Add english check from Pihro.

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
index 4cb70143..38182b89 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
@@ -54,11 +54,11 @@ l_GotMoney:
     mesn;
     mesq l("Be patient a little while longer, in the next few days we will arrive at the port of Artis...");
     next;
-    mesq l("If you feel bored or like turning in circle, you could may talk with other sailors around to get some tasks.");
+    mesq l("If you feel bored or like turning in circles, you may want to talk with the other sailors around here to get some tasks.");
     next;
-    mesq l("From what I know, Gugli my brother, need the help of as many person as possible to charge all of the new stuff found on the island.");
+    mesq l("From what I know, Gugli, my brother, needs the help of as many people as possible to collect all of the new things found on the island.");
     next;
-    mesq l("After, I don't got know much about how the package of everything is going, so asking directly the Cap'tain about it could be a good idea.");
+    mesq l("Other than that, I don't know much about what else is going on, so directly asking the Cap'tain about it could be a good idea.");
 
     close;