Introduced the name of the Drasil Island in npc scripts.

Also fixed some english issues in some npc dialogues.

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
index 7224d087..55588ace 100644
--- a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
@@ -17,11 +17,13 @@ OnTouch:
     mesn "Narrator";
     mes col(l("You are on a raft, adrift in the sea."), 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("With hunger, thirst, and sleep as your only companions; you have the disturbing realization that you can't remember anything of your former life or identity."), 9);
+    mes col(l("With hunger, thirst, and sleep as your only companions, you have the disturbing realization that you can't remember anything of your former life or identity."), 9);
     next;
     mes col(l("All of a sudden, you hear voices from above."), 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("Your body aches, even your hair hurts, and the daylight is painful; but still you open your eyes and see a large ship before you!"), 9);
+    mes col(l("Your body aches, even your hair hurts, and the bright daylight is painful."), 9);
+    next;
+    mes col(l("But still, you open your eyes and see a large ship before you!"), 9);
     next;
     mes col(l("Aboard stand sailors trying to communicate with you."), 9);
     next;
@@ -78,7 +80,7 @@ OnTouch:
     mesn "Narrator";
     mes col(l("The sailors take you aboard their ship."), 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("Click on the NPCs around you to continue the introduction."), 9);
+    mes col(l("Click on the NPCs (Non-Player Characters) around you to continue the introduction."), 9);
     next;
 
     warp "000-0-0.gat", 26, 28;