Update english from silvio script (Pihro).

1 files changed, 26 insertions, 26 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
index 47d418bf..04074990 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     mesn;
     mesq l("Hey hey");
     next;
-    mesq g(l("How is it going cutty?"),
+    mesq g(l("How is it going cutie?"),
            l("How is it going dude?"));
     next;
 
@@ -17,32 +17,32 @@
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq g(l("Hehe, no. But I'm sure that a lady like you wish to meet a charmer of my kind!"),
-           l("Hehe, no. But I'm sure that a dude like you wish to meet a gentleman of my kind"));
+    mesq g(l("Hehe, no. But I'm sure that a lady like you would love to meet a charmer like me!"),
+           l("Hehe, no. But I'm sure that a dude like you would like to meet a gentleman like me."));
     next;
-    mesq g(l("So, which good wind bring you here? Were you on your raft to meet me? Or because you heard of my feats on Artis?"),
-           l("So, which good wind bring you here? Were you on your raft to meet my Julia? Or because you want to see these beauty waitress at Artis?"));
+    mesq g(l("So, which good wind brought you here? Were you on your raft to meet me? Or because you've heard of my feats on Artis?"),
+           l("So, which good wind brought you here? Were you on your raft to meet my Julia? Or because you wanted to see the beautiful waitress' at Artis?"));
     next;
 
     menu
-        g(l("You see right, it's about Julia."),
-          l("You are right, it's about you.")), l_Julia,
+        g(l("You're right, it's about Julia."),
+          l("You're right, it's about you.")), l_Julia,
         l("Oh look, there is a piou behind you."), l_Piou,        
         l("What is Artis?"), l_Artis,
         l("None of them?"), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq g(l("My beauty, I was not always a sailor, you know, I was an important person!"),
-           l("My friend, I was not always a sailor, you know, I was an important person!"));
+    mesq g(l("My beauty, I was not always a sailor, you know, I was once an important individual!"),
+           l("My friend, I was not always a sailor, you know, I was once an important individual!"));
     next;
     mesq l("Before...");
     next;
 
     mesn "Gugli";
-    mesq l("Hey, don't worry about him, it's one of the first day since a long time where we can decompress.");
+    mesq l("Hey, don't worry about him, it's one the first days in a while we can chill.");
     next;
-    mesq "Maybe he abused too much his bottle today for celebrate that!";
+    mesq "Maybe he abused too much his bottle today to celebrate that!";
     next;
 
     menu
@@ -62,39 +62,39 @@
 
     menu
         l("You told me that you 'were' important."), l_VeryImportantNoob,
-        l("We discussed about the quality of your wine"), -;
+        l("You mentioned the quality of your wine"), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Oh really? How could I forgot a topic as important as this one?");
+    mesq l("Oh really? How could I forgot a topic as important as that?");
     next;
-    mesq l("I think that my wine is in a very good quality then! I'm just at my second bottle and I already... What was we talking about again?");
+    mesq l("I think that my wine is very good quality! I'm on my second bottle and I already... What were we talking about again?");
     close;
 
 l_VeryImportantNoob:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("It's right!");
+    mesq l("It's true!");
     next;
-    mesq l("But I can't tell you anything about it I'm sorry.") ;
+    mesq l("But I can't tell you anything about it, I'm sorry.") ;
     next;
 
     mesn "Gugli";
-    mesq l("Hey Silvio, it's your turn to carry about the package, go ahead!");
+    mesq l("Hey Silvio, it's your turn to carry the package, go!");
     next;
 
     mesn;
-    mesq g(l("Duty is calling me, *hips*, see you later honey."),
-           l("Duty is calling me, *hips*, see you later dude."));
+    mesq g(l("Duty is calling me, *hic*, see you later honey."),
+           l("Duty is calling me, *hic*, see you later dude."));
     close;
 
 l_Julia:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq g(l("You honore me beauty, but I'm already taken by Julia!"),
-           l("It's not to kill your dream but... Julia is mine!"));
+    mesq g(l("You honor me beauty, but I'm already taken by Julia!"),
+           l("Not to kill your dream, but... Julia is mine!"));
     next;
-    mesq l("She said me that she will accept my application when Piou will have teeth. It's just a meaning of time, you see?");
+    mesq l("She said that she will accept my application when Piou have teeth. It's just a matter of time, you see?");
     close;
 
 l_Piou:
@@ -108,21 +108,21 @@ l_Piou:
 l_Artis:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("It's a nice place... There is some nice chicks...");
+    mesq l("It's a nice place... There are some nice chicks...");
     next;
     mesq l("The elven from the library has tilted on me a while ago, as well as Enora from the warrior guild.");
     next;
     mesq l("Oh, and Olga from the market place as well!");
     next;
-    mesq l("You should look at them once we arrive at the port, they worth it, eheh.");
+    mesq l("You should look at them once we arrive at the port, they are worth it, eheh.");
     close;
 
 l_ForeverAlone:
     mes "";
     mesn "Narrator";
-    mes col(l("Silvio start to speak with his bottle, you leave the conversation."), 9);
+    mes col(l("Silvio starts to speak with his bottle, you leave the conversation."), 9);
 
 l_Quit:
     close;
 
-}
+}
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