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author | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-06 14:35:17 -0500 |
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committer | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-06 14:35:17 -0500 |
commit | f7724f3d5b2cddb69dfd605b46d625528c5f6071 (patch) | |
tree | 897cb423f864a0ddc6794840a51f7e95368b6504 /npc/001-2-22/alige.txt | |
parent | bfdad615a0d290a9207e76c631ac217d57c274b0 (diff) | |
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Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes and changed some dialogue for clarity.
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1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/npc/001-2-22/alige.txt b/npc/001-2-22/alige.txt index cdad1663..6e906446 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-22/alige.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-22/alige.txt @@ -110,9 +110,9 @@ L_ExplainHiding: setcamnpc; mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("No, I can't. I won't! All is I wanted was to travel across the seas for fun, growl... sniff. And in this chink in the wall, as you can see, I have lots of fun."); + mesq l("No, I can't. I won't! All I wanted was to travel across the seas for fun, growl... sniff. And in this chink in the wall, as you can see, I have lots of fun."); next; - mesq l("Oh... um... actually... all is I wanted was to get to Artis. Err... but I didn't, ah, have enough money to pay for the ferry!"); + mesq l("Oh... um... actually... all I wanted was to get to Artis. Err... but I didn't, ah, have enough money to pay for the ferry!"); next; mesq l("Please don't tell people you saw me. I don't want to be decapitated or get thrown into the sea as food for sharks, or get my hair mussed!"); next; @@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ L_AboutReward: L_Accept: menu l("Understood, I will help you."), L_FirstAccepted, - l("We arrived to Artis today."), L_Artis, + l("We arrived in Artis today."), L_Artis, l("I think I should report you to the crew members."), -; setcamnpc; @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ L_Artis: setcamnpc; mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Of course, so why do I still see plain sea from the porthole?"); + mesq l("Of course, so why do I still see open sea from the porthole?"); next; mesq l("I wonder who is in delarium now..."); next; @@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ L_NoReward: L_Drunk: setcamnpc; speech 5, - l("I asked for food but... *hips* Ah, that'll do so!"); + l("I asked for food but... *hips* Ah, that'll do nicely!"); restorecam; goto L_GiveFood; @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ L_IntroMenu: l("Yes."), L_GiveFood, l("Where can I find some food?"), L_FindFood, l("Why are you hiding?") + " " + l("Why don't you come out?"), L_ExplainHiding, - l("We arrived to Artis today."), L_Artis, + l("We arrived in Artis today."), L_Artis, l("I think I should report you to the crew members."), -; setcamnpc; @@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ L_FindFood: next; mesq l("I'd like to catch one of them, but they fly away when I try."); next; - mesq l("Walkig around a bit, it'll be easy for you to catch one, I bet. Impale one of them for me please."); + mesq l("Walking around a bit, it'll be easy for you to catch one, I bet. Impale one of them for me please."); next; restorecam; mesn "Narrator"; |