Fixed major language issues in scripts.

7 files changed, 36 insertions, 36 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/ale.txt b/npc/000-1/ale.txt
index 1b07eccd..0e5b2e66 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/ale.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/ale.txt
@@ -13,12 +13,12 @@
     mesn;

     mesq l("Ouch...");
     next;
-    mesq l("These heavy boxs are killing me, I don't feel my arms anymore!");
+    mesq l("These heavy boxes are killing me, I don't feel my arms anymore!");
     next;
 
     menu

         l("Gugli sent me down here to help you."), -,

-        l("What's this fruit?"), l_Plushroom,
+        l("What's that?"), l_Plushroom,
         l("See you aboard."), close;
 
     mes "";

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ l_CallFunc:
 
     menu

         rif(getq(ShipQuests_Ale) == 1, l("I'm still busy, I need to find the other sailors.")), -,

-        l("What's this fruit?"), l_Aquada;

+        l("What's that?"), l_Plushroom;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

@@ -70,21 +70,21 @@ l_Jalad:
 
     next;
     mesn;

-    mesq l("Look, he's there!");
+    mesq l("Look, here he is!");
     next;
 
     restorecam;
     close;
 
-l_Aquada:

+l_Plushroom:

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("This is an @@, a light blue sea fruit. They're highly desired in the archipelago.", getitemlink("Aquada"));

+    mesq l("'That', as you call it, is a @@. There're plenty on this island!", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

     next;

-    mesq l("You can find them in the ocean, near corals and other sea beings. But the sea is too heavy today, you shouldn't try to swim there.");

+    mesq l("It's a kind of mushroom. We call it like that because of it's taste, just like a marshmallow. It also has this name because of it's appearance, it looks like a plush!.");

     next;

-    mesq l("Orelse, if you really wish one, and if you feel capable, you can try killing tortugas or crocs if you're strong enough. I'm sure they could drop one or two @@s.", getitemlink("Aquada"));
-
+    mesq l("There are few groups of these @@s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

+

     close;

 
 }
diff --git a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
index 6edf492a..6c5414a8 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ l_CallFunc:
 

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("Who are you searching?");
+    mesq l("Who are you searching for?");
     next;
 
     menu
diff --git a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
index a7c03fbe..a16c31b2 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ OnStart:
     mesn;

     mesq l("I AM DOING FINE!");

     next;

-    mesq l("SO, WHAT'S YOUR NAME?!");

+    mesq l("HEY, WHAT'S YOUR NAME?!");

     next;

 

     menu

diff --git a/npc/000-1/gulukan.txt b/npc/000-1/gulukan.txt
index 0359bc9a..c238c0ed 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/gulukan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/gulukan.txt
@@ -13,19 +13,19 @@
     mesn;
     mesq l("Hey @@!", strcharinfo(0));
     next;
-    mesq l("How are you feeling now on dry land? Better?");
+    mesq l("How are you feeling, now having foot on steady land? Better?");
     next;
 
     menu
         l("Wow! It seems everyone knows my name."), l_Name,
-        l("Well not a bad sensation feeling something beneath your feet."), l_Continue,
-        l("Not so good. Better if I get back to Nard's ship."), close;
+        l("Well, it isn't a bad sensation to finally feel something beneath my feet."), l_Continue,
+        l("Not so good. I would feel better on Nard's ship."), close;
 
 l_Name:
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("You know sailors love to chat while working.");
+    mesq l("You know, sailors love to chat while working.");
     next;
 
     goto l_Continue;
@@ -34,18 +34,18 @@ l_Continue:
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Are you here exploring the island?");
+    mesq l("Are you here to explore the island?");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Actually Gugli asked me if I can help you bringing him some of your boxes."), -,
-        l("Yes I prefer first to explore places I have never been before."), close;
+        l("Actually Gugli asked me if I could help you bringing him some of your boxes."), -,
+        l("Yes, indeed. I prefer to explore places I have never been to, before doing anything else."), close;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Gugli? Oh I see. Yes, he is pretty used to shout order to everybody down here.");
+    mesq l("Gugli? Oh I see. Yes, he is pretty used to shout orders to everybody down here.");
     next;
-    mesq l("Anyway I am glad I can give you some of those croconuts.");
+    mesq l("Anyway I am glad I can give you some of these @@s.", getitemlink("Croconut"));
     next;
 
     setq ShipQuests_Gulukan, 1;
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ l_RandomC:
 

