Correct english from note, julia, silvio, mickael and darlin script (Pihro),

Correct astapolos script.

4 files changed, 220 insertions, 214 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
index 06b4bf57..d5c9ce97 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
     next;
     mesq l("Ground,");
     next;
-    mesq l("I hope that this is answering your question...") + l("Eheh!");
+    mesq l("I hope that this is answering your question...") + " " + l("Eheh!");
 
     close;
 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
index 688a8d55..7cbb65eb 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
@@ -1,176 +1,175 @@
-// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
-//    Reid
-// Description:
-//    Darlin discussion from 10meter tall mat.
-// Variable:
-//    ShipQuests_Darlin
-// Values: 
-//    0   Never speak
-//    1   Speak+Quest
-
-000-1.gat,25,26,0,1	script	Darlin	103,{
-
-    mesn;
-    set @q, geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Darlin);
-    if (@q > 0) goto l_QuestGiven;
-
-    mesq "Hey! Ehoo!!"; 
-    next;
-    mesq "Do you hear me??";
-    next;
-
-    menu
-        l("Yes!"), -,
-        l("No!"), l_Quit;
-
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("Good!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("I was here when they rescued you!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("Do you feel better??");
-    next;
-
-    menu
-        l("I feel better!"), -,
-        l("Why don't you come down to talk?"), l_GoDown;
-
-    mes "";
-    menu
-        l("And you, how are you going?"), -,
-        l("But I need to go, bye!"), l_Bye;
-// Et là
-
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("I'm going fine!!");
-    next;
-    mesq g(l("So, what's your name lady??"), l("What's your name dude??"));
-    next;
-
-    menu
-         strcharinfo(0) + ".", -,
-         l("Maybe you can come down to talk?"), -;
-
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("What did you said??");
-    next;
-    mesq l("I don't understand!!");
-    next;
-
-    menu
-        l("I said see you later!!"), l_Bye,
-        l("I said... Why don't you come down to talk??"), l_GoDown,
-        l("I'm called") + " " + strcharinfo(0) + "!", -;
-
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq strcharinfo(0) + "?? " + l("It's a nice name!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("So what's up?? What are you doing??");
-    next;
-
-l_Menu:
-    menu
-        l("Maybe you can come down to talk?"), l_GoDown,
-        l("I search Gugli, where is he?"), -,
-        l("Nothing, but I need to go!"), l_Bye;
-
-    setcamnpc "Gugli";
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("Oh look there!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("He is just in bottom of the ship, you can't miss him!!");
-    restorecam;
-
-    close;
-
-l_GoDown:
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("I would like!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("But I can't, I need to keep an eye on the sea, to warn the crew if there is some pirats around!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("I also check if there are some dangerous animals around...");
-    next;
-
-    menu
-        l("Do you seen a danger around?"), -,
-        l("Interesting... I let you at your task then!"), l_Bye;
-
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-
-    if (@q > 0) goto l_DangerAround;
-    seta ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Darlin, 1;
-
-    mesq l("Oh no, but I've noticed a weird light on the other edge of this island, I wonder what it can be...");
-    next;
-    mesq l("Maybe you can look at this??");
-    next;
-
-    menu
-        l("I will check this!"), l_Bye,
-        l("Ok, but Gugli need my help first."), -;
-
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("It's ok, crew task are much important than curiousity!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("Anyway, maybe while searching some food with Gugli you will get the time to look at this!!");
-    close;
-
-l_Bye:
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("Fine, bye!!");
-
-l_Quit:
-    close;
-
-l_QuestGiven:
-    mesq l("Ehoo") + " " + strcharinfo(0) + "!!"; 
-    next;
-    mesq l("Did you find what was this light?!");
-    next;
-
-    menu
-        l("I forgot where it was."), -,
-        l("Oh, it was nothing important!"), l_Nothing,
-        l("Yes, it's a chest!"), l_Chest;
-
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("On the edge of this island!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("You need to walk to the north!!");
-
-    goto l_Menu;
-
-l_Nothing:
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("Oh, ok!!");
-
-    goto l_Menu;
-
-l_Chest:
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("Excuse me, but what?? Speak higher!!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("If you find something then it's good!!");
-
-    goto l_Menu;
-
-l_DangerAround:
-    mesq l("Nothing else than sharks and this weird light!!");
- 
-    close;
-
+// Evol scripts.

