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authorThe Kandiman <kandiman@kandiman.(none)>2011-12-08 23:26:56 -0500
committerThe Kandiman <kandiman@kandiman.(none)>2011-12-08 23:26:56 -0500
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Minor spelling and grammar corrections for Christmas event.
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diff --git a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/doll.txt b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/doll.txt
index ba4f82b5..180f93f4 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/doll.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/doll.txt
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
if (@doll > 0) goto L_Ordered;
if (xmas11 & $@xmas11_talkedToChief) goto L_Helping;
- mes "This helper is very concentrated on his paperworks.";
+ mes "This helper is very focused on his paperworks.";
mes "[Busy Helper]";
mes "\"Ah! You startled me! I need to do some paperwork, please don't sneak up on me like that!\"";
goto L_Close;
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ L_Helping:
L_Ordered:
mes "[Taito]";
- mes "\"Oh? I'm sorry I was very concentrated. I don't have more tasks for you.\"";
+ mes "\"Oh? I'm sorry. I was concentrating. I don't have more tasks for you.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_NoEvent:
@@ -109,22 +109,22 @@ L_Doll:
getitem "Doll", 1;
mes "[Raimo]";
mes "\"Alright, let's start.\"";
- mes "He takes your items and start to many different things.";
- mes "He dyes the Cotton Cloths and while waiting for it to dry, he takes out a doll without hair, clothes and face from his workbench.";
+ mes "He takes your items and starts to do many different things.";
+ mes "He dyes the Cotton Cloths and while waiting for them to dry, he takes out a doll without hair, clothes or face from his workbench.";
mes "It seems he has already prepared that. He rummages in another drawer of his workbench and pulls out a ball of red wool.";
mes "While attaching strings of wool to the dolls head, he talks to you.";
next;
mes "[Raimo]";
- mes "\"You know, usually it's really fun to be one of Santa's helpers. But this year something's going really wrong. I wonder what's the reason for this.";
+ mes "\"You know, usually it's really fun to be one of Santa's helpers. But this year something's going really wrong. I wonder what the reason for this is.";
mes "All kind of material deliveries went wrong, the guys up in the office are all roused up because their paperwork got mixed up and I heard some of the Reinboos are lost!\"";
next;
mes "\"It's kind of odd, isn't it?\"";
- mes "While he is talking, he finishes attaching the hair and get to tailor a cute little dress from the dyed Cotton Cloths.";
+ mes "While he is talking, he finishes attaching the hair and tailors a cute little dress from the dyed Cotton Cloths.";
mes "He carefully puts on the dress and takes the Hard Spikes you gave him.";
next;
mes "[Raimo]";
mes "\"These spikes are excellent for making eyes, have a look.\"";
- mes "He takes a sharp knife and starts carving them. After a short while he has managed to bring them in a round shape, with a gap on the backside part. He takes a needle and sewing thread and attaches them to the doll's face.";
+ mes "He takes a sharp knife and starts carving them. After a short while he has managed to bring them into a round shape, with a gap on the backside part. He takes a needle and sewing thread and attaches them to the doll's face.";
next;
mes "[Raimo]";
mes "\"Alright, it's done. Could you please bring it to Aaron?\"";