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("Who are yeye searching?");
+    mesq l("Who are yeye searching for?");
     next;
 
     menu
diff --git a/npc/000-1/jalad.txt b/npc/000-1/jalad.txt
index be46cec9..22bac622 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/jalad.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/jalad.txt
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ l_Continue:
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Surely. Take this box full of plushroom.");
+    mesq l("Surely. Take this box full of @@s.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));
     next;
 
     setq ShipQuests_Jalad, 1;
@@ -52,11 +52,11 @@ l_CallFunc:
 
     menu

         rif(getq(ShipQuests_Jalad) == 1, l("I'm still busy, I need to find the other sailors.")), -,

-        l("What's this fruit?"), OnAquada;

+        l("What's that?"), l_Plushroom;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("Who are you searching?");
+    mesq l("Who are you searching for?");
     next;
 
     menu
@@ -87,14 +87,14 @@ l_Ale:
     restorecam;
     close;
 
-OnPlushroom:

+l_Plushroom:

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("A @@? There're plenty on this island!", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

+    mesq l("'That', as you call it, is a @@. There're plenty on this island!", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

     next;

     mesq l("It's a kind of mushroom. We call it like that because of it's taste, just like a marshmallow. It also has this name because of it's appearance. It looks like a plush!.");

     next;

-    mesq l("There are some groups of these @@'s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

+    mesq l("There are some groups of these @@s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

 

     close;

 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/muller.txt b/npc/000-1/muller.txt
index 4e4a6720..98b065de 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/muller.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/muller.txt
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Well I'm working too! Don't you want me to carry one of those boxes back to Gugli?"), -;
+        l("Well I'm working too! Don't you want me to carry one of these boxes back to Gugli?"), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Ooh... It seems sailors are not able to do their job anymore?!");
+    mesq l("Oh I see... Sailors are not able to do their job anymore, is that it?!");
     next;
     
     menu
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ l_CallFunc:
 
     menu

         rif(getq(ShipQuests_QMuller) == 1, l("I'm still busy, I need to find the other sailors.")), -,

-        l("What's this fruit?"), OnPlushroom;

+        l("What's that?"), l_Plushroom;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

@@ -87,11 +87,11 @@ l_Top:
 l_Plushroom:

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("A @@? There're plenty on this island!", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

+    mesq l("'That', as you call it, is a @@. There're plenty on this island!", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

     next;

     mesq l("It's a kind of mushroom. We call it like that because of it's taste, just like a marshmallow. It also has this name because of it's appearance, it looks like a plush!.");

     next;

-    mesq l("There are few groups of these @@'s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

+    mesq l("There are few groups of these @@s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

 

     close;

 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/tibbo.txt b/npc/000-1/tibbo.txt
index a51f6fe7..bd35f0f3 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/tibbo.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/tibbo.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Gugli asked me to help you carrying one of these box you are filling."), -;
+        l("Gugli asked me to help you carrying one of these boxes you are filling."), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
     next;
     mesq l("I am surprised someone has been sent here for help. It is quite... unusual.");
     next;
-    mesq l("Bring this box back to Gugli. He will be more than happy!");
+    mesq l("Bring this box to Gugli. He will be extremely happy!");
     next;
 
     setq ShipQuests_Tibbo, 1;
@@ -49,11 +49,11 @@ l_CallFunc:
 
     menu

         rif(getq(ShipQuests_Tibbo) == 1, l("I'm still busy, I need to find the other sailors.")), -,

-        l("What's this fruit?"), l_Aquada;

+        l("What's that food?"), l_Aquada;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("Who are you searching?");
+    mesq l("Who are you searching for?");
     next;
 
     menu