Language fixes in some clientdata-beta files.

3 files changed, 16 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/items.xml b/items.xml
index c3d7f8fa..745d227d 100644
--- a/items.xml
+++ b/items.xml
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="506"
         image="usable/lettuce.png"
         name="Lettuce"
-        description="The perfect food if you're hungry but want to lose some weight."
+        description="The perfect food if you're hungry but want to lose weight."
         effect="+15 HP"
         type="usable"
         weight="5"
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="720"
         image="generic/fouit-teeth.png"
         name="Bat's Teeth"
-        description="What sharp teeth! They seem more dangerous than a knife."
+        description="What sharp teeth! They seem to be more dangerous than a knife."
         type="generic"
         weight="10"
         maxFloorOffset="16"/>
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="1300"
         image="equipment/chest/cottonshirt.png|S:#3c3c3c,3e3c38,4d4d4d,514d47,686868,706662,919191,99917b,b6b6b6,c0b698,dfdfdf,e4dfca"
         name="Creased Shirt"
-        description="An old shirt given to you by a sailor."
+        description="An old shirt given to you by a sailor. It isn't very fashionable..."
         effect="Defense +2"
         type="equip-torso"
         weight="50"
@@ -521,8 +521,8 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <!-- Boots -->
     <item id="1800"
         image="equipment/feet/boots.png|S:#3c3c3c,40332d,4d4d4d,5e4a3d,686868,705740,919191,a1825d,b6b6b6,b59767,dfdfdf,dbbf88"
-        name="Lousy Moccasin"
-        description="Orc-made moccasin. Not sure from which skin these boots were made."
+        name="Lousy Moccasins"
+        description="Orc-made moccasins. Not sure from which skin these shoes were made."
         effect="Defense +1"
         type="equip-feet"
         weight="25"
@@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="2200"
         image="equipment/legs/shorts.png|S:#4d4d4d,514d47,686868,706662,919191,99917b,b6b6b6,c0b698,dfdfdf,e4dfca"
         name="Creased Shorts"
-        description="An old pair of shorts given to you by a sailor. They smell aweful."
+        description="An old pair of shorts given to you by a sailor. They smell awful."
         effect="Defense +2"
         type="equip-legs"
         weight="35"
diff --git a/npcs.xml b/npcs.xml
index 7b26a98e..354ace09 100644
--- a/npcs.xml
+++ b/npcs.xml
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ IDs 990-999 = Special
 
     <!-- Animated NPCs -->
     <npc id="301">
-        <!-- Awesome Eyes -->
+        <!-- Awesome Eyes, reminds you of someone. -->
         <sprite>npcs/xml/alige.xml</sprite>
     </npc>
     <npc id="302">
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ IDs 990-999 = Special
         <sprite>npcs/xml/julia.xml</sprite>
     </npc>
     <npc id="305">
-        <!-- Group of Sailors -->
+        <!-- Group of Sailors, standing still. -->
         <sprite>npcs/xml/sailors.xml</sprite>
     </npc>
     <npc id="306">
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ IDs 990-999 = Special
         <sprite>npcs/xml/magicarpan.xml</sprite>
     </npc>
     <npc id="308">
-        <!-- Piou Rocket, jumping on its iron bar. -->
+        <!-- Piou Rocket, jumping on its wooden bar. -->
         <sprite>npcs/xml/piourocket.xml</sprite>
     </npc>
     <npc id="309">
diff --git a/quests.xml b/quests.xml
index 262ef920..9f1337e2 100644
--- a/quests.xml
+++ b/quests.xml
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
             <text>Rules:</text>
             <text>1. Do not bot. This means you are not allowed to use any automation programs or use keyboard tricks. Any away from keyboard activity will be considered as botting except standing still.</text>
             <text>2. Do not spam. This also concerns trade spam.</text>
-            <text>3. Do not multibox. This means you cannot have more than one active character logged in at a time. You are not allowed to use more than one active client at a time to attack in groups.</text>
-            <text>4. Do not trashtalk, beg or use rude language in your character name or in the chat, except for roleplay purposes.</text>
-            <text>5. Do not speak any other language other than English in public areas. You are free to speak any language you want in private chats or when alone with friends.</text>
+            <text>3. Do not multi box. This means you cannot have more than one active character logged in at a time. You are not allowed to use more than one active client at a time to attack in groups.</text>
+            <text>4. Do not trash talk, beg or use rude language in your character name or in the chat, except for role play purposes.</text>
+            <text>5. Do not speak any other language than English in public areas. You are free to speak any language you want in private chats or when alone with friends.</text>
             <text>6. Follow the social convention listed on the RFC1855 article.</text>
         </quest>
     </var>
@@ -64,7 +64,8 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
     <var id="3">
         <quest name="Peter" group="Ship" incomplete="6" complete="2">
             <name>Ratto Extermination</name>
-            <text>Peter needs your help to clean the bottom of the ship from some Rattos. Speak to him when you will have time to help him.</text>
+            <text>Peter needs your help to clean the bottom of the ship from some rattos.</text>
+            <text> Speak to him when you will have time to help him.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (60,35)</text>
         </quest>
@@ -121,7 +122,8 @@ Copyright (C) 2012 Evol Online -->
     <var id="9">
         <quest name="Couwan" group="Ship" incomplete="1" complete="4">
             <name>Fish and Scams</name>
-            <text>A sailor, who wasn't on Gugli's list, gave you his box full of food. He did not mention any reward, but he would like you to deliver this box to Gugli as soon as you can.</text>
+            <text>A sailor, who wasn't on Gugli's list, gave you his box full of food.</text>
+            <text>He did not mention any reward, but he would like you to deliver this box to Gugli as soon as you can.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Coordinates: Desert Island. (85,108)</text>
             <text>Difficulty: ✩✩✩✩✩✩</text>