Major language fixes in quests.xml.

1 files changed, 48 insertions, 48 deletions

diff --git a/quests.xml b/quests.xml
index 49bfc46c..e57adbbf 100644
--- a/quests.xml
+++ b/quests.xml
@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
     <var id="0">
         <quest name="Abide by the Rules" group="Ship" incomplete="1">
             <name>Abide by the Rules</name>
-            <text>Before resuming your adventure and exploration, you need to register on the boarding list of the ship signing its rules.</text>
+            <text>Before resuming your adventure and exploration, you need to register on the boarding list of the ship by signing its rules.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>Speak with Julia the shipkeeper of the ship. She is waiting for you on the first deck.</text>
+            <text>Speak to Julia, the shipkeeper of this ship. She is waiting for you on the first deck.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest giver: Julia.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, First Deck. (27,24)</text>
@@ -15,9 +15,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Abide by the Rules" group="Ship" complete="2">
             <name>Abide by the Rules</name>
-            <text>Julia has shown you all the rules you have to follow during your adventure in order to behave properly with other players.</text>
+            <text>Julia told you about all the rules you have to follow during your adventure so that you behave properly with other people.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>Keep them in mind and if you think you still need to hear them talk to Julia again.</text>
+            <text>Keep them in mind, but if you think you still need to hear them again, just talk to Julia.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest giver: Julia.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, First Deck. (27,24)</text>
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
             <name>Warm Smelly Clothes</name>
             <text>Magic Arpan is waiting for you. Go speak to him.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>To speak to an NPC, click on him with your mouse or select him with then N key and then start to chat with him with the T key.</text>
+            <text>To speak to an NPC, click on it with your mouse or select him using the N key and then chat using the T key.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest giver: Magic Arpan.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (39,33)</text>
@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Warm Smelly Clothes" group="Ship" incomplete="2">
             <name>Warm Smelly Clothes</name>
-            <text>To open your inventory, use the F3 key or use your mouse to select it in the above menu in your client.</text>
+            <text>To open your inventory, use the F3 key or use your mouse to select it in the above menu of your client.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>When your inventory is open, you can equip an item by selecting it and clicking 'Equip'. You can do the same to unequip an item by clicking on 'Unequip'.</text>
+            <text>When your inventory is open, you can equip an item by selecting it and clicking on 'Equip'. You can do the same to remove an item by clicking on 'Unequip'.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Items have different effects. Some will heal you, some can be used as weapons or armor, and some can be sold for gold.</text>
             <text></text>
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Warm Smelly Clothes" group="Ship" complete="3">
             <name>Warm Smelly Clothes</name>
-            <text>You have worn the clothes you have found in the chest Magic Arpan has shown you.</text>
+            <text>You wore the clothes you found in the chest that Magic Arpan showed you.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>They are creased and a bit smelly but the warm sensation they give you makes you feel at home.</text>
+            <text>They are old and a bit smelly but the warm sensation they give makes you feel at home.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest giver: Magic Arpan.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (39,33)</text>
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
             <name>Piberries Lover</name>
             <text>A mysterious stowaway needs your help. He hides at the bottom level of the ship, in the storage room.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>It seems to be an urgent task, but he is afraid that you could be a sailor, so be ready!</text>
+            <text>It seems to be an urgent task, but he is afraid that you could be a sailor, so watch out!</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Alige.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (33,31)</text>
@@ -81,11 +81,11 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Piberries Lover" group="Ship" incomplete="2">
             <name>Piberries Lover</name>
-            <text>Alige, the mysterious traveller, requests your help to find some food for him.</text>
+            <text>Alige, the mysterious traveller, is requesting your help to find him some food.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>He in fact hides in a hole of the hallway, which leads to the ship's storage where he can reach some barrels full of piberries.</text>
+            <text>In fact, he hides in a hole in the main hallway. It leads to the ship's storage room where he can reach for some barrels full of [@@507|Piberries@@].</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>It seems he is now sick of eating these berries all the time. That is why he would like you to find him other kinds of food and bring them to him.</text>
+            <text>He is sick of eating these berries all the time. That is why he would like you to find him other kinds of food and bring them to him.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Alige.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (33,31)</text>
@@ -93,9 +93,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Piberries Lover" group="Ship" complete="3">
             <name>Piberries Lover</name>
-            <text>You have brought Alige some food different from the Piberries he usually eats everyday.</text>
+            <text>You brought Alige some food, different from the [@@507|Piberries@@] he usually eats.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>He seems to be eager of tasting new flavours. Try to bring him other type of foods. He may have something else to give you in exchange.</text>
+            <text>It looks like he is eager of tasting new flavors. Try bringing him other types of food. He may have something to give you in exchange.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Alige.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (33,31)</text>
