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| -rw-r--r-- | npc/000-2-3/nard.txt | 8 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/functions/savepoint.txt | 4 |
3 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt index a21ee2b6..bc8dc53b 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ 000-2-3.gat,25,26,0,1 script Nard 306,{ mesn; - mesq l("Hello, Let me just present myself, I'm Captain Nard, it's me who's leader of this ship."); + mesq l("Hello, Let me present myself, I'm Captain Nard, the leader of this ship."); next; mesn; @@ -36,18 +36,18 @@ l_Menu: l_Julia: mesn; - mesq l("You really have a bad amnesia."); + mesq l("You have extremely bad amnesia."); next; mesq l("She is the nurse and the shipkeeper of this ship, and also an excellent cook!"); next; - mesq l("But more than everything, she is the one which took care of you when you were in coma."); + mesq l("But more than everything, she is the one who took care of you when you were in coma."); close; l_Ok: mesn; mesq l("Good to know. From what Darlin reported to me, we'll soon come accross a little island, before we arrive in Artis."); next; - mesq l("It'll be a good moment for you to do some exercice, as the ship is not very vast for that."); + mesq l("It'll be a good time for you to do some exercise, as the ship is not very vast for that."); close; } diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt b/npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt index a6a96f66..f3481503 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ mes " "; mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("You close your eyes some seconds..."), 9); + mes col(l("You close your eyes a few seconds..."), 9); next; mes col(l("..."), 9); next; diff --git a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt index ed3e0379..72c08910 100644 --- a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt +++ b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ function script SavePoint { mes " "; mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("You close your eyes some seconds..."), 9); + mes col(l("You close your eyes a few seconds..."), 9); next; mes col(l("..."), 9); next; @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ function script SavePoint { next; mes col(l("..."), 9); next; - mes col(l("Your position get saved."), 9); + mes col(l("Your position is saved."), 9); next; savepoint @map$, @x, @y; |