+// Authors:

+//    Reid

+// Description:

+//    Darlin discussion from 10meter tall mat.

+// Variable:

+//    ShipQuests_Darlin

+// Values: 

+//    0   Never speak

+//    1   Speak+Quest

+

+000-1.gat,25,26,0,1	script	Darlin	103,{

+

+    mesn;

+    set @q, geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Darlin);

+    if (@q > 0) goto l_QuestGiven;

+

+    mesq l("Hey! Ehoo!!"); 

+    next;

+    mesq l("Do you hear me??");

+    next;

+

+    menu

+        l("Yes!"), -,

+        l("No!"), l_Quit;

+

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("Good!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("I was here when they rescued you!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("Do you feel better??");

+    next;

+

+    menu

+        l("I feel better!"), -,

+        l("Why don't you come down to talk?"), l_GoDown;

+

+    mes "";

+    menu

+        l("And you, how are you doing?"), -,

+        l("But I need to go, bye!"), l_Bye;

+

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("I'm doing fine!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("So, what's your name??");

+    next;

+

+    menu

+         strcharinfo(0) + ".", -,

+         l("Maybe you can come down to talk?"), -;

+

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("What did you say??");

+    next;

+    mesq l("I don't understand!!");

+    next;

+

+    menu

+        l("I said see you later!!"), l_Bye,

+        l("I said... Why don't you come down to talk??"), l_GoDown,

+        l("I'm called") + " " + strcharinfo(0) + "!", -;

+

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq strcharinfo(0) + "?? " + l("That's a nice name!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("So what's up?? What are you doing??");

+    next;

+

+l_Menu:

+    menu

+        l("Maybe you can come down to talk?"), l_GoDown,

+        l("I'm looking for Gugli, where is he?"), -,

+        l("Nothing, I need to go!"), l_Bye;

+

+    setcamnpc "Gugli";

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("Oh look there!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("He is right in the bottom of the ship, you can't miss him!!");

+    restorecam;

+

+    close;

+

+l_GoDown:

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("I would love to!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("But I can't, I need to keep an eye on the sea, to warn the crew if there happen to be some pirates around!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("I also watch for dangerous animals...");

+    next;

+

+    menu

+        l("Have you seen anything dangerous?"), -,

+        l("Interesting... I'll leave you to your task then!"), l_Bye;

+

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+

+    if (@q > 0) goto l_DangerAround;

+    seta ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Darlin, 1;

+

+    mesq l("Oh no, but I've noticed a weird light on the other edge of this island, I wonder what it can be...");

+    next;

+    mesq l("Maybe you can look at this??");

+    next;

+

+    menu

+        l("I'll look at it."), l_Bye,

+        l("Ok, but Gugli needs my help first."), -;

+

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("It's ok, crew tasks are much more important than curiosity!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("Anyway, maybe when you are looking for food with Gugli you'll have the time to look at this!!");

+    close;

+

+l_Bye:

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("Fine, bye!!");

+

+l_Quit:

+    close;

+

+l_QuestGiven:

+    mesq l("Ehoo") + " " + strcharinfo(0) + "!!"; 

+    next;

+    mesq l("Did you find out what the light is?!");

+    next;

+

+    menu

+        l("I forgot where it was."), -,

+        l("Oh, it was nothing important!"), l_Nothing,

+        l("Yes, it's a chest!"), l_Chest;

+

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("On the edge of this island!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("You need to walk north!!");

+

+    goto l_Menu;

+

+l_Nothing:

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("Oh, ok!!");

