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1 files changed, 42 insertions, 28 deletions

diff --git a/npc/007-1/dracoula.txt b/npc/007-1/dracoula.txt
index de24745e4..e62207c2a 100644
--- a/npc/007-1/dracoula.txt
+++ b/npc/007-1/dracoula.txt
@@ -3,37 +3,38 @@
 //  Saulc
 //  Jesusalva
 // Description:
-//      Dracoula is dayli npc, ask for bat teeth every 23 h
+//      Dracoula is daily npc, ask for bat teeth every 23 h
 // Variable:
 //      MineQuest_Dracoula
 
 007-1,165,99,0	script	Dracoula	NPC_ELVEN_FEMALE,{
-
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Hello adventurer! are you lost?.");
+    mesq lg("Hello adventurer! Are you lost?");
     next;
-    mesq l("It's not a place for unexperimpented people!");
+    mesq l("This is not a place for unexperimpented people!");
     next;
-    mesq l("Mine exit is top left!);
+    mesq l("Mine exit is top left!");
     if (BaseLevel >= 15) goto L_Menu;
     close;
 
 L_Menu:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("But now you're here. can you do me a favour? ");
+    mesq l("But as you're here now, could you do me a favour?");
     mes "";
     menu
-        l("Hum, Which type of favor?."),L_Quest, 
-        l("Can i found a mana source here?"),L_Mana,
-        l("Can i become miner?"),L_Miner,    
+        l("Hum, Which type of favor?."),L_Quest,
+        l("Can I found a mana source here?"),L_Mana,
+        l("Can I become miner?"),L_Miner,
         l("No, thanks. I gonna leave this place."),L_Close;
 
 L_Quest:
     mes "";
     .@q=getq(MineQuest_Dracoula);
-    mesq l("Nice! First let me introduce my self. I want you to kill some red scorpions, as I said!");
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("Nice! First let me introduce myself. I am Dracoula, a miner!");
     next;
-     mesq l("I'm Dracoula, i mine here since a while. My favorite activity it's to scarred others miners!");
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("I mine here since a while. My favorite activity it's to scare others miners!");
     next;
     if (.@q == 0) goto L_Continue;
     if (.@q == 1 && gettimetick(2) >= getq2(MineQuest_Dracoula) + 60 * 60 * 23) setq1 MineQuest_Dracoula, 2; // Repats every 23 hours
@@ -41,18 +42,18 @@ L_Quest:
     mesn;
     mesq l("But come back in a few hours, I didn't lost all @@!", getitemlink(BatTeeth));
     close;
-    
+
 L_Continue:
-    mesq l("I loved seeing their terrorize face.");
+    mesq l("I love seeing their terrorize face.");
     mes "";
     menu
         l("Ok. Cool life!"), L_Close,
-        l("Haha, Nice but how do ,you process ?"), L_Next;
-        
+        l("Haha, Nice, but how do you do that?"), L_Next;
+
 L_Next:
-    mesq l("I disguise myself into a giant mutated bat but everytime i broke or loose my fake teeth.");
+    mesq l("I disguise myself into a giant mutated bat but everytime i break or lose my fake teeth.");
     next;
-    mesq l("I usually ask advendurer for 11 @@, But new miners should arrive soon then i need to make them cry!", getitemlink(BatTeeth));
+    mesq l("I usually ask adventurers for 11 @@, but new miners should arrive soon. I need to make them cry!", getitemlink(BatTeeth));
     next;
     mesq l("Could be nice, if you can bring me 20 @@,", getitemlink(BatTeeth));
     mes "";
@@ -62,12 +63,16 @@ L_Next:
     close; // double sure
 
 L_Repeat:
-    mesq l("Oh its you XXXPLAYER NAME, I did not recognize you with your hat!"); // @jesusalva fix that plz <3 
+    mesn;
+    if (getequipid(EQI_HEAD_TOP) != 0)
+        mesq l("Oh its you @@, I did not recognize you with your hat!", strcharinfo(0));
+    else
+        mesq l("Oh its you @@, I did not recognize you without a hat!", strcharinfo(0));
     next;
-    mesq l("Do you have extra of 11 @@ for me ?", getitemlink(BatTeeth));
+    mesq l("Do you have an extra of 11 @@ for me?", getitemlink(BatTeeth));
     mes "";
     menu
-        rif(countitem(BatTeeth) >= 11, l("Yep, I bring them for you")), L_Finish2,
+        rif(countitem(BatTeeth) >= 11, l("Yep, I bring them for you!")), L_Finish2,
         l("Actually not."), L_Close;
     close;
 
@@ -85,30 +90,39 @@ L_Finish:
 // Repeat
 L_Finish2:
     delitem BatTeeth, 11;
-    getexp 275, 1; // 11 / 18% = 61 kills * 15 xp = 915 xp gained from killing. (30% bonus) 
+    getexp 275, 1; // 11 / 18% = 61 kills * 15 xp = 915 xp gained from killing. (30% bonus)
     Zeny = (Zeny + 120); // 3*11 = 33 base (x% bonus)
     setq MineQuest_Dracoula, 1, gettimetick(2);
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("So COOL Thanks! Come back later to bring me extra @@!", getitemlink(BatTeeth)) L_Close;
+    mesq l("So COOL Thanks! Come back later to bring me extra @@!", getitemlink(BatTeeth));
     close;
 
 L_Mana:
     mes "";
-    mesq l("Ah Actually nobody found one.");
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("Ah! Actually nobody found one.");
     next;
-    mes l(But i's ultimate goal of miners there.");
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("But it's ultimate goal of miners there.");
     next;
-    mes l(If one of us found a Mana fragment. he will become ritch");
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("If one of us found a Mana stone. They would become rich!");
+    next;
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("Twelve times more if it is an ellusive Mana Fragment no one knows where they are!");
     next;
-    mes l("That it is.");
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("That it is.");
     goto L_Menu;
-    
+
 L_Miner:
     mes "";
+    mesn;
     mesq l("You should ask Tycoon.");
     next;
-    mes l(He is Miner leader.");
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("He is the Miners leader.");
     goto L_Menu;
 
 L_Close: