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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/011-3_Hermits_cave')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt | 20 |
1 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt b/npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt index 6dccccf4..4b582cc4 100644 --- a/npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt +++ b/npc/011-3_Hermits_cave/hermit.txt @@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ mes "[Arkim the Hermit]"; mes "\"Do you want to go back outside?\""; menu - "Yes please", L_Sure, - "Not yet", -, + "Yes, please!", L_Sure, + "Not yet.", -, "Actually... Why do you live here?", L_Interested; close; @@ -15,32 +15,32 @@ L_Sure: L_Interested: mes "[Arkim the Hermit]"; - mes "\"Oh my, never really thought about it\""; + mes "\"Oh my, never really thought about it!\""; next; mes "[Arkim the Hermit]"; - mes "\"I guess mostly I enjoy experimenting with bats here\""; + mes "\"I guess mostly I enjoy experimenting with the bats here.\""; menu - "I see", -, + "I see...", -, "What type of experimenting?", L_Experiment; close; L_Experiment: mes "[Arkim the Hermit]"; - mes "\"Never really thought about it...\""; + mes "\"Never really thought about it either...\""; next; - mes "*You watch as his old, lazy eyes open wide. And the old man comes alive with engery*"; + mes "You watch as the hermit's old, lazy eyes open wide, and the old man comes alive with energy."; next; mes "[Arkim the Hermit]"; - mes "\"I GUESS I REALLY LIKE CUTTING THEM UP TO SEE HOW THEY WORK!! HAHAHA!\""; + mes "\"I GUESS I REALLY LIKE CUTTING THEM UP TO SEE HOW THEY WORK!! HAHAHA!\""; menu "YOU'RE CRAZY!", -, - "Right... me too. Can I help?", L_Quest; + "Right... me too! Can I help?", L_Quest; close; L_Quest: @@ -57,6 +57,6 @@ L_Quest: next; mes "[Arkim the Hermit]"; - mes "\"And remember never lend your tooth brush to a slime!\""; + mes "\"And remember: never lend your toothbrush to a slime!\""; close; } |