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-rw-r--r--npc/042-1/hasan.txt28
-rw-r--r--npc/042-1/kaan.txt36
-rw-r--r--npc/042-1/valon.txt2
3 files changed, 33 insertions, 33 deletions
diff --git a/npc/042-1/hasan.txt b/npc/042-1/hasan.txt
index db32179d..fc0bf6fd 100644
--- a/npc/042-1/hasan.txt
+++ b/npc/042-1/hasan.txt
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
"Why not?",-,
"Who says that?",-;
mes "[Unfriendly Guy]";
- mes "\"Me, Hasan the mighty, decided to put a toll on this way.\"";
+ mes "\"I, Hasan the Mighty, have decided to put a toll on this path.\"";
next;
L_Toll:
mes "[Hasan]";
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@ L_Toll:
if (zeny >= @toll)
menu
"Ok, here you go.",L_Pay,
- "What? I don't have so much money!",L_NoPay,
+ "What? I don't have that much money!",L_NoPay,
"We'll see if you can stop me!",L_Fight;
menu
- "What? I don't have so much money!",L_NoPay,
+ "What? I don't have that much money!",L_NoPay,
"We'll see if you can stop me!",L_Fight;
close;
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ L_Pay:
L_Cheat:
mes "[Hasan]";
- mes "\"Don't dare to cheat on me!\"";
+ mes "\"Don't you dare try to cheat me!\"";
close;
L_Trick:
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ L_Trick:
mes "\"Are you going to pay now? " + @toll + "GP, and I may let you pass.\"";
next;
menu
- "I don't have so much money!",L_NoPay,
+ "I don't have that much money!",L_NoPay,
"No. (Scratch your head.)",-;
if ($@scorp == 1) goto L_Wait;
mes "While you're scratching your head, you see Kaan coming nearer to the cliff above you.";
@@ -93,13 +93,13 @@ L_Trick:
L_Thank:
mes "[Hasan]";
mes "\"You - you saved me!";
- mes "I tried to get your money and you saved me!\"";
+ mes "I tried to take your money and you saved me!\"";
next;
mes "\"Hey, you're a really cool person.";
- mes "I mean, how you finished that ghastly scorpion!";
+ mes "I mean, the way you finished that ghastly scorpion!";
mes "Amazing!\"";
next;
- mes "\"I tell you something: Cool persons are allowed to pass for free.";
+ mes "\"Let me tell you a secret: Cool persons are allowed to pass for free.";
mes "And you can have my Sharp Knife.\"";
getitem "SharpKnife", 1;
next;
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ L_Thank:
menu
"Sure, thanks.",-,
"I'll try to find the way myself.",L_Explore,
- "Could you just explain me the way?",L_Directions;
+ "Could you just tell me the way?",L_Directions;
warp "001-1.gat", 44, 40;
close;
@@ -147,15 +147,15 @@ L_Tut_Done:
close;
L_Distance:
- mes "There is a person in some distance. He doesn't seem to notice you, maybe you should go closer.";
+ mes "There is a person off in the distance. He doesn't seem to notice you, maybe you should go closer.";
close;
L_Cliff_Up:
- mes "You see a guy in shaby clothes when you look down the cliff.";
+ mes "You see a guy in shabby clothes when you look down the cliff.";
close;
L_SummonAgain:
- message strcharinfo(0), "Kaan is mad with your interference! He comes near the cliff and throws a rock on the top of your head, and let another scorpion run just near Hasan!";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "Kaan is mad at you for your interference! He walks over to the edge of the cliff and throws a rock on top of your head, then lets another scorpion run just near Hasan!";
percentheal -100, 0;
attachrid(getcharid(3,$@ScorpionFighter$));
message strcharinfo(0), "Kaan: \"Just go while he is distracted and no one is interfering!\"";
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ L_Clean:
if (isloggedin(getcharid(3,$@ScorpionFighter$))==0) end;
attachrid(getcharid(3,$@ScorpionFighter$));
if (PC_DIE_COUNTER > $@ScorpDeath) goto L_MessageDeath;
- message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan, with his eyes almost closed, trembling with fear, runs toward the scorpion and stabs it with all his strenght! Seems like it took too long and the plan didn't work this time.";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan, with his eyes almost closed, trembling with fear, runs toward the scorpion and stabs it with all his strength! Seems like you took too long and the plan didn't work this time.";
warp "042-1.gat", 112, 64;
message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan: \"Hey you! I told you you cannot pass!\"";
set $@ScorpionFighter$, "";
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ L_Normal:
L_Scared:
warp "042-1.gat", 112, 64;
- message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan seems to be completely irrational. He waves his sharp knife in the air with his eyes closed and hits you. Maybe you shoudn't get too close or you are going to get hurt.";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan seems to be completely irrational. He waves his sharp knife in the air with his eyes closed and scratches you. Maybe you shouldn't get too close or you are going to get hurt.";
percentheal -10, 0;
end;
diff --git a/npc/042-1/kaan.txt b/npc/042-1/kaan.txt
index 494dc874..6b9e34ca 100644
--- a/npc/042-1/kaan.txt
+++ b/npc/042-1/kaan.txt
@@ -17,11 +17,11 @@
next;
mes "\"She was babbling at me about it all the morning until I sent her to take care of the maggots in the storehouse.\"";
