Small changes and fixes to NPC dialogues (barman, caretaker, Cerhan, crying child, diary, evil guard and GY INN shops)

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/027-2/diary.txt b/world/map/npc/027-2/diary.txt
index 06a8d067..bfef84a6 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/027-2/diary.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/027-2/diary.txt
@@ -11,24 +11,24 @@
     end;
 
 L_Diary:
-    mes "You pull out Reid's diary from behind a huge poem book. In the back of the book, you find some entries which seem to be about Savaric.";
+    mes "You pull out Reid's diary from behind a huge poetry book. Towards the end of the diary, you find some entries which seem to be about Savaric.";
     next;
-    mes "'Savaric keeps confusing me - one time he is so flirty and slinky, another time he is cold and unfriendly. What is it with this man?'";
+    mes "'Savaric keeps confusing me - one time he is so flirtatious and smooth, another time he is cold and unfriendly. What is it with this man?'";
     next;
-    mes "'I need to stay away from him! It's not right, what I am feeling. It seems Hamond doesn't suspect anything of my feelings - but I know, it's just a matter of time. I need to come to my senses again!'";
+    mes "'I need to stay away from him! It's not right, what I am feeling. It seems Hamond doesn't suspect anything about my feelings - but I know, it's just a matter of time. I need to come to my senses again!'";
     next;
-    mes "'Oh, this chaos between Savaric and me is getting serious. I was in his room today and he put his arms around me - I wanted to push him away, but I couldn't move. It was such a sweet feeling. I was torn between my brain saying 'No!' and my body wanting to feel his touch. Then Aldred showed up and Savaric let me go.'";
+    mes "'Oh, this chaotic situation between Savaric and me is getting serious. I was in his room today and he put his arms around me - I wanted to push him away, but I couldn't move. It was such a sweet feeling. I was torn between my brain saying 'No!' and my body wanting to feel his touch. Then, Aldred showed up and Savaric let me go.'";
     next;
-    mes "The next part is blurred - it seems Reid was crying while writing.";
-    mes "'Savaric was talking again about leaving, because he can't find the mana seed. The thought that I would never see him again made me feel like I was falling into a big black hole! I need to decide what to do. But Hamond - I owe him so much. And what about Aldred?'";
+    mes "The next part is blurred - it seems Reid was crying while writing it.";
+    mes "'Savaric was talking again about leaving, because he can't find the mana seed. The thought that I would never see him again made me feel like I was falling into a dark abyss! I need to decide what to do. But Hamond - I owe him so much. And what about Aldred?'";
     next;
-    mes "'We kissed each other - oh, I'm feeling so bad. I'm a disloyal slut. But I want it to happen again.'";
+    mes "'We kissed each other - oh, I'm feeling so bad. I'm an unfaithful slut. But I want it to happen again, so badly.'";
     next;
-    mes "'I told Savaric we have to stop with it - he was very understanding. But then he started to hold me again and I couldn't resist. I completely don't know what to do! His touch at my waist, even though over my clothes, made me feel hotter than Hamonds touch ever did.'";
+    mes "'I told Savaric we have to stop with this - he was very understanding. But then he started to hold me again and I couldn't resist. I don't know what to do, at all! His touch on my waist, even through my clothes, made me feel more excited than Hamond's touch ever did.'";
     next;
-    mes "'I don't know if Hamond suspects us - he was holding me tight all through the night, whispering declarations of love in my ears. Oh, I'm feeling so bad.'";
+    mes "'I don't know if Hamond suspects us - he was holding me tight all through the night, whispering declarations of love in my ears. Oh, I feel so bad.'";
     next;
-    mes "'Hamond won't be here tomorrow night - he needs to visit our wine supplier to negotiate the prices. Savaric knows this. I'm feeling so excited - I should go with Hamond, but I told him I need to take care of the inn while he's away. Savaric.. '";
+    mes "'Hamond won't be here tomorrow night - he needs to visit our wine supplier to negotiate the prices. Savaric knows this. I'm feeling so excited - I should go with Hamond, but I told him I need to take care of the inn while he's away. Savaric... '";
     next;
     mes "This is the last entry.";
     if (@reid != 6)