summaryrefslogtreecommitdiff
path: root/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt
diff options
context:
space:
mode:
authorFrost <networktoy@cox.net>2012-03-19 16:04:19 -0700
committerJessica Tölke <jtoelke@mail.upb.de>2012-03-20 14:09:22 +0100
commitc4558a5549d5fe22fae68f1ce92da0a2c6f62bc5 (patch)
tree391f84794d7ec9a5deac39cf2b7c77005eb1e222 /world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt
parentdc2d7158f90ace751fa08def872299e0514dded0 (diff)
downloadserverdata-c4558a5549d5fe22fae68f1ce92da0a2c6f62bc5.tar.gz
serverdata-c4558a5549d5fe22fae68f1ce92da0a2c6f62bc5.tar.bz2
serverdata-c4558a5549d5fe22fae68f1ce92da0a2c6f62bc5.tar.xz
serverdata-c4558a5549d5fe22fae68f1ce92da0a2c6f62bc5.zip
Spell check of new and updated Tulimshar NPCs. -Frost
Diffstat (limited to 'world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt')
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt22
1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt b/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt
index 88ab1d42..a0313b32 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ L_Annual: // @state == 2
callsub S_Update_Mask;
mes "[Tinris]";
mes "\"Oh, thank you! You saved me!";
- mes "Alright, now we can start with the magic fertilizer.\"";
+ mes "All right, now we can start with the magic fertilizer.\"";
next;
L_FirstTry: // @state == 3
mes "[Tinris]";
@@ -96,9 +96,9 @@ L_FirstTry: // @state == 3
misceffect sfx_magic_nature;
next;
mes "[Tinris]";
- mes "\"Ok. This should do it. But I'm not sure. I'm still working on the researches about this topic.";
+ mes "\"Ok. This should do it. But I'm not sure. I'm still researching this topic.";
mes "Here, bring this to Anwar.\"";
- mes "He gives you some bottle with the magic fertilizer. You put it away in a seperate pocket, so it doesn't get mixed with your inventory.";
+ mes "He gives you a bottle with the magic fertilizer. You put it away in a separate pocket, so it doesn't get mixed with your inventory.";
goto L_Close;
L_FirstTryDone: // @state >= 4 but below 6
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ L_FirstTryDone: // @state >= 4 but below 6
callsub S_Update_Mask;
L_SecondTry: // @state == 6
mes "[Tinris]";
- mes "\"Oh no! Alright, we need to do another try.";
+ mes "\"Oh no! All right, we need to do another try.";
mes "Bring me " + @slime_amount2 + " Maggot Slimes, " + @bugleg_amount2 + " Bug Legs, " + @stinger_amount2 + " Scorpion Stingers, " + @ash_amount2 + " Piles of Ash and " + @cactusp_amount + " Cactus Potion.\"";
menu
"Here it is.",-,
@@ -129,31 +129,31 @@ L_SecondTry: // @state == 6
mes "Tinris takes the things and starts to mix and mumble again.";
misceffect sfx_magic_nature;
next;
- mes "I takes quite a while.";
+ mes "It takes quite a while.";
next;
mes "He looks rather stressed while working on the mixture.";
next;
mes "He sighs.";
mes "[Tinris]";
- mes "\"Mh, I think the mixture itself is good. But I can't get the spells right. Maybe you should ask Professor Eomie to cast it, she's a genius regarding nature magic.\"";
+ mes "\"Mh, I think the mixture itself is good. But I can't get the spells right. Maybe you should ask Professor Eomie to cast it; she's a genius with nature magic.\"";
mes "He gives you the bottle with the magic fertilizer.";
goto L_Close;
L_Eomie: // @state >= 7 but below 9
mes "[Tinris]";
- mes "\"I did the best I could. But it seems I'm not experienced enough to cast the spells correctly. Better ask Professor Eomie for help.\"";
+ mes "\"I did the best I could, but it seems I'm not experienced enough to cast the spells correctly. Better ask Professor Eomie for help.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_FertilizerDone: // @state == 9
mes "[Tinris]";
- mes "\"I heard Eomie casted the spell? I really hope it'll work this time. Bring the magic fertilizer to Anwar now.\"";
+ mes "\"I heard Eomie cast the spell? I really hope it'll work this time. Bring the magic fertilizer to Anwar now.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_GiveGift: // @state == 11
mes "[Tinris]";
mes "\"Ah, did Anwar try the new fertilizer?\"";
menu
- "Yes, it works great and he sent me to give you this selfmade Green V-Neck Sweater.",-,
+ "Yes, it works great and he asked me to give you this Green V-Neck Sweater he made.",-,
"Not yet.",L_Close;
if (countitem("GreenVNeckSweater") < 1)
goto L_NoItem;
@@ -167,8 +167,8 @@ L_GiveGift: // @state == 11
L_Done: // @state >= 12
mes "[Tinris]";
- mes "\"My girlfriend was very happy about the Chocolate Cake and Professor Eomie was happy about my work on the magic fertilizer.\"";
- mes "He twinkels.";
+ mes "\"My girlfriend was delighted with the Chocolate Cake and Professor Eomie was happy with my work on the magic fertilizer.\"";
+ mes "He twinkles.";
mes "[Tinris]";
mes "\"We're a good team.\"";
goto L_Close;