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| author | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-06 14:35:17 -0500 |
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| committer | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-06 14:35:17 -0500 |
| commit | f7724f3d5b2cddb69dfd605b46d625528c5f6071 (patch) | |
| tree | 897cb423f864a0ddc6794840a51f7e95368b6504 /npc/001-2-24 | |
| parent | bfdad615a0d290a9207e76c631ac217d57c274b0 (diff) | |
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Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes and changed some dialogue for clarity.
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| -rw-r--r-- | npc/001-2-24/nard.txt | 4 |
1 files changed, 2 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/npc/001-2-24/nard.txt b/npc/001-2-24/nard.txt index 2b334d7c..e88b5848 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-24/nard.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-24/nard.txt @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ speech 5, l("We just returned from a long journey and Artis is a good city to rest and to conclude our exchange."), - l("I think that we will stay in port for a great time, though, if you want to visit some near place we could take you there."), + l("I think that we will stay in port for a great time, though, if you want to visit some nearby we could take you there."), l("Do you want to go somewhere?"); switch (select(l("Lost Island."), @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ L_Lost : mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Julia make appeal the Legion of Aemil to search you, exit the ship and you should see your escort!"); + mesq l("Julia made an appeal to the Legion of Aemil to get in touch with you, exit the ship and you should see your escort!"); next; closedialog; |