Fix bugs so the Episode is complete

1 files changed, 4 insertions, 2 deletions

diff --git a/npc/017-3/doctor.txt b/npc/017-3/doctor.txt
index b456671fe..c35277edb 100644
--- a/npc/017-3/doctor.txt
+++ b/npc/017-3/doctor.txt
@@ -258,6 +258,7 @@ L_TimeFlask:
 
 /////// Epilogue
 L_Cont:
+    mes "";
     mesn;
     mesc l("The doctor quickly analyzes you with some tool. Which looks like a screwdriver? Probably just a generic scanner, though.");
     mesq l("Gimme a second... Yes, you seem to be fine now, very well, congratulations!");
@@ -319,7 +320,7 @@ L_Cont:
             mesq l("For example, when an item is dropped to the ground, it rots away and disappear. It cannot be recovered. If an item were to break such rule, Mr. Saves would intervene.");
             next;
             mesn;
-            mesq l("He has a few chosen ones to whom he granted what we call \"SQL Magic\". And \"GM Magic\" is the imitation of that.");
+            mesq l("He is by far the most powerful, and has a few chosen ones to whom he granted what we call \"SQL Magic\". Everyone envies power, so there's the imitation of that, \"GM Magic\", but unrelated to Mr. Saves.");
             next;
             mesn;
             mesq l("Next we have %s. It guards the world itself and grants all kinds of magic.", b(l("The Mana Source")));
@@ -328,7 +329,7 @@ L_Cont:
             mesq l("Then we have %s. You met her. She guards all Talpan beings, such as Humans, Elves, Reidys, Orcs and whatever. She is an evil woman. She grants nothing to her followers.", b(l("Elli")));
             next;
             mesn;
-            mesq l("I miss Ms. De'Kagen, she was very benevolent but from another world. Why does this one only have annoying pricks for Originals. Wait, I'm sidetracked.");
+            mesq l("I miss Ms. De'Kagen, she was very benevolent but from another world. Why does this one only have annoying pricks for Originals. Wait, I'm getting sidetracked.");
             next;
             mesn;
             mesq l("The last one is %s. You will meet him in the future, so no spoilers. Time traveler word.", b(l("The Moubootaur")));
@@ -346,6 +347,7 @@ L_Cont:
     next;
     mesn;
     mesq l("After the Great Fire... you don't find our world's Elli ever again.");
+    // The Great Fire is her final act. Elli is declared dead shortly after. The causes of her death are unknown but certainly violent. She likely knew her time was coming, and wanted both to get rid of the Soul Eater before this, as to ensure no one would miss her, adding her along the list of those claimed by the fire.
     next;
     mesn;
     mesq l("Keep following the path. Take this and... good luck.");