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author | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-03 11:35:00 -0500 |
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committer | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-03 11:36:29 -0500 |
commit | 1129c87645db521f2036b2062bea196c7021ff7e (patch) | |
tree | 6710327ad28c42bdf2e3c8b005f3acda1824d205 /npc/001-1/qonan.txt | |
parent | 2357fb77c4294b3241a45e72483dff327e37c75a (diff) | |
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Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes in the dialougue of NPCs,
reworded some of the dialogues for understanding.
Fixed punctuation.
Diffstat (limited to 'npc/001-1/qonan.txt')
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1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/npc/001-1/qonan.txt b/npc/001-1/qonan.txt index d1a6e66c..01d6f86a 100644 --- a/npc/001-1/qonan.txt +++ b/npc/001-1/qonan.txt @@ -18,10 +18,10 @@ if (.@q == 3) goto L_QuestDone; speech 2, - l("We didn't meet, right?"), + l("We haven't met, right?"), l("My name is Q'Onan, I'm a member of Nard's crew."), l("I have a lot of work here, so I don't even have time to go to the town."), - l("Could you do a small favour for me?"); + l("Could you do a small favor for me?"); switch (select (l("Go on."), l("I don't have the time sorry."))) { @@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ l("Anyway, the last time I stole something I was almost caught."), l("I robbed a nobleman, took a chest full of coins."), l("But my luck left me, because as soon as I left his house, the guards started chasing me."), - l("It was at night, so I could barely escape. I ran to the Artis Hill."), - l("I was afraid to be busted, so I decided to get rid of the evidence."), + l("It was at night, so I could barely escape. I ran to Artis Hill."), + l("I was afraid to get busted, so I decided to get rid of the evidence."), l("I buried the chest somewhere on that hill. It was dark, so I don't remember where to dig exactly."), l("I'm afraid to go there myself, but if you take the risk, you can have half of the loot."), l("So, what do you say?"); @@ -69,11 +69,11 @@ } L_QuestGiven: - speech 4, l("I asked you to do me a favour, did you forget?"); + speech 4, l("I asked you to do me a favor, did you forget?"); select l("What should I do, again?"); speech 1, - l("Please find the small chest, buried somewhere on the Artis Hill."), - l("You should check on the highest part of the cliff, I was hidding there."), + l("Please find the small chest, buried somewhere on Artis Hill."), + l("You should check on the highest part of the cliff, I was hiding there."), l("Bring it to me, and you will get your reward."); close; |