Fixed several sentences in some scripts.

5 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
index be76f99d..300a5057 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
         l("How are things going?"), -,

         l("How do you know my name?"), l_Name,

         l("Who are you?"), l_Who,

-        l("What's this Aquada?"), l_Aquada;

+        l("What's this?"), l_Aquada;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@ l_Who:
 l_Aquada:

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("This is a light blue sea fruit, they're highly desired around the archipelago.");

+    mesq l("This is an Aquada, a light blue sea fruit. They're highly desired in the archipelago.");

     next;

-    mesq l("You can find them on the ocean, near corals and other sea beings.");

+    mesq l("You can find them in the ocean, near corals and other sea beings.");

     next;

     mesq l("Orelse, if you feel capable, you can try killing Tortugas or Crocs if you're strong enough. I'm sure they could drop one or two @@.", getitemlink("Aquada"));

 

diff --git a/npc/000-1/couwan.txt b/npc/000-1/couwan.txt
index bdec1047..9f7e67d0 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/couwan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/couwan.txt
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ l_QuestGiven:
     mesn;
     mesq l("What are you looking at?");
     next;
-    mesq l("Yeye still have my box? Look less and work more. Go give it to Gugli!");
+    mesq l("Yeye still have my box? Stare less and work more. Go give it to Gugli!");
 
     close;
 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
index aaff5f7b..adef7742 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
     mes "";

     menu

         l("And you, how are you doing?"), -,

-        l("But I need to go, bye!"), l_Bye;

+        l("But I need to go, see you!"), l_Bye;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ l_Menu:
     menu

         l("Maybe you can come down to talk?"), l_GoDown,

         l("I'm looking for Gugli, where is he?"), -,

-        l("I need to go, sorry!"), l_Bye;

+        l("I need to go, sorry."), l_Bye;

 

     setcamnpc "Gugli";

     mes "";

diff --git a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
index 6a1261b8..d2ff2c82 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ l_Julia:
     mesq g(l("You honor me beauty, but I'm already taken by Julia!"),
            l("Not to kill your dream, but... Julia is mine!"));
     next;
-    mesq l("She said that she will accept my application when Piou have teeth. It's just a matter of time, you see?");
+    mesq l("She said she will accept me when Pious will have teeth. It's just a matter of time, you see?");
 
     close;
 
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ l_Piou:
     mesn;
     mesq l("Seriously?!");
     next;
-    mesq l("Hurry, hurry! Need to check his teeth!");
+    mesq l("Hurry, hurry! We need to check his teeth!");
 
     close;
 
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt b/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
index 9a655d94..69705b49 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ l_QuestStory:
     mesn;
     mesq l("Oh, it's you.");
     next;
-    mesq l("So you finally woke up? We all thought you were in something like... You know, one of these long comas.");
+    mesq l("So, you finally woke up? We all thought you were in something like... You know, one of these long comas.");
     next;
 
     menu