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diff --git a/npc/024-16/king.txt b/npc/024-16/king.txt index 676e61fe8..4790b7f96 100644 --- a/npc/024-16/king.txt +++ b/npc/024-16/king.txt @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ mesq l("Hello."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("Yes. Frostia is a city-estate, and is ruled by me, King Gelid Frozenheart II."); + mesq l("Yes. Frostia is a city-state, and ruled by me, King Gelid Frozenheart II."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); mesq l("Is this letter yours? Very well, let me read."); @@ -44,19 +44,22 @@ mesq lg("I'm quite interested in you, mah' girl!", "I'm quite interested in you, mah' boy!"); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("So, only citzens, elves and dwarves are normally welcome here and I'm NOT going to make you an exception."); + mesq l("So, only citzens, elves and dwarves are normally welcome here and I'm NOT going to make an exception."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); mesq l("In the ")+b(l("southwest part of the town"))+l(" is the Inn, and you can rent an apartment there for 30 days."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("If you rent an apartment, you'll become a \"citzen\" and be allowed here. Besides, you can buy stuff in your apartment to, for example, craft stuff."); + mesq l("If you rent an apartment, you'll become a \"citzen\" and be allowed here. Besides, you can buy stuff in your apartment to, for example, craft supplies."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("Did I said the best craftsman and craftswoman in the world are here? @@, the legendary bow, was proudly crafted by the first king of Frostia!", getitemlink(Tyranny)); + mesq l("Did I said the best craftspeople in the world are here? %s, the legendary bow, was proudly crafted by the first king of Frostia!", getitemlink(Tyranny)); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("He is not alive anymore, so only a single bow of those exist in the whole world... That is why we call it a ")+b(l("legendary weapon")); + mesq l("He died many moons ago and his masterwork, Tyranny, will remain one of a kind forever... That is why we call it a ")+b(l("legendary weapon")+"."); + next; + mesc l("Legendary weapons can not be duplicated in any form, so only a single person in the world can own it at a time."); + mesc l("Should the owner go missing for over a month, the legendary weapon returns to its original place and can be claimed by someone else."); next; // Finish the quest setq General_Narrator, 13; @@ -81,7 +84,10 @@ L_Continue: mesq l("Great, I see you've already made yourself comfortable!"); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("Do not hesit to purchase furniture. The furniture belongs to the house, so if you lose the house, you'll lose it, too. But apartments are never rent to someone else!"); + mesq l("Do not hesitate to purchase furniture, it will help you tremendously in preparing for your ardous journey."); + next; + mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); + mesq l("Keep in mind that unlike houses, furniture acquired by previous owners will not be present."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); mesq l("Bah, sorry my manners! I love to chat! Anyway, talk to any General of mine, just behind me. See if they need help."); @@ -102,19 +108,30 @@ L_Campaign: // Long intro until you defeat the Yeti. if (!.@q) { mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("Listen. North of here, is the ruins of an old village. Said village is cursed, and nobody here wants to go there."); + mesq l("Listen. North of here, are the ruins of an old village. Said village is cursed, and nobody wants to go there."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("But if you're looking to go to the World Edge, the place where THE WORLD WILL DIE, I guess you are immune to rumors."); + mesq l("But if you're looking to go to the World Edge, the place where THE FATE OF THE WORLD WILL BE DECIDED..."); + select + l("Really?!"), + l("[Say nothing]"); + mes ""; + switch (@menu) { + case 1: + mesc l("He laughs."); + mesq lg("I'm just joking, mah' girl!", "I'm just joking, mah' boy!"); + case 2: + mesq l("I guess you are immune to rumors and scary stories."); + } next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("I would bring @@, just in case. Anyway, the place where you're going to is the village where @@ was born.", getitemlink(Coffee), b(l("the Monster King"))); + mesq l("I would bring some %s, just in case. Anyway, the place where you're going to is the village where %s was born.", getitemlink(Coffee), b(l("the Monster King"))); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("I've sent a scout ahead of you, and he reported traps in the caves you'll be needing to use to get there."); + mesq l("I've sent a scout ahead, and he reported traps in the caves you'll be needing to traverse to get there."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("As you can guess, said village was abandoned. However, people are claiming to have seen people walking there, like shadows or zombies."); + mesq l("As you can guess, the village was abandoned. However, people are claiming to have seen people walking there, maybe shadows or zombies."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); mesq l("As a King, I cannot simply ignore it. Of course, I really doubt it is zombies, but nobody wants to go. That's why I'm resorting to an adventurer like you."); @@ -165,10 +182,10 @@ L_Report: mesq l("What?! This changes the whole history. Not only that, but this is a serious issue!"); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("I thought I was going to send you in a nest of Yetis, but instead, I've sent you straight to the birthplace of Bandits and Assassins."); + mesq l("I thought I was going to send you into a nest of Yetis, but instead, I've sent you straight to the birthplace of Bandits and Assassins."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("Blue Sage will want to know this, I'll write him a letter."); + mesq l("The Blue Sage will want to know this, I'll write him a letter."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); mesq l("Now, listen to me. I know I promised to bring you to the World's Edge."); @@ -177,7 +194,7 @@ L_Report: mesq l("Truth is - I cannot do that. Obviously. But I know who can."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("Do you know Land Of Fire Village? It is west of Hurnscald and is a major town."); + mesq l("Do you know the Land Of Fire Village? It is west of Hurnscald and a major town."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); mesq l("It only loses to Tulimshar, as far as political and economical importance goes."); @@ -186,7 +203,7 @@ L_Report: mesq l("Go to the townhall there and show the mayor this other letter."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("They will try to prove your worth before, though. So be ready."); + mesq l("You need to prove your worth once again, though. So be ready."); next; mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); mesq l("Good luck on your journey!"); @@ -209,7 +226,7 @@ L_Complete: cwarp "023-3", 63, 219; if (@menu == 2) { mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); - mesq l("It is one of the five legendary weapons. Legend says it was hidden in a tree on Aethyr, and will be given to the one who proves to be an excelent archer."); + mesq l("It is one of the five legendary weapons. Legend says it was hidden in a tree on Aethyr, and will be given to the one who proves to be an excellent archer."); next; if ($GAME_STORYLINE < 4) { mesn l("King Gelid Frozenheart"); |