Clean up and improve the Two Liutenants quest.

2 files changed, 20 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
index abe25d6f..d7afb810 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@
 //    11   Quest accepted.
 //    12   Ingredients collected, ready to poison Julia.
 //    13   Julia poisoned.
-//    14   Quest complete.
-//    15   PoisonDish Return.
-//    16   Quest aborted. Julia wins.
+//    14   Quest complete. Chef Gago wins.
+//    15   Quest complete. Julia wins (poison dish returned).
+//    16   Quest complete. Julia wins.
 //    Nard:
 //    20   Introduction of the boxes and Nard. This is displayed when the player never spoke to Nard or his box.
 //    21   Nard spoke and gave access to the outdoor of the ship.
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 
 l_Menu:
     menu
-        rif(@q3 == 3, l("I heard rumors about some old hostilities between you and Gado. Are they true?")), l_Rumors,
+        rif(@q3 == 3, l("I have heard rumors about some old hostilities between you and Gado. Are they truthful?")), l_Rumors,
         rif(@q2 == 2 && countitem("PoisonedDish", 1), l("Well... No wait, I have something for you but you shouldn't eat it... I'm taking it back to the kitchen.")), l_Regret,
         rif(@q2 == 2 && countitem("PoisonedDish", 1), l("I have brought you a tasty present for your delicate mouth.")), l_PoisonJulia,
         lg("I made a mistake, I would like to change my language."), l_ChooseLang,
@@ -233,28 +233,33 @@ l_Regret:
 l_Rumors:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("You shouldn't believe all of the stories drunk sailors tell you.");
+    mesq l("You shouldn't believe all stories sailors tell when they are drunk.");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Let's say the person who told me about that is well respected on this ship and never drunk."), -;
+        l("Let's say that who told me that was a respectable person and not even drunk."), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Hahaha! All sailors aboard this ship are always drunk... Well... Except... Wait, what?! Nard told you?!");
+    mesq l("Ahahah. All sailors here are always drunk, well... Except... What?! Nard told you that?!");
     next;
-    mesq l("Doesn't he like the way I'm taking care of his ship? Everything is clean and tidy with me, rightful lieutenant of La Johanne.");
+    mesq l("Doesn't he appreciate how I'm taking care of his ship? Everything is finally clean and tidy with me as the liutenant of La Johanne.");
     next;
-    mesq l("I give tasks to every single sailor, all day long. That should make him happy!");
+    mesq l("I give tasks to every sailor all day long to make him happy!");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Well... I don't think it is the best way to rule a ship. Think about it."), l_Quit,
-        l("Actually, everything seems to work perfectly under your guidance. Nard has done the right choice."), -;
+        l("Uhm I don't think it is the best way to rule a ship. See you..."), l_Quit,
+        l("Actually everything seems in perfect order under your guidance. Nard has done the right choice."), -;
 
+    setq ShipQuests_ChefGado, 6;
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I'm glad you're on my side! See you around.");
+    mesq l("I'm glad you are on my side.");
+    next;
+    mesq l("Take this money as a reward for your nice words.");
+    set zeny, zeny + 40;
+    message strcharinfo(0), l("You receive 40 GP!");
     
     close;    
     
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt b/npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt
index 64cb221e..1a2d6895 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@
 //    1   Quest accepted.
 //    2   Ingredients collected, ready to poison Julia.
 //    3   Julia poisoned.
-//    4   Quest complete.
-//    5   PoisonDish Return.
-//    6   Quest aborted. Julia wins.
+//    4   Quest complete. Chef Gago wins.
+//    5   Quest complete. Julia wins (poison dish returned).
+//    6   Quest complete. Julia wins.
 
 000-2-1.gat,27,28,0,1	script	Chef Gado	318;2,{
 
@@ -188,7 +188,6 @@ l_Aborting:
     mesq l("Give me back this dish now, you dirty liar!");
 
     if (countitem("PoisonedDish") > 0), delitem "PoisonedDish", 1;
-    setq ShipQuests_ChefGado, 6;
 
     next;
     mesq l("You're like the rest of this filthy crew, I can't trust you!");