Lore and grammar fixes

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt
index 630edffc..4baba918 100644
--- a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 
         speech 5,
             l("Thank you very much!"),
-            l("Talk with Lloyd the Banker in the Merchant Guild, it's a big building at the northern part of Artis, at the top of the small hill.");
+            l("Talk with Lloyd the Banker in the Merchant Guild, it's a big building in the northern side of Artis, at the top of the small hill.");
 
         setq ArtisQuests_Enora, 2;
 
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@
 
     function more_info {
         speech 5,
-            l("It's the big building at northern Artis, at the top of a small hill."),
+            l("It's the big building in northern Artis, at the top of a small hill."),
             l("Take the east road that goes to the north and follow it until you are on top of the cliff."),
-            l("That part of the town is called the gilded hill, it's also where the Merchant Guild has its headquarters."), //rich hill
-            l("Lloyd still owes me, but beware of those money-grubbers, or they will sell your own teeth to you!");
+            l("That part of the town is called the Gilded Hill, it's also where the Merchant Guild has its headquarters."), //rich hill
+            l("Lloyd still owes me, but beware of those money-grabbers, or they might sell your own teeth to you!");
 
         return;
     }
@@ -68,10 +68,10 @@
 
     function blacksmith_house{
         speech 5,
-            l("Behind me? It's the Blacksmith house, the most renowned throughout Aemil."),
+            l("Behind me? It's the Blacksmith House, the most renowned throughout Aemil."),
             l("There are two shops inside, they are independent from the Merchant Guild of Artis."),
             l("Now that I think about it, they are the only shops that are independent in Artis..."),
-            l("...this might be because of Don, he is the master blacksmith of this place and a model to me!");
+            l("...it might be because of Don... he is the master blacksmith of this place and a model to me!");
 
         return;
     }