, I just want you to know that if you work hard and are patient, you too will recieve the job you desire.";
+ mes "Sorry about that. Anyhow, I just want you to know that if you work hard and are patient, you too will receive the job you desire.";
mes "It may take some time but stay focused and never loose your determination.";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
@@ -139,7 +140,7 @@ L_Start: mes "This skill allows you to act like you just died making any monster that is currently attacking you leave you alone.";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
- mes "I myself have used it as a novice and found it to be very usefull.";
+ mes "I myself have used it as a novice and found it to be very useful.";
mes "It may sound easy enough, but it takes a lot of hard work and practice to make your performance look believable.";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
@@ -177,10 +178,10 @@ L_GetSkill: mes "Good to see you again. Alright, lets start your training....";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
- mes "Let me first introduce to you the concept of 'Method Acting'. Method Acting stresses the need to undrestand every aspect of the role you are playing.";
+ mes "Let me first introduce to you the concept of 'Method Acting'. Method Acting stresses the need to understand every aspect of the role you are playing.";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
- mes "You must learn to think, feel, and even live like your character so that you can understand his/her motivation in any given momement.";
+ mes "You must learn to think, feel, and even live like your character so that you can understand his/her motivation in any given moment.";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
mes "Now let us use this technique to develop your ability to Play Dead!";
@@ -192,7 +193,7 @@ L_GetSkill: mes "~ several hours later ~";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
- mes "Ok, lights, camera, ACTION! Yes... yes... YES!! That's it!! As I watch you laying there I TRULLY believe that you are dead.";
+ mes "OK, lights, camera, ACTION! Yes... yes... YES!! That's it!! As I watch you laying there I TRULY believe that you are dead.";
mes "What a wonderful performance! BRAVO! BRAVO!";
emotion e_gasp;
next;
@@ -214,11 +215,11 @@ L_GetSkill: close;
L_GotSkill:
- mes "Yeah.... I remember back then..... especially those embarrasing novice years... heh. Luckily there was Play Dead.";
+ mes "Yeah.... I remember back then..... especially those embarrassing novice years... heh. Luckily there was Play Dead.";
mes "That saved me many times in the past. I'm sure it has been saving you too.";
next;
mes "[Bulma]";
- mes "Hopefully it is something you have been using well. If you have any friends who are novices, tell them about me. I will help them out as best I can.";
+ mes "Hopefully it is something you have been using well. If you have any friends who are novices, tell them about me. I will help them out as good as I can.";
close;
}
@@ -243,13 +244,13 @@ L_Aid: getitem 930,1;
set got_bandage,1;
mes "[Newbie Assistant]";
- mes "You'll need it in order for her to teach you her exellent healing technique.";
+ mes "You'll need it in order for her to teach you her excellent healing technique.";
next;
mes "[Newbie Assistant]";
mes "When I watch her work it is like watching an angel that has descended down from the heavens.....";
next;
mes "[Newbie Assistant]";
- mes "Her beauty, her grace, sometimes I wish........ (blushes).......... um.... well...err... tell her I said hello.";
+ mes "Her beauty, her grace, sometimes I wish........ (blushes).......... um.... well... err... tell her I said hello.";
emotion e_lv;
close;
L_Play:
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