+

+    goto l_Menu;

+

+l_Chest:

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("Excuse me, but what did you say?? Speak louder!!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("If you find something then it's good!!");

+

+    goto l_Menu;

+

+l_DangerAround:

+    mesq l("Nothing else other than sharks and an odd light!!");

+ 

+    close;

+

 }
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
index 22c2cf8d..8271c6c4 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
@@ -1,40 +1,40 @@
-// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
-//    Reid
-// Description:
-//    Mickael, a sailor which gives some information to the player.
-
-000-1.gat,24,32,0,1	script	Mickael	106,{
-
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("Oh, hey you.");
-    next;
-    mesq l("I hope that you don't mind that we used your raft to build this ramp.");
-    next;
-    mesq l("We technically don't stop in such place, but Capt'ain let us stay here while he writes the location of this new island on his map!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("So we are looking to some new merchandise that we could trade on our next destination.");
-    next;
+// Evol scripts.

+// Authors:

+//    Reid

+// Description:

+//    Mickael, a sailor which gives some information to the player.

+

+000-1.gat,24,32,0,1	script	Mickael	106,{

+

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("Oh, hey you.");

+    next;

+    mesq l("I hope that you don't mind that we used your raft to build this ramp.");

+    next;

+    mesq l("We usually don't stop in such places, but Capt'ain let us stay here while he writes the location of this new island on his map!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("So we are looking for some new merchandise that we could trade at our next destination.");

+    next;

     mesq l("It's yours as well, right?");
-    next;
-
-    menu
-        l("It's right."), -,
-        l("Which one?"), l_Artis;
-
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("If you are looking at us there, we will mostly all be at the Pedro's restaurant and in the INN for Silvio's case...");
-
-    close;
-
-l_Artis:
-    mes "";
-    mesn;
-    mesq l("Artis of course!");
-    next;
-    mesq l("It's where every merchant ship end their travelling, and we won't be the exception!");
-
-    close;
-
+    next;

+

+    menu

+        l("That's right."), -,

+        l("Which one?"), l_Artis;

+

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("If you are looking for us there, mostl all of us will be at the Pedro's restaurant and in the INN for Silvio's case...");

+

+    close;

+

+l_Artis:

+    mes "";

+    mesn;

+    mesq l("Artis of course!");

+    next;

+    mesq l("It's where every merchant ship ends their travelling, and we won't be the exception!");

+

+    close;

+

 }
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
index 04074990..e8404bc5 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 // Evol scripts.
 // Authors:
 //    Reid
+// Description:

+//    Pervert sailor which think that he is supperior at everything.
 
 000-1.gat,42,42,0,1	script	Silvio	314,{
 
@@ -69,6 +71,7 @@
     mesq l("Oh really? How could I forgot a topic as important as that?");
     next;
     mesq l("I think that my wine is very good quality! I'm on my second bottle and I already... What were we talking about again?");
+
     close;
 
 l_VeryImportantNoob:
@@ -86,6 +89,7 @@ l_VeryImportantNoob:
     mesn;
     mesq g(l("Duty is calling me, *hic*, see you later honey."),
            l("Duty is calling me, *hic*, see you later dude."));
+
     close;
 
 l_Julia:
@@ -95,6 +99,7 @@ l_Julia:
            l("Not to kill your dream, but... Julia is mine!"));
     next;
     mesq l("She said that she will accept my application when Piou have teeth. It's just a matter of time, you see?");
+
     close;
 
 l_Piou:
@@ -103,6 +108,7 @@ l_Piou:
     mesq "Seriously?!";
     next;
     mesq "Hurry hurry! Need to verify his teeth!";
+
     close;
 
 l_Artis:
@@ -115,6 +121,7 @@ l_Artis:
     mesq l("Oh, and Olga from the market place as well!");
     next;
     mesq l("You should look at them once we arrive at the port, they are worth it, eheh.");
+
     close;
 
 l_ForeverAlone: