Language checks and standardization++.

2 files changed, 11 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt b/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt
index 158b79fc..8233611d 100644
--- a/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt
+++ b/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt
@@ -4,37 +4,33 @@
 
 	if (TMW_Quest >= 38) goto L_Finished;
 
-	mes "[Chest]";
-	mes "Would you try to open it?";
+	mes "There is a chest here.";
+	mes "Do you want to try to open it?";
 	next;
 	menu
-		"Yes", L_Yes,
-		"No", -;
+		"Yes.", L_Yes,
+		"No.", -;
 	close;
 
 L_Yes:
 	if(countitem("TreasureKey") < 3) goto L_Not_Enough;
 	getinventorylist;
 	if (@inventorylist_count == 100 && countitem("TreasureKey") > 3) goto L_TooMany;
-	mes "[Chest]";
-	mes "You opened it and found a short bow!";
+	mes "You opened the chest and found a short bow!";
 	delitem "TreasureKey", 3;
 	getitem "ShortBow", 1;
 	set TMW_Quest, 38;
 	close;
 
 L_Not_Enough:
-        mes "[Chest]";
-	mes "It seems that this is not the right key...";
+	mes "It seems that you do not the right key for this chest yet...";
 	close;
 
 L_Finished:
-        mes "[Chest]";
-        mes "You already opened this chest.";
+        mes "You have already opened this chest.";
         close;
 
 L_TooMany:
-        mes "[Chest]";
-        mes "You don't have room for what ever is inside. Maybe you should try again later.";
+        mes "You do not have enough room to loot this chest. Maybe you should try again later.";
 	close;
 }
diff --git a/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt b/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt
index 9fbaea89..91350e21 100644
--- a/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt
+++ b/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 	if (TMW_Quest == 38) goto L_Sema_GCM;
 
 	mes "[Sema the Miner]";
-	mes "\"This place is odd.  There is a chest somewhere in this palace, but I don't know where.  I think the archants have eaten all the spare keys for the chest.\"";
+	mes "\"This place is odd.  There is a chest somewhere in this palace, but I don't know where.  I think the archants have eaten all the spare keys for the chest, too.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Sema_GCM:
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ L_Sema_Yes:
 	set TMW_Quest, 39;
 	monster "002-4.gat", 70, 90, "", 1059, 1;
 	mes "[Sema the Miner]";
-	mes "\"Good luck.  To prove you killed it, please bring the iten it swallowed when it ate the miner.  Be careful, there could be more than one.\"";
+	mes "\"Good luck.  To prove you killed it, please bring the [Iten] it swallowed when it ate the miner.  Be careful, there could be more than one.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Sema_Happy:
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ L_Sema_Happy:
 	getitem "DesertShirt", 1;
 	set TMW_Quest, 40;
 	mes "[Sema the Miner]";
-	mes "\"You killed it! As a reward for helping me, take this desert shirt\"";
+	mes "\"You killed it!  What a relief!  Please accept this [Desert Shirt] as reward.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Sema_TooMany: