From f646ddb5ff6801fc222650e6e86f4480144ac623 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WildX Date: Wed, 23 Nov 2016 15:48:42 +0000 Subject: Lore and grammar fixes --- npc/001-1/chelios.txt | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt index 630edffc..4baba918 100644 --- a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt +++ b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ speech 5, l("Thank you very much!"), - l("Talk with Lloyd the Banker in the Merchant Guild, it's a big building at the northern part of Artis, at the top of the small hill."); + l("Talk with Lloyd the Banker in the Merchant Guild, it's a big building in the northern side of Artis, at the top of the small hill."); setq ArtisQuests_Enora, 2; @@ -45,10 +45,10 @@ function more_info { speech 5, - l("It's the big building at northern Artis, at the top of a small hill."), + l("It's the big building in northern Artis, at the top of a small hill."), l("Take the east road that goes to the north and follow it until you are on top of the cliff."), - l("That part of the town is called the gilded hill, it's also where the Merchant Guild has its headquarters."), //rich hill - l("Lloyd still owes me, but beware of those money-grubbers, or they will sell your own teeth to you!"); + l("That part of the town is called the Gilded Hill, it's also where the Merchant Guild has its headquarters."), //rich hill + l("Lloyd still owes me, but beware of those money-grabbers, or they might sell your own teeth to you!"); return; } @@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ function blacksmith_house{ speech 5, - l("Behind me? It's the Blacksmith house, the most renowned throughout Aemil."), + l("Behind me? It's the Blacksmith House, the most renowned throughout Aemil."), l("There are two shops inside, they are independent from the Merchant Guild of Artis."), l("Now that I think about it, they are the only shops that are independent in Artis..."), - l("...this might be because of Don, he is the master blacksmith of this place and a model to me!"); + l("...it might be because of Don... he is the master blacksmith of this place and a model to me!"); return; } -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2