Few english fixes in darlin.txt.

1 files changed, 18 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
index 9097c73e..1d1e695a 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 // Authors:

 //    Reid

 // Description:

-//    Darlin discussion from 10meter tall mat.

+//    Darlin discussion from 10 meters tall mat.

 // Variable:

 //    ShipQuests_Darlin

 // Values: 

@@ -15,9 +15,9 @@
     set @q, geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Darlin);

     if (@q > 0) goto l_QuestGiven;

 

-    mesq l("HEY! EHOO!"); 

+    mesq l("HEY! HEY YOU!"); 

     next;

-    mesq l("DO YOU HEAR ME?");

+    mesq l("CAN YOU HEAR ME?");

     next;

 

     menu

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
     next;

 

     menu

-        l("I feel better!"), -,

+        l("I do feel better!"), -,

         l("Why don't you come down to talk?"), l_GoDown;

 

     mes "";

@@ -44,9 +44,9 @@
 

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("I'M DOING FINE!");

+    mesq l("I AM DOING FINE!");

     next;

-    mesq l("SO, WHAT'S YOUR NAME?");

+    mesq l("SO, WHAT IS YOUR NAME?");

     next;

 

     menu

@@ -55,13 +55,13 @@
 

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("WHAT DID YOU SAID?");

+    mesq l("WHAT DID YOU SAY?");

     next;

-    mesq l("I DON'T UNDERSTAND!");

+    mesq l("I DO NOT UNDERSTAND!");

     next;

 

     menu

-        l("I SAID SEE YOU LATER!"), l_Bye,

+        l("I SAID: SEE YOU LATER!"), l_Bye,

         l("I said... WHY DON'T YOU COME DOWN TO TALK?"), l_GoDown,

         l("I'm called") + " " + strcharinfo(0) + "!", -;

 

@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@ l_Menu:
     setcamnpc "Gugli";

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("OH LOOK THERE!");

+    mesq l("OH, LOOK THERE!");

     next;

-    mesq l("HE'S RIGHT IN THE BOTTOM OF THE SHIP, YOU CAN'T MISS HIM!!");

+    mesq l("HE IS AT THE FAR BOTTOM OF THE SHIP, YOU CAN'T MISS HIM!!");

     restorecam;

 

     close;

@@ -115,13 +115,13 @@ l_GoDown:
 

     menu

         l("I'll look at it."), l_Bye,

-        l("Ok, but Gugli needs my help first."), -;

+        l("Sure, but Gugli needs my help first."), -;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

     mesq l("IT'S OK, CREW TASKS ARE MUCH MORE IMPORTANT THAN CURIOSITY!");

     next;

-    mesq l("ANYWAY, MAYBE WHEN YOU ARE LOOKING FOR FOOD WITH GUGLI YOU'LL HAVE THE TIME TO LOOK AT THIS!");

+    mesq l("ANYWAY, MAYBE WHEN YOU ARE LOOKING FOR FOOD WITH GUGLI YOU WILL HAVE THE TIME TO LOOK AT THIS!");

     close;

 

 l_Bye:

@@ -135,13 +135,13 @@ l_Quit:
 l_QuestGiven:

     mesq l("EHOO") + " " + strcharinfo(0) + "!"; 

     next;

-    mesq l("DID YOU FIND OUT WHAT THE LIGHT IS?");

+    mesq l("DID YOU FIND OUT WHAT THE LIGHT WAS?");

     next;

 

     menu

-        l("I forgot where it was."), -,

+        l("I forgot where it was..."), -,

         l("Yes, it's a chest."), l_Chest,

-        l("Oh, it was nothing important!"), l_Nothing;

+        l("Oh, nothing important."), l_Nothing;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

@@ -161,9 +161,9 @@ l_Nothing:
 l_Chest:

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("EXCUSE ME, BUT WHAT DID YOU SAY? SPEAK LOUDER!");

+    mesq l("SORRY, BUT WHAT DID YOU SAY? SPEAK LOUDER!");

     next;

-    mesq l("IF YOU FIND SOMETHING THEN IT'S GOOD!");

+    mesq l("IF YOU FIND SOMETHING, THEN IT'S GREAT!");

 

     goto l_Menu;