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
             <name>Ratto Extermination</name>
             <text>Peter needs your help to clean the bottom of the ship from some rattos.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>Speak with him when you will have time to help him.</text>
+            <text>Speak to him when you will have time to help him.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Peter.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (60,35)</text>
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
             <name>Ratto Extermination</name>
             <text>Peter asked you to empty the bottom of the ship for free.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>Maybe next time he may have something else to offer you...</text>
+            <text>Maybe next time he will have something to offer you...</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Peter.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (60,35)</text>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Ratto Extermination" group="Ship" incomplete="2">
             <name>Ratto Extermination</name>
-            <text>Cleaning the bottom of the ship is a hard work, but Peter is offering you some gold for it.</text>
+            <text>Cleaning the bottom of the ship is a tough work, but Peter is offering you some gold for it.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Peter.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (60,35)</text>
@@ -133,9 +133,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Ratto Extermination" group="Ship" complete="3">
             <name>Ratto Extermination</name>
-            <text>You have helped Peter cleaning the bottom of the ship for free.</text>
+            <text>You helped Peter cleaning the bottom of the ship for free.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>However it seems that those Rattos can come back again. Later, you may want to ask Peter if he needs help again.</text>
+            <text>However, it looks like these rattos can come back again. Later, you could ask Peter if he needs your help again.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Peter.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (60,35)</text>
@@ -143,9 +143,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Ratto Extermination" group="Ship" complete="5">
             <name>Ratto Extermination</name>
-            <text>You have helped Peter cleaning the bottom of the ship. He has rewarded you with some gold.</text>
+            <text>You helped Peter cleaning the bottom of the ship. He rewarded you with some gold.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>However it seems that those Rattos can come back again. Later, you may want to ask Peter if he needs help again.</text>
+            <text>However, it looks like these rattos can come back again. Later, you could ask Peter if he needs your help again.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Peter.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (60,35)</text>
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Ratto Extermination" group="Ship" incomplete="4">
             <name>Ratto Extermination</name>
-            <text>This time Peter seems to have a reward for you. After you have cleaned the bottom of the ship, ask him a reward for your work.</text>
+            <text>This time, Peter seems to have a reward for you. After you cleaned the bottom of the ship, ask him for a reward.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Peter.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (60,35)</text>
@@ -163,9 +163,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
     <var id="4">
         <quest name="One of Us" group="Ship" incomplete="1">
             <name>One of Us</name>
-            <text>Captain Nard asked you to help his crew on the island outside the ship.</text>
+            <text>Nard, the captain of the ship, asked you to help his crew on the island outside the ship.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>Gugli, one of his sailors, waits for you on the shore to tell you about the task.</text>
+            <text>Gugli, one of his sailors, is waiting for you on the shore to tell you about the task.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Nard.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Nard's Room. (25,26)</text>
@@ -173,9 +173,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="One of Us" group="Ship" incomplete="2">
             <name>One of Us</name>
-            <text>You have reported Captain Nard that you have succesfully accomplished Gugli's mission.</text>
+            <text>You reported to Nard that you successfully accomplished Gugli's task.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>As the perfect Captain's sailor you are, you are waiting for the next order, eagerly.</text>
+            <text>As a perfect sailor, you are waiting for the next order, eagerly.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Nard.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Nard's Room. (25,26)</text>
@@ -183,9 +183,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="One of Us" group="Ship" incomplete="3">
             <name>One of Us</name>
-            <text>Captain Nard said he still has a task for you. It seems he did a mistake in the past, choosing the right lieutenant for this ship.</text>
+            <text>Captain Nard has another task for you. It seems he did a mistake in the past, choosing the right lieutenant for this ship.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>Chef Gado, the former shipkeeper, may have something to say about that.</text>
+            <text>Chef Gado, the former shipkeeper, may have something to say about that. So does Julia, the current lieutenant of the ship.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Nard.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Nard's Room. (25,26)</text>
@@ -193,9 +193,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="One of Us" group="Ship" incomplete="4">
             <name>One of Us</name>
-            <text>You have smartly solved liutenants' conflict onboard. Nard is proud of his new sailor.</text>
+            <text>You smartly solved the lieutenants' conflict onboard. Nard is proud of his new sailor.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>Take your reward from the box near the captain to officially become one of Nard's crew members.</text>
+            <text>Take your reward from the box near the captain in order to officially become one of Nard's crew members.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Nard.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Nard's Room. (25,24)</text>
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="One of Us" group="Ship" complete="5">
             <name>One of Us</name>
-            <text>Nard has officially proclaimed you member of his crew!</text>