next;
- mes "Kaan grins mischievous";
+ mes "Kaan grins mischieviously.";
mes "[Kaan]";
mes "\"She hates maggots.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Maybe you should go to see her, she was really upset about what happened with you.\"";
+ mes "\"Maybe you should go and see her...she was really upset about what happened to you.\"";
set kaan, 1;
if (tanisha >= 3)
goto L_Tanisha2;
@@ -43,42 +43,42 @@ L_Tanisha:
"Yeah, and she's done with the maggots.",-;
L_Tanisha3:
mes "[Kaan]";
- mes "\"Ah, that are good news.";
+ mes "\"Ah, that is good news.";
mes "You know, we have a lot of problems with bugs here.\"";
next;
mes "\"If we don't watch out the maggots will eat all of our stocks.";
mes "And the desert is crawling with scorpions.";
mes "They also come here and you need to watch out not to step on them.\"";
next;
- mes "\"But I took care about that problem.\"";
+ mes "\"But I took care of that problem.\"";
mes "He looks very proud.";
next;
mes "\"I build this fence to keep them out.\"";
next;
menu
- "Impressive! Just a bit... skew.",-,
+ "Impressive! Just a bit... skewed.",-,
"Wow, it looks very - ahm, unconventional.",-;
mes "[Kaan]";
mes "\"Well, it keeps the scorpions out. That's all that matters.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Are you going to visit main Tulimshar?";
- mes "The bazaar there is a wondeful place! Traders, entertainers, adventurers - it's very exciting there.\"";
+ mes "\"Are you going to visit Tulimshar?";
+ mes "The bazaar there is a wondeful place! Traders, entertainers, adventurers - it's very exciting.\"";
next;
mes "\"And Ian the trainer is hanging around there often. You should talk to him, he's a smart guy.\"";
set kaan, 2;
if (hasan)
menu
- "A guy named Hasan doesn't let me enter main Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
+ "A guy named Hasan won't let me enter Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
"Thanks for the advice.",L_Close;
close;
L_Out:
mes "[Kaan]";
- mes "\"Hello! How are you? Did you already visit main Tulimshar?\"";
+ mes "\"Hello! How are you? Did you already visit Tulimshar?\"";
next;
if (hasan)
menu
- "A guy named Hasan doesn't let me enter main Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
+ "A guy named Hasan won't let me enter Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
"Not yet.",L_Close;
menu
"Not yet.",L_Close;
@@ -86,18 +86,18 @@ L_Out:
L_Hasan:
mes "[Kaan]";
- mes "\"Hasan! That's crazy. He becomes more cheekily with every day.";
+ mes "\"Hasan! That's crazy. He becomes more cheeky with every day.";
mes "I'd like to help you, but - I won't risk an open confrontation with him.\"";
next;
mes "\"Sometimes he just freaks out and then he's dangerous.";
- mes "We should think about some trick. Ah, if I'd now what's his weak point.\"";
+ mes "We should think about some kind of trick. Ah, if only I knew his weak point.\"";
next;
- mes "\"He might listen to one of the adult men, but they're all off to work in main Tulimshar during the day.\"";
+ mes "\"He might listen to one of the adult men, but they're all off to work in Tulimshar during the day.\"";
set kaan, 3;
next;
L_Trick:
mes "[Kaan]";
- mes "\"Do you have an idea what Hasans weakness could be?";
+ mes "\"Do you have any idea what Hasans weakness could be?";
if (hasan < 2)
close;
next;
@@ -106,14 +106,14 @@ L_Trick:
"No idea.",L_Close;
mes "[Kaan]";
mes "\"Scorpions?! Right! How could I forget?";
- mes "When he was a child, he nearly died because he felt in a scorpion nest.\"";
+ mes "When he was a child, he nearly died because he fell into a scorpion nest.\"";
next;
L_Explain:
mes "\"Ok, then here's the plan:";
mes "I will catch one of the scorpions that's coming to the fence from the desert.\"";
next;
mes "\"You'll go to Hasan and give me a sign when you're ready.";
- mes "Let's say the sign is that you're scratching your head.";
+ mes "Lets say the sign is that you're scratching your head.";
mes "I'll watch you from this point.\"";
next;
mes "\"When you give me the sign, I'll throw the scorpion down on him.";
@@ -140,13 +140,13 @@ L_Hasan_Saved:
mes "\"I told you to pass when he's distracted, not to fight the scorpion!";
mes "But maybe Hasan is thankful now?\"";
next;
- mes "\"Maybe you should talk to him again.\"";
+ mes "\"Why don't you talk to him again and see what he says.\"";
close;
L_Tut_Done:
mes "[Kaan]";
mes "\"Hi there. I hope you enjoy your time in Tulimshar.";
- mes "Hasan is a real troublemaker, but it seems he calmed down now.\"";
+ mes "Hasan can be a real troublemaker, but it seems like he has calmed down for now.\"";
close;
L_Run:
diff --git a/npc/042-1/valon.txt b/npc/042-1/valon.txt
index 6ca6ff6a..7ebd6971 100644
--- a/npc/042-1/valon.txt
+++ b/npc/042-1/valon.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
next;
mes "\"It's crawling with scorpions, and the heat has overcome men tougher than you are.\"";
next;
- mes "\"If you really want to challenge the desert go to main Tulimshar first to prepare yourself.\"";
+ mes "\"If you really want to challenge the desert go to Tulimshar first to prepare yourself.\"";
close;
L_Tut_Done:
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