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authorUnverified <unverified@openmailbox.org>2016-03-03 11:35:00 -0500
committerUnverified <unverified@openmailbox.org>2016-03-03 11:36:29 -0500
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Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes in the dialougue of NPCs,
reworded some of the dialogues for understanding. Fixed punctuation.
Diffstat (limited to 'npc/001-1/qonan.txt')
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1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/npc/001-1/qonan.txt b/npc/001-1/qonan.txt
index d1a6e66c..01d6f86a 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/qonan.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/qonan.txt
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
if (.@q == 3) goto L_QuestDone;
speech 2,
- l("We didn't meet, right?"),
+ l("We haven't met, right?"),
l("My name is Q'Onan, I'm a member of Nard's crew."),
l("I have a lot of work here, so I don't even have time to go to the town."),
- l("Could you do a small favour for me?");
+ l("Could you do a small favor for me?");
switch (select (l("Go on."), l("I don't have the time sorry.")))
{
@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@
l("Anyway, the last time I stole something I was almost caught."),
l("I robbed a nobleman, took a chest full of coins."),
l("But my luck left me, because as soon as I left his house, the guards started chasing me."),
- l("It was at night, so I could barely escape. I ran to the Artis Hill."),
- l("I was afraid to be busted, so I decided to get rid of the evidence."),
+ l("It was at night, so I could barely escape. I ran to Artis Hill."),
+ l("I was afraid to get busted, so I decided to get rid of the evidence."),
l("I buried the chest somewhere on that hill. It was dark, so I don't remember where to dig exactly."),
l("I'm afraid to go there myself, but if you take the risk, you can have half of the loot."),
l("So, what do you say?");
@@ -69,11 +69,11 @@
}
L_QuestGiven:
- speech 4, l("I asked you to do me a favour, did you forget?");
+ speech 4, l("I asked you to do me a favor, did you forget?");
select l("What should I do, again?");
speech 1,
- l("Please find the small chest, buried somewhere on the Artis Hill."),
- l("You should check on the highest part of the cliff, I was hidding there."),
+ l("Please find the small chest, buried somewhere on Artis Hill."),
+ l("You should check on the highest part of the cliff, I was hiding there."),
l("Bring it to me, and you will get your reward.");
close;