English fixes done Qwerty Dragon.

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/ale.txt b/npc/000-1/ale.txt
index 20948cfe..0ffeba31 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/ale.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/ale.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 // Evol scripts.
-// Author:
+// Authors:
+//    Qwerty Dragon
 //    Reid
 // Description:
 //    Sailor part of the Gugli's quest.
@@ -65,7 +66,7 @@ L_CallFunc:
 L_Bottom:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I've seen him on the bottom of the island, ask Jalad for more information.");
+    mesq l("I've seen him down around the southern area of the island, ask Jalad for more information.");
 
     close;
 
@@ -84,11 +85,11 @@ L_Jalad:
 L_Plushroom:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("'That', as you call it, is a @@. There're plenty on this island!", getitemlink("Plushroom"));
+    mesq l("'That', as you call it, is a @@. There are plenty of 'em on this island!", getitemlink("Plushroom"));
     next;
-    mesq l("It's a kind of mushroom. We call it like that because of it's taste, just like a marshmallow. It also has this name because of it's appearance, it looks like a plush!");
+    mesq l("It's a kind of mushroom that tastes like a marshmallow and looks like a plush! @@, get it?", getitemlink("Plushroom"));
     next;
-    mesq l("There are few groups of these @@s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));
+    mesq l("These funny fungi are mushrooming all around this island. Just pick some @@s and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));
 
     close;