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| -rw-r--r-- | npc/001-1/chelios.txt | 28 |
1 files changed, 14 insertions, 14 deletions
diff --git a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt index 493764ad..5f4df544 100644 --- a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt +++ b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt @@ -16,14 +16,14 @@ function give_small_quest { speech 5, - l("Her sword... I have some trouble to finish it."), + l("Her sword... I'm having some trouble finishing it."), l("You see, Enora asked me to do a black iron sword, unfortunately I ran out of such material, and..."), - l("Only Don and the merchant guild has this kind of iron in stock."), - l("I prefer to deal with the entier merchant guild than the old man, Don has this ability to smash down your enthusiasm in a forging sparkle!"), - l("Please help me if you want me to finish this sword, "); + l("Only Don and the merchant guild have that kind of iron in stock."), + l("It's better to deal with the merchant guild than the old man, Don has this ability to hammer down your enthusiasm in sparkling fury!"), + l("If Enora wants her sword now, I need to ask for your help."); - switch (select (l("I have no other choice."), + switch (select (l("Let's not keep her waiting."), l("Not now."))) { case 1: @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ speech 5, l("Thank you very much!"), - l("Talk with Lloyd the banker in the merchant guild, it's the big building on north of Artis, on top of the little hill."); + l("Talk with Lloyd the banker in the merchant guild, it's a big building at the Northern part of Artis, atop the little hill."); setq ArtisQuests_Enora, 2; @@ -46,10 +46,10 @@ function more_info { speech 5, - l("It's the big building on north of Artis, on top of the little hill."), + l("It's the big building at Northern Artis, at the top of a small hill."), l("Take the east road that goes to the north and follow it until you are on top of the cliff."), - l("That part of the town is called the rich hill, it's also the headquarter of the merchant guild."), - l("Lloyd owe me one, but beware of these people, they are obsessed with money..."); + l("That part of the town is called the gilded hill, and where the merchant guild has."), //rich hill + l("Lloyd still owes me, but beware of those money-grubbers, or they will sell your own teeth to you!"); return; } @@ -57,9 +57,9 @@ function quest_completed { speech 5, l("Oh... Awesome!"), - l("You were so long so... I thought that you let me down, so I went to see Don and asked him some of his black iron."), - l("But thank you anyway, I will be able to refund him now!"), - l("Say hi to Enora from me!"); + l("You were gone; I thought you let me down. Some black iron was given to me by Don... after I asked nearly ten times."), + l("But thank you anyway, I can refund him now!"), + l("Say hi to Enora for me!"); return; } @@ -67,8 +67,8 @@ function blacksmith_house{ speech 5, l("Behind me? It's the Blacksmith house, the most renowned throughout Andorra."), - l("There are two shop inside, they are independant from the merchant guild of Artis, now that I think about it, they are the only shops that are independant in Artis..."), - l("This might be because of Don, he is the master blacksmith of this place and a model for me!"); + l("There are two shops inside, they are independent from the merchant guild of Artis; now that I think about it, they are the only shops that are independant in Artis..."), + l("This might be because of Don, he is the master blacksmith of this place and a model to me!"); return; } |