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1 files changed, 18 insertions, 62 deletions
diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt b/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt index 703277552..69a791287 100644 --- a/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt +++ b/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ //===== By: ==================================================
//= kobra_k88
//===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.3
+//= 1.4
//===== Compatible With: =====================================
//= eAthena 0.5.2 +
//===== Description: =========================================
@@ -14,29 +14,22 @@ //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]
//= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]
//= to Muad_Dib
+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]
//============================================================
//North
alberta.gat,23,238,4 script Guide::Alb_Guide 105,{
cutin "prt_soldier",2;
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "Welcome to Alberta,";
- mes "the Port City. Feel free";
- mes "to ask me if you're having";
- mes "trouble finding anything in";
- mes "town, or if you just need";
- mes "guidance around the city.";
+ mes "Welcome to Alberta, the Port City.";
+ mes "Feel free to ask me if you're having trouble finding anything in town, or if you just need guidance around the city.";
L_MENU:
next;
menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;
L_CITY:
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "Please select";
- mes "a location from";
- mes "the following menu.";
- mes "Would you like me";
- mes "to mark locations";
- mes "on your Mini-Map?";
+ mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";
+ mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";
next;
menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;
L_NO:
@@ -48,56 +41,35 @@ L_CONT: L_MENU_2:
menu "^FF0000Merchant Guild^000000",L_MERCHANT,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Inn",L_INN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "Please ask me to Remove";
- mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";
- mes "no longer wish to have the";
- mes "location marks displayed";
- mes "on your Mini-Map.";
+ mes "Please ask me to Remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";
goto L_MENU;
L_MERCHANT:
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "The Merchant Guild,";
- mes "handles Job Changes";
- mes "to the Merchant Class,";
- mes "and is located in the";
- mes "southwest corner";
- mes "of Alberta.";
+ mes "The Merchant Guild, handles Job Changes to the Merchant Class, and is located in the southwest corner of Alberta.";
viewpoint 1,33,41,1,0xFF0000;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_WEAPON:
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "The Weapon Shop";
- mes "can be found in the";
- mes "southern end of Alberta.";
+ mes "The Weapon Shop can be found in the southern end of Alberta.";
viewpoint 1,117,37,2,0xFF00FF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_TOOL:
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "The Tool Shop";
- mes "is kind of close";
- mes "to the center of";
- mes "Alberta. It shouldn't";
- mes "be too hard to find.";
+ mes "The Tool Shop is kind of close to the center of Alberta. It shouldn't be too hard to find.";
viewpoint 1,98,154,3,0xFF00FF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_INN:
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "There's and Inn";
- mes "at the northern";
- mes "end of Alberta";
- mes "where you can rest.";
+ mes "There's and Inn at the northern end of Alberta where you can rest.";
viewpoint 1,65,233,4,0xFF00FF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_FORGE:
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "The Forge in Alberta";
- mes "is in the same building";
- mes "as the Merchant Guild.";
- mes "it's to the southwest.";
+ mes "The Forge in Alberta is in the same building as the Merchant Guild. It's to the southwest.";
viewpoint 1,33,41,5,0xFF00FF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
@@ -118,35 +90,19 @@ L_REMOVE: goto L_MENU;
L_NOTICE:
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "Advances in sorcery and";
- mes "technology have allowed";
- mes "us to update our information";
- mes "system, enabling up to mark";
- mes "locations on your Mini-Map";
- mes "for easier navigation.";
+ mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";
next;
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "Your Mini-Map is located";
- mes "in the upper right corner";
- mes "of the screen. If you can't";
- mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";
- mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";
- mes "in your Basic Information Window.";
+ mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";
+ mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";
next;
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "On your Mini-Map,";
- mes "click on the '+' and '-'";
- mes "symbols to zoom in and";
- mes "out of your Mini-Map. We";
- mes "hope you enjoy your travels";
- mes "here in the city of Alberta.";
+ mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";
+ mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Alberta.";
goto L_MENU;
L_END:
mes "[Alberta Guide]";
- mes "Be safe when you";
- mes "travel and don't hesitate";
- mes "to ask me if you have any";
- mes "questions about Alberta.";
+ mes "Be safe when you travel and don't hesitate to ask me if you have any questions about Alberta.";
cutin "prt_soldier",255;
close;
}
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