From 4eed1c99a669e5a8dc331ba34e8bbe8867be21b4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Sini Ruohomaa Date: Mon, 23 Aug 2010 23:31:01 +0300 Subject: Language checks and standardization++. --- npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt | 20 ++++++++------------ npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/002-4_Desert_mines') diff --git a/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt b/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt index 158b79fc..8233611d 100644 --- a/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt +++ b/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/chest.txt @@ -4,37 +4,33 @@ if (TMW_Quest >= 38) goto L_Finished; - mes "[Chest]"; - mes "Would you try to open it?"; + mes "There is a chest here."; + mes "Do you want to try to open it?"; next; menu - "Yes", L_Yes, - "No", -; + "Yes.", L_Yes, + "No.", -; close; L_Yes: if(countitem("TreasureKey") < 3) goto L_Not_Enough; getinventorylist; if (@inventorylist_count == 100 && countitem("TreasureKey") > 3) goto L_TooMany; - mes "[Chest]"; - mes "You opened it and found a short bow!"; + mes "You opened the chest and found a short bow!"; delitem "TreasureKey", 3; getitem "ShortBow", 1; set TMW_Quest, 38; close; L_Not_Enough: - mes "[Chest]"; - mes "It seems that this is not the right key..."; + mes "It seems that you do not the right key for this chest yet..."; close; L_Finished: - mes "[Chest]"; - mes "You already opened this chest."; + mes "You have already opened this chest."; close; L_TooMany: - mes "[Chest]"; - mes "You don't have room for what ever is inside. Maybe you should try again later."; + mes "You do not have enough room to loot this chest. Maybe you should try again later."; close; } diff --git a/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt b/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt index 9fbaea89..91350e21 100644 --- a/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt +++ b/npc/002-4_Desert_mines/miners.txt @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ if (TMW_Quest == 38) goto L_Sema_GCM; mes "[Sema the Miner]"; - mes "\"This place is odd. There is a chest somewhere in this palace, but I don't know where. I think the archants have eaten all the spare keys for the chest.\""; + mes "\"This place is odd. There is a chest somewhere in this palace, but I don't know where. I think the archants have eaten all the spare keys for the chest, too.\""; close; L_Sema_GCM: @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ L_Sema_Yes: set TMW_Quest, 39; monster "002-4.gat", 70, 90, "", 1059, 1; mes "[Sema the Miner]"; - mes "\"Good luck. To prove you killed it, please bring the iten it swallowed when it ate the miner. Be careful, there could be more than one.\""; + mes "\"Good luck. To prove you killed it, please bring the [Iten] it swallowed when it ate the miner. Be careful, there could be more than one.\""; close; L_Sema_Happy: @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ L_Sema_Happy: getitem "DesertShirt", 1; set TMW_Quest, 40; mes "[Sema the Miner]"; - mes "\"You killed it! As a reward for helping me, take this desert shirt\""; + mes "\"You killed it! What a relief! Please accept this [Desert Shirt] as reward.\""; close; L_Sema_TooMany: -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2