+            <text>Nard officially proclaimed you as member of his crew!</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Nard.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Nard's Room. (25,24)</text>
@@ -211,9 +211,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
     </var>
     <var id="8">
-        <quest name="Treasure's Glints" group="Ship" complete="1">
-            <name>Treasure's Glints</name>
-            <text>You have spotted a treasure chest on the top of a cliff in the west side of the island.</text>
+        <quest name="Treasure's Glint" group="Ship" complete="1">
+            <name>Treasure's Glint</name>
+            <text>You spotted a treasure chest at the top of a cliff on the east side of the island.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>The chest contains gold and an [@@514|Old Book@@].</text>
             <text></text>
@@ -224,9 +224,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
     <var id="9">
         <quest name="Fish and Scams" group="Ship" incomplete="1">
             <name>Fish and Scams</name>
-            <text>A sailor, who wasn't on Gugli's list, gave you his box full of food.</text>
+            <text>A sailor, who wasn't on Gugli's list, gave you a box full of food.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>He did not mention any reward, but he would like you to deliver this box to Gugli as soon as you can.</text>
+            <text>He did not mention any reward, but he would like you to deliver it to Gugli as soon as you can.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Couwan.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: Desert Island. (85,108)</text>
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
          </quest>
          <quest name="Fish and Scams" group="Ship" complete="2">
             <name>Fish and Scams</name>
-            <text>Couwan is an awful, roguish person. No reward from him!</text>
+            <text>Couwan is an awful, roguish person. No reward from him...</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>However, Gugli gave you some gold pieces and apologized for this unexpected task.</text>
             <text></text>
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
     <var id="16">
         <quest name="Unexpected Help" group="Ship" incomplete="1">
             <name>Unexpected Help</name>
-            <text>Gugli told you about sailors' task on the island. He wants you to help some of them bringing him 6 boxes full of [@@513|Croconuts@@], [@@714|Aquadas@@] and [@@515|Plushrooms@@].</text>
+            <text>Gugli told you about the sailors' task on the island. He wants you to help some of them bringing him 6 boxes full of [@@513|Croconuts@@], [@@714|Aquadas@@] and [@@515|Plushrooms@@].</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>You need to collect the boxes from Tibbo, Gulukan, Q'Muller, Astapolos, Jalad and Ale.</text>
             <text></text>
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Unexpected Help" group="Ship" complete="2">
             <name>Unexpected Help</name>
-            <text>You completed all the tasks Gugli gave you. Sailors of this ship will never forget you!</text>
+            <text>You completed all the tasks Gugli gave you. Sailors of the ship will never forget you!</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Gugli.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: Desert Island. (85,108)</text>
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
     <var id="17">
         <quest name="Two Lieutenants in One Boat" group="Ship" incomplete="1">
             <name>Two Lieutenants in One Boat</name>
-            <text>Chef Gado wants you to collect 2 [@@505|Piou Legs@@], 2 [@@512|Half Croconut@@], 1 [@@714|Aquada@@] and 1 [@@508|Sea Drops@@] to prepare a special mean, a [@@717|Poisoned Dish@@], for Julia.</text>
+            <text>Chef Gado wants you to collect 2 [@@505|Piou Legs@@], 2 [@@512|Half Croconuts@@], 1 [@@714|Aquada@@] and 1 [@@508|Sea Drops@@] to prepare a [@@717|Poisoned Dish@@], for Julia.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Chef Gado.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (17,28)</text>
@@ -278,9 +278,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Two Lieutenants in One Boat" group="Ship" incomplete="2">
             <name>Two Lieutenants in One Boat</name>
-            <text>Chef Gado has prepared a [@@717|Poisoned Dish@@]. He would like you to give Julia his special dish.</text>
+            <text>Chef Gado prepared the [@@717|Poisoned Dish@@]. He would like you to give it to Julia.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>While Chef Gado wants you to poison Julia, you remember she looked after you when you were sick. She doesn't deserve to be punished, or does she?</text>
+            <text>While Chef Gado wants you to poison Julia, you remember she looked after you when you were sick. She doesn't deserve to be punished... or does she?</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Chef Gado.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (17,28)</text>
@@ -292,19 +292,19 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Chef Gado.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (17,28)</text>
-            <text>Rewards: Unknown.</text>
+            <text>Reward: Unknown.</text>
         </quest>
         <quest name="Two Lieutenants in One Boat" group="Ship" complete="4">
             <name>Two Lieutenants in One Boat</name>
-            <text>You have successfully poisoned Julia. Chef Gado has finally been avenged!</text>
+            <text>You successfully poisoned Julia. Chef Gado has finally been avenged!</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Chef Gado.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (17,28)</text>
-            <text>Rewards: [@@502|Bread@@], 60 GP.</text>
+            <text>Reward: 60 GP, [@@502|Bread@@].</text>
         </quest>
         <quest name="Two Lieutenants in One Boat" group="Ship" complete="5">
             <name>Two Lieutenants in One Boat</name>
-            <text>You have refused to accomplish Chef Gado's evil plan. Julia is safe!</text>
+            <text>You refused to accomplish Chef Gado's evil plan. Julia is now safe.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Chef Gado.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (17,28)</text>
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Two Lieutenants in One Boat" group="Ship" complete="6">
             <name>Two Lieutenants in One Boat</name>
-            <text>You preferred to trust Julia, she deserves to be the lieutenant of the ship after all!</text>
+            <text>You preferred trusting Julia because, after all, she deserves to be the lieutenant of the ship.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Chef Gado.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (17,